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Posted: 7 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: TSharan
Neerja...Not sure about other writers but there are very few stories I read in this forum and yours is one of them. I love how you have carried post jail story forward, the family bond, Avneil's love, a bit misunderstanding, Neil trying to make up, the telescope update was esp good and unique. I don't comment everytime but I always read your updates and look forward to them.

So not sure what I want you to improve...for me it's going great!!

thank you so much @Tsharan. I understand its not possible to always drop a comment. but i know you at least like the story so that's good too. thank you! its just that even the number of likes on every story is like only 15 max. i do value those 15..i really do. but i'm greedy! i wish that number was higher. i'm really glad that you are liking the story. thank you for following it! i hope that whatever I write in future will also be liked and enjoyed by you!

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Posted: 7 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: deekshitaamidal
Loved the update. Loved list of songs .Update next part soon

thank you! 😊 thank you for leaving a comment too...i have noticed that you like most of my updates so thanks for that too! ❤️

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rinku95

@rinku95

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#153

Amazing

loved the concept of exchanging songs

superb song choice

thanks for giving me idea as this would also be great in long distance relationship

continue soon

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Posted: 7 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: rinku95
Amazing
loved the concept of exchanging songs
superb song choice
thanks for giving me idea as this would also be great in long distance relationship
continue soon

thank you so much rinku! glad that you feel like you can use this idea! lemme know how it goes😉😊

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Reenaxavneil

@Reenaxavneil

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#155

Hi Neerja, I am a huge fan of your writing, I have never missed an update, I'm just not super active in the forum. This story is one of my favourites and I love your frequent updates too. In fact, I re-read the whole fanfiction on wattpad as well. Just wanted to write this quick message to show how much I appreciate the time you take out to write this and bring a smile on my face :)
Best wishes
Reena (a *quiet* reader)

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Posted: 7 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: Reenaxavneil
Hi Neerja, I am a huge fan of your writing, I have never missed an update, I'm just not super active in the forum. This story is one of my favourites and I love your frequent updates too. In fact, I re-read the whole fanfiction on wattpad as well. Just wanted to write this quick message to show how much I appreciate the time you take out to write this and bring a smile on my face :)
Best wishes
Reena (a *quiet* reader)

Dear Reena

You dunno how happy it makes me to see a quiet reader leave a comment today! thank you SO much! Lemme also say that I am super observant so I know that you are almost always one of the first people to hit like after I update! 😆i know that not everyone is active on the forum but that's perfectly ok but it doesn't take a lot to hit like. thank you for keenly following my story so far and i'm really glad that you have enjoyed it enough to reread it on wattpad! much love and many many thanks❤️

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-Rehanna-

@-Rehanna-

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#157

Hi Neeraja,

I just wanted to say I am really enjoying this story, and I know its disheartening when you dont get the response you want but never give up!

I used to compare my work to others and then realised that it gave me nothing!

Your work is amazing as it is and I thoroughly enjoyed the fact that he named a star after her (my mum did the same for me)!

Sometimes you just have to keep going even when its hard and sometimes a lot of factors come in to not commenting e.g. time differences, silent readers etc.

Your stories views beat a lot of others by far, so that shows a lot!

Im so proud of you and hope you continue!

Edited by -Rehanna- - 7 years ago

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840837

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Posted: 7 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: -Rehanna-
Hi Neeraja,
I just wanted to say I am really enjoying this story, and I know its disheartening when you dont get the response you want but never give up!
I used to compare my work to others and then realised that it gave me nothing!
Your work is amazing as it is and I thoroughly enjoyed the fact that he named a star after her (my mum did the same for me)!
Sometimes you just have to keep going even when its hard and sometimes a lot of factors come in to not commenting e.g. time differences, silent readers etc.
Your stories views beat a lot of others by far, so that shows a lot!
Im so proud of you and hope you continue!

Hi Rehanna, thank you for your words of encouragement! I really appreciate it! i will definitely keep writing. The note i put out is only to get some feedback on any areas of improvement or to see if people want to read anything in particular or if they have some comments about the writing style etc...

also I've been thinking about it for a while and just thought that I should put it out there:)

thanks for responding and of course you already know that i keenly follow ur stuff..so keep writing as well!

P.S: so cute that your mom named a star after you! ⭐️

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Shaiksafia

@Shaiksafia

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#159

Hello dear I understand what you're feeling now all I can say it I love your writing it's so detailed that most of the time I don't have any confusion and enjoy this style of writing I am big reader all I can say is don't compare because most of the other ff doesn't have the same story so people have more questions and confusion 😉

Anyways just add some masala to the story like you did in the misunderstanding chapter 😉 May be start the pregnancy phase and let AvNeil discuss about having a baby it will be beautiful to read it's jusr a request thou I am sure I enjoy whatever you write 😉

You're doing a fabulous job 👏

Much love
Safia