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Posted: 7 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: rilsaf
Wow it's so cute update.
Avneil r always babies.😳
They look very happy and tension free.
Ur update always makes me happy.
Thank u so much dear.🤗
Already read two times.👏

Thanks so much for always leaving me a comment every single time! I always look forward to reading your feedback and I'm glad you liked it enough to read it twice and that it made you happy. That's my biggest reason to write...to be happy and tension free and see some of the Avneil moments that I'd like to but I know won't happen on the show! Much love and 🤗 to you too!

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#42

Originally posted by: rinku95
Amazing
Continue soon

Thank you very much Rinku! Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for commenting!

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#43

Originally posted by: Nairagoenka2606
It was so good..
Finally the happy family moments...
Loved the idea of date👏...
Avni being childish and enjoying the moments which she couldn't in her childhood...
And Lastly the father-daughter bond...
Just loved it...👏

Thank you very much!! I'm really glad you liked it. As always your comments are super sweet and nice and put a smile on my face! 😊

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Posted: 7 years ago

#44

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Hi guys, just wanted to check with you guys-

Is the FF too long and rambling? Should I edit the unnecessary words?

Is it too superficial and fluffy. Would you like to see some angst and sadness also in future?

If you have any suggestions/criticism also please do share it.

Please drop a comment or PM me so that I can write better next time.

Thanks

Edited by neeraja91 - 7 years ago

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srinithi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#45

Loved this carefree side of avni and Hitler when it comes to her papa ji health . Always yearned to watch something similar to the show . Poor girl had missed many things in life.

AvNeil honeymoon 😆

Definitely would wanna see AvNeil pillu 😆 Or Avni's pregnancy n mood swings.

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#46

@Agnes. thank you!

will definitely write an avneil pregnancy one..but towards the end. i want avneil to enjoy some moments of their own first.and settle in terms of their career and all. but haan i'd definitely write a pregnancy chapter at some point.

as for honeymoon, i had written a road trip FF before which was my take on an atrangi honeymoon but I guess I can think of another trip for them to take. i was anyway planning to have them learn italian and send them to rome and venice...so i'll do that in one of my chapters.

thanks for the suggestions. duly noted:)

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Posted: 7 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: neeraja91
@Agnes. thank you!
will definitely write an avneil pregnancy one..but towards the end. i want avneil to enjoy some moments of their own first.and settle in terms of their career and all. but haan i'd definitely write a pregnancy chapter at some point.
as for honeymoon, i had written a road trip FF before which was my take on an atrangi honeymoon but I guess I can think of another trip for them to take. i was anyway planning to have them learn italian and send them to rome and venice...so i'll do that in one of my chapters.
thanks for the suggestions. duly noted:)

If you have decided to send them to Europe then try Greece. Such a beautiful city !

Italian! Have you been to Italy?

Definitely I will wait for them to settle in their career. Also Avni can win best employee award not Neil can get a star added to his uniform. I wanted either to win award and experience the reaction of the other.

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#48

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

If you have decided to send them to Europe then try Greece. Such a beautiful city !
Italian! Have you been to Italy?

Definitely I will wait for them to settle in their career. Also Avni can win best employee award not Neil can get a star added to his uniform. I wanted either to win award and experience the reaction of the other.

Are you like a mind reader?!😆 I had the award winning thing planned out in my head...in fact i had suggested Riya also to write a shade of proud hubby Neil based on this idea in her FF.

And I thought of italy because i have visited the 2 places and also because in my previous chapter with 20qs i had them talk about wanting to learn a different language and somehow at that point i thought of Italian!

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Posted: 7 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: neeraja91

Are you like a mind reader?!😆 I had the award winning thing planned out in my head...in fact i had suggested Riya also to write a shade of proud hubby Neil based on this idea in her FF.
And I thought of italy because i have visited the 2 places and also because in my previous chapter with 20qs i had them talk about wanting to learn a different language and somehow at that point i thought of Italian!

Great minds think alike 😆

I suggested Greece coz it was so good when I saw it in YRKKH .Breathtaking.

Your wish .I am happy with any

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Posted: 7 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: neeraja91
@Agnes. thank you!
will definitely write an avneil pregnancy one..but towards the end. i want avneil to enjoy some moments of their own first.and settle in terms of their career and all. but haan i'd definitely write a pregnancy chapter at some point.
as for honeymoon, i had written a road trip FF before which was my take on an atrangi honeymoon but I guess I can think of another trip for them to take. i was anyway planning to have them learn italian and send them to rome and venice...so i'll do that in one of my chapters.
thanks for the suggestions. duly noted:)

agreed I have been to Rome but not Venice. would love to see their honeymoon, Neil taking care of Avni when she gets sick due to exertion, and helps her finish her presentation or she forgets something at home and he brings it to her just in time and etc, she can help him with a case or bring him lunch at work or something

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