When Opposites Collide- 15 Parts Updated PG12, Complete - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Neil must have known Avni was the candidate for PA post . So he must have been more silly with her
Lol he sent her pickle sandwich 😆 who does that . it was so silly to be done by a boss. He just annoys her .
Avni without a baggage is 8th wonder . Was it her father who was treating her as a shit . Poor girl .
Wine does so much to Avni . She let her guard lose and asks him to take care of her .

Neil did background research about her ?
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Posted: 7 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

Neil must have known Avni was the candidate for PA post . So he must have been more silly with her

Lol he sent her pickle sandwich 😆 who does that . it was so silly to be done by a boss. He just annoys her .
Avni without a baggage is 8th wonder . Was it her father who was treating her as a shit . Poor girl .
Wine does so much to Avni . She let her guard lose and asks him to take care of her .

Neil did background research about her ?

Hi, thank you for commenting!
Im glad it made you laugh!
All will be revealed soon ish!

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Posted: 7 years ago
#23
Awesome story👏👏...i really really loved it...neil is very naughty😉
Nd avni cute antics loved it yr...nd m curious abt avni past...who else can be in her life other than romeo 😆😆...plz update next
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow, what a brilliant story.👏👏
please update soon. I'm eagerly waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kiranrathore

Awesome story👏👏...i really really loved it...neil is very naughty😉

Nd avni cute antics loved it yr...nd m curious abt avni past...who else can be in her life other than romeo 😆😆...plz update next

Hey, thanks for commenting!
Im glad you liked it, I will update soon!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: adizafan

Wow, what a brilliant story.👏👏

please update soon. I'm eagerly waiting for the next part.

Hi, thank you for commenting I am glad you liked it, I will update soon!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#27
Part 7-
So I originally wrote a part but I lost it!
Italics are flashbacks!

Alisha looked down at her screen, her fingers shook "Ma'am you know you asked me to do a background track on all new staff"
The woman nodded
"Avni, she well I think you should see for yourself"
The woman turned the screen toward herself and gasped
"This information needs to get to Neil ASAP, you hear me, Avni is a murderer"

Avni sat outside, her body stilled as she smelt his cologne, its not him Avni calm down. She said in her head.
The memories still so vivid of their last encounter


Avni stood watching Vidyut sipping on his coffee. Her body ached from yet another beating, she grabbed the knife in her hand and held it behind her back
Her other hand on her stomach, she had to get out, no more could she bare this torture.

Walking closer she pulled his head back, kissed his lips and stabbed him in the chest.
"What are you doing, are you crazy"
Avni grabbed the vase, lifting it she hit him over the head until he fell unconscious

Pulling the knife from his chest, she fell to her knees "hamari kahani katam hai"
She dug the knife in again as he screamed and passed out
"I will never forgive you Vidyut, not for any of this"
Standing up she walked out

Running away with the one person who had always stood by her



Avni distinctly remembered how the murder was described as one so brutal, it was at first very difficult to find out who the victim was

She laughed, victim, a word she would never use to describe him.
She had done what she had to, to get away and she wouldnt regret trying to save herself and her baby.

Although Vidyut had the master card and had still won the day she lost her baby.
She hoped now would be a chance to start her life afresh.
She jumped as two warm hands covered her shoulders
"Bit chilly to be sat out here alone, come on we have many places to see, before the meeting at 6, we are in the city of love"

"Sir, thats Paris, we're in Rome"
Neil laughed and pulled Avni up "Then clearly you have not seen Rome in the way I have"
"Guess I will have to see it to believe it"
"Come on then in the car, I shall be your tour guide"

"So where we going first"
"The Trevi fountain"
Neil parked his car, pulled Avni's door open and together they walked to the fountain.
Avni looked up to see the many stone figures built in and on the fountain, it was tall, so tall that even when she looked up she wasnt sure where it ended.

The stonework was intricate, Avni stood closer and peered at one of the figures and smiled "It really is beautiful"
"You should see it at night time"
Avni turned to see someone grab her bag and yank at it
Neil placed his hand on the mans shoulder
"Now thats not nice is it"
Neil punched the man in the face and he pulled back and ran away

Avni recoiled, her chest tight and her throat dry she stood back, her eyes closed tightly

"Now now, that wasnt very nice"
Avni's wrist snapped in Vidyut's hold
Her scream was muffled against the wall
"When are you going to learn to listen, I hate to do this to you but"
He let go and she fell to the floor

"You just dont listen"
She curled up into a ball and hoped that her suffering would end



Neil rested his hand on her shoulder, "Avni are you okay, hey you look so pale"
"Dont touch me" she screamed loudly
Stepping back she faltered and turned to run away

"Avni wait" Neil shouted
But Avni couldnt, she needed to be far away from any reminders of her past
She ran through the busy streets as fast as she could

Neil's heavy footsteps not far behind her


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Posted: 7 years ago
#28
I'm so confused about this part 😕
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shreya_patel160

I'm so confused about this part 😕

Whats confusing you?
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Posted: 7 years ago
#30
That what happened at the end

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