Avneil ff - Page 15

Thank you :)

Thank you tumpa!

thank you rinku!😊 got another update coming soon!

I love both uodates very much.

Its so refreshing for mind and heart.

Ur update always make me smile.

I love badminton and star part very much.

Mixtape also AWESOME. Loved it.

Continue soon.

Hey what was in the certificate. I couldn't understand.

A request . Bring some girl for Ali. How much more days he will be concentrating on AvNeil. Love nahi toh arranged marriage hi sahi . Let AvNeil be matchmaker and cupid 😉

@rilsaf

@agnes

@tumpa

Thanks a lot for all your comments! I look forward to reading your comments after my update and u guys never disappoint...thank you so much!

@agnes...I'll think about Ali too. Right now my focus was avneil. The certificate is basically a star Registration certificate. It's possible to get a star named for a loved one. And if you do so u get a star certificate with the coordinates of the star. So Neil got a star named for Avneil.

Hope that clarifies.

first of all I'd like to say thank you to all the readers who have liked and commented on my FF so far. I've said it many times before but I'd like to say it again- thank you SO much for all your words. It really does mean a lot. Whenever I put up an update I really wait eagerly to see how many of you like it and comment. Reading all your comments and appreciation is a huge motivation to write more. It feels awesome when the ideas you have connect with others and they write back to tell you how much they enjoyed reading it! You guys really don't know how happy it makes me to see your responses. And since I have only a few dedicated readers I know you all by name and I actually keep track and wait to see what you guys have said! thank you SO very much for all your support and encouragement. love you guys❤️🤗

this forum has many awesome FF writers who have so much flair and its actually to read all their FFs that i became a member of the forum. And eventually avneil and adiza have just become an integral part of my life. their love story is like an aspirational fairy tale!

But since it's a daily soap often a lot of the stuff we may want to see cant happen on screen which is why I like reading about it in FFs and that's also why I started writing.

But even though I started writing for myself I have realised that I'm a very greedy writer. I'm always waiting for all of your feedback and I must confess that its very disheartening for me personally when I don't get the feedback I am expecting...maybe its also coz my expectations are higher than they should be. But I've really been trying out different things in my stories hoping to attract more readers...but so far nothing seems to have worked! and initially i consoled myself saying its perhaps just that there are many silent readers. but unfortunately my "comparison disease" sets in and when I see other FFs with so many more responses I keep wondering how I can improve. I know that all the stories are different, readers tastes are different...of course I do understand that. But I really would like to know what I can do to improve my writing. Although this writing thing is only a hobby , its definitely more fulfilling if what I write can reach out to as many of you readers as possible. So please do send me your suggestions...if there's something you are not enjoying, if something is not working,if the style of writing needs some tweaking please do lemme know. If you don't want to post it on the forum you can also PM me...but do lemme know how it can be better.

Thank you for taking the time to read this. I will look forward to your feedback.

Love

Neeraja