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840837

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Posted: 7 years ago

#51

Thanks @ adventure_gurl Some awesome ideas there!❤️ I will try and incorporate these too. I did have an idea for avni having a medical emergency in the upcoming chapters...so will see neil being freaked out, concerned and caring at that point definitely! got a lot of ideas but its tough to actually sit down and write them 😆and for some reason with every chapter i feel like the number of readers is reducing so sometimes I don't feel inspired enough...

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srinithi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#52

This is unfair . I want Neil-Neela having their mother-son time 🤪Neil Swetha se jyada Neela ka beta lagta hai

Party idea was awesome . Avni is someone who can't be judged .She learnt to play within a month. Wah! Ungli pakadke from Neerja is also good .

How is miss DD in every function of Khanna house . He is such an integral part of AvNeil love story who have seen their growth from strangers to arch rivals to friends to lovers .

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840837

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Posted: 7 years ago

#53

@Agnes ya ungli pakadke (from neerja😊 ) is a great song i agree, but thats more applicable literally to ayesh ma na...for neela i wanted a song that could show the fact that their relationship was more than just the regular mother daughter thing. neela is the reason for the way things have turned out so amazingly in avni's life.

for me there's no khanna house function without ALi or DD. they are family too.

and for shweta i have an elaborate chapter planned ahead. its actually avni- shweta but i'll include neil too!

i have an idea for a chapter with DD and with Ali as well. so stay tuned

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srinithi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: neeraja91
@Agnes ya ungli pakadke (from neerja😊 ) is a great song i agree, but thats more applicable literally to ayesh ma na...for neela i wanted a song that could show the fact that their relationship was more than just the regular mother daughter thing. neela is the reason for the way things have turned out so amazingly in avni's life.
for me there's no khanna house function without ALi or DD. they are family too.
and for shweta i have an elaborate chapter planned ahead. its actually avni- shweta but i'll include neil too!
i have an idea for a chapter with DD and with Ali as well. so stay tuned

Also I would love if you bring Aman release. They have forgotten him totally !

I am impatient for Ali and DD. I would love to read DD and Avni playing prank on Neil like they did in Coorg .

Swetha will be excited more than anyone to spend time with her Bahu 😆

I was asking of Neil and Neela bond . I have a suggestion. L let them play a game with Neil & Neela as a team and Swetha & Avni a team . I enjoy this combination 😆 We can have cricket or kabaddi match

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840837

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Posted: 7 years ago

#55

@agnes your suggestions have been duly noted sweety!neil-neela bonding moments toh show me dikh gaye...in fact i think even more than avni neela! 😆 but definitely i will incorporate the mom switch n the next family bonding chapter! and yes i will consider getting aman out of jail too! 😆

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srinithi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: neeraja91
@agnes your suggestions have been duly noted sweety!neil-neela bonding moments toh show me dikh gaye...in fact i think even more than avni neela! 😆 but definitely i will incorporate the mom switch n the next family bonding chapter! and yes i will consider getting aman out of jail too! 😆

Actually I doubt at times whether Neil is Swetha's son or Neela's 😆 They think alike and act alike . And their bond like college buddies are heartwarming.

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firsttimehere

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Posted: 7 years ago

#57

Hi Neerja , Long time .. I am so sorry for being MIA after my last post on this thread .. real life got hectic with guests pouring in at home ..

Read through all the updates and I am so very happy I have done that ..coz I am getting to see everything that I ever wanted to see on the show .. thank you so much for penning down such lovely chapters ..

Best parts for me would be how you have brought in normalcy in avneils life and family bonding .. after the miserable trials and tribulations of their life , they really deserve this happiness , Avni deserves her happy family and am so glad she is getting it here and so is Neela .. as the dailouge of Neela in the show says .. her saalon ka tapasya safal hua ..in this FF where finally Avni is having a normal family and normal life outside the tag of being illegitimate or a curse like she was called all her life by the society and DVM ..

I just can't stop praising the Lovely father daughter , mother daughter , Avneil as a couple , Avni and the Khannas bonds that you have explored in this story and also the fact that Avni has a job and a life apart from her family and no missions ..

Like Agnesfan mentioned in couple of her posts .. even I want to see Avni's pregnancy and motherhood sometime later in the story .. I love your idea of exploring their life as a couple meanwhile .. its my wish list as well to see normal husband wife fight between avneil , helpful hubby moments ( like you guys already mentioned ) , I want Avni to perform /win awards and have her whole family to come and cheer her up ( especially Neil and prakash papa - the most important men of her life now - she had always wanted Ashish to be there for her big ocassions in childhood .. now I want to see her having that wish fulfilled with Prakash papa ) .. I can go on and on ..but at the moment I can only think of these 😆

I read your note as well .. please don't feel bad .. am sorry for not have been regular ..but I really love this story and will be sad if ever you stop this .. I love the length and the depth of emotions you explore in your writing and I will be looking forward to read more from you ..About the drama and sadness part we already have enough drama on the show so am glad to read the happy moments .. but yeah may be some updates down the line you please bring in the regular fights in a couple or a household or even between mil and dil .. and how Avneil tackle those .. 😊

PS : Am sorry for the long post ..did not realize it's gotten so long 😆

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Nairagoenka2606

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Posted: 7 years ago

#58

Loveddd the idea of surprise by Avni...

Avni playing guitar👏👏...

Avni and neelama bond is amazing and I loved how u showed it to us...

And Lastly Avneil nok-jhok was icing on the cake...❤️

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840837

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: firsttimehere
Hi Neerja , Long time .. I am so sorry for being MIA after my last post on this thread .. real life got hectic with guests pouring in at home ..
Read through all the updates and I am so very happy I have done that ..coz I am getting to see everything that I ever wanted to see on the show .. thank you so much for penning down such lovely chapters ..

Best parts for me would be how you have brought in normalcy in avneils life and family bonding .. after the miserable trials and tribulations of their life , they really deserve this happiness , Avni deserves her happy family and am so glad she is getting it here and so is Neela .. as the dailouge of Neela in the show says .. her saalon ka tapasya safal hua ..in this FF where finally Avni is having a normal family and normal life outside the tag of being illegitimate or a curse like she was called all her life by the society and DVM ..

I just can't stop praising the Lovely father daughter , mother daughter , Avneil as a couple , Avni and the Khannas bonds that you have explored in this story and also the fact that Avni has a job and a life apart from her family and no missions ..

Like Agnesfan mentioned in couple of her posts .. even I want to see Avni's pregnancy and motherhood sometime later in the story .. I love your idea of exploring their life as a couple meanwhile .. its my wish list as well to see normal husband wife fight between avneil , helpful hubby moments ( like you guys already mentioned ) , I want Avni to perform /win awards and have her whole family to come and cheer her up ( especially Neil and prakash papa - the most important men of her life now - she had always wanted Ashish to be there for her big ocassions in childhood .. now I want to see her having that wish fulfilled with Prakash papa ) .. I can go on and on ..but at the moment I can only think of these 😆

I read your note as well .. please don't feel bad .. am sorry for not have been regular ..but I really love this story and will be sad if ever you stop this .. I love the length and the depth of emotions you explore in your writing and I will be looking forward to read more from you ..About the drama and sadness part we already have enough drama on the show so am glad to read the happy moments .. but yeah may be some updates down the line you please bring in the regular fights in a couple or a household or even between mil and dil .. and how Avneil tackle those .. 😊

PS : Am sorry for the long post ..did not realize it's gotten so long 😆

First of all welcome back to the forum and now it's no longer ur first time here! (Pun intended😆)thank you very much for taking time out to comment and also mentioning what you liked. It means a lot to me! There's no greater satisfaction than seeing people like your work and especially people who take the effort to drop a comment and when it's as detailed as yours it really makes me feel that you truly liked the story! And that genuinely makes me very happy! I have made a note of the suggestions all of you have made and I will definitely try to incorporate that into my FF in the upcoming chapters.Like I said earlier ideas toh bharpur Hain but to sit down and write it I need some inspiration and flow! Like the neela chapter was purely a result of watching some old scenes And missing neelama. I hadintended to have avni actually learn the guitar for Neel but then I figured she can always do that again but neelama deserves something special!

So I adapted that idea into this chapter.

Anyway, stay tuned for more updates. I don't intend to stop the FF but definitely sometimes the lack of responses makes you feel as a writer that maybe the FF is not really working! But it's ok..mainly I write for myself so I will pukka write more

. But can't deny that getting more comments would be a huge impetus to writing more frequently that's all!😊

Thanks once again for all your feedback. i really appreciate it! much love to you.❤️