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hi guys i am new to this and i am writing a story on our very own avneil and here u go

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Posted: 7 years ago
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characters introduction

avni khanna: beautiful fun loving girl and loves her family and her husband and studying final year of engineering and owns 50% of shares of khanna industries

neil khanna: handsome and fun loving boy and loves his family and wife avni and is an ips officer and is owns other 50% shares of khanna industries

prakash khanna: father of neil khanna and very down to earth and humble person who loves his family

swetha khanna: mother of neil and good human being but very hyperactive

bebe: as shown in the show

neela: mother of avni and ceo of parikh industries

amol: brother of avni and loves avni neel and neela a lot but due to some reasons doesnt talk to avni(u will be knowing it further) and studying 2nd year engineering

ali: best friend of avni and neel and owner of mumbais number one restaurant and runs a canteen in avnis clg so that he can visit avni and amol







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Posted: 7 years ago
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sweet mrngs

it is a pleasant morning and there is a big bedroom shown in which two people were sleeping on bed peacefully like children and the rays of the sun disturbed avni and she woke up

avni: thinks(today is first day of my final year in the college and i am very happy and i have to get ready fast as i should not get late on the first day itself) and turned to see her husband sleep cutely like a child and got up from bed went to washroom to get ready

neil: he hears a noise inside from bathroom and wakes up with a jolt and runs to bathroom and asks if avni was ok and what had happened why did u shout are u ok

avni: yeah neil i am ok

neil: then what was that sound

avni: nothing i was about to fall so i shouted but i did not as i took the help of the hanger

neil : avni u literally scared me to hell ok now be careful

avni : ok and after 10 min she came out with bathrobe

neil: he was very concerned about her straightly went to her and checked if she had hurt herself and started shouting at her how many times should i tell u to be careful if anything happens to you then what ----

avni kissed neel just to stop him after few seconds they got seperated just to breathe and avni goes running to change her clothes with blush

neil: what is this avni u always do this

after sometime both avni and neil join down to have breakfast and all are excited about avnis final year and all of them go to their respective works

neil goes to police station and avni goes to college by bus( no one knows that she is very rich and is married except amol and ali)and bebe and swetha goes to their respective rooms and prakash goes to office


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Posted: 7 years ago
#4
chapter 3

at neils office all are very tensed and then neil arrived

neil: what happened y are u all tensed

dd:(sorry guys i forgot to mention about dd is as same as he is in the show)sir we got a new mission which we have to go undercover operation to accomplish that

neil: what is that explain me in detail

dd: sir we got an information that the terrorist that delhi police were searching for is hiding in a disguise in a clg and came here to mumbai with some intention so we have to find out that person and so we have to join that clg as professors and other with other professions so that we can find him and handover to delhi police

neil: ok so when are we going to join the clg and by the way what is the name of that clg

dd: sir its some "xxx" clg

neil is shocked he is happy worried and has mixed emotions running in his head yes he is happy that from now he can see avni daily even at work as it is her clg and worried what if the terrorist get to know that avni is police officers wife anyway he has to do his duty and he is confident that he can find that terrorist as soon as possible and for the first time he is happy for avnis decision of hiding her truth being "avni neil khanna" yes he used to suggest avni that reveal her truth but avni being avni want to hide her truth so that she can have her own identity

and the whole day they planned for the upcoming mission


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Posted: 7 years ago
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chapter 4

avni and priya walk towards canteen and avni starts

avni: see how disgusting she is

priya: who that tiya?

avni:yeeah how can she flirt like that

priya: avni she is like that from first right and leave it

avni: yeah but how can she flirt with my and stopped realising what she was about to say

priya: what with ur ?

avni : i i mean our professor for gods sake he is our professor then how can she do that

while saying so she falls on to a boy who was having lunch and his shirt gets spoiled

avni: i am sry i am sry

boy : he was about to say its ok and sees avni and shouts on her how dare u to spoil my shirt are u blind cant u walk properly

avni:is in tears now and trying to explain him and starts saying sry

boy: plse stop your fake tears first u do mistake and then use ur useless weapon crying do u think i am going to forgive u for ur fake tears

avni: i am sry i dont have any intention to do that plse dont be angry

boy :he was again about to shout again but a voce stopped him

neil:whats going on here?

boy:he is shocked seeing neil and was about to call him jiju(yes the boy is none other than amol)but stopped in the mid way as neil interrupted again

neil: hello miss whatever u are y are u always into some problem and whats going on here dont u even find professor standing infront of u and u people are fighting ignoring me

amol understood that neil was new professor and stood silent

neil:what are u staring at say sry to him staring at avni

avni:with tears in her eyes sry

and she was about to leave then neil stopped her again

neil:stop i did not finish yet and mister and u too apologise to her said to amol

amol: sry and leaves from there

avni also leaves from there with tears rolling from her eyes

neils heart teared seeing avni in tears and thought to himself neil khanna be ready to sleep on couch today

and it was evening and all were leaving to their homes and avni was waiting for bus and neil stood far away from bus stop so that after avni gets into bus he would start

neil pov:i know there is no need to wait here untill avni leaves but i cant leave avni here alone because ali used to company her till home everyday and so she is safe but today ali is in leave so i will wait and he sees a boy far from bus stop looking at avni and thinks to go near that boy but stops in the middle and smiles looking at the boy

and yes the boy is none other than amol he was waiting the bus to come so that avni gets into the bus safely though he is angry at her and not talling to her he doesnt hate her and he feels possessive about her

after sometime avni gets into the bus and everyone reaches their home


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Posted: 7 years ago
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chapter 5

neil goes to police station and after some time goes to neela mas home

neil knocked the door and one beautiful lady opens the door and it is neela ma

neela ma: hi neil after a long time how are you and where is avni?

neil: hello maa i am fine and i came here directly from police station and avni is at home

neela ma : oh ok hows is ur job going on?

neel:right now i am in very bad situation

neela ma: y what happened :

neel explains her everything

neela ma starts laughing now u should pacify both of them oh neil all the best and by the way amol is in his room u can go now

neil:thanks maa and goes to amol room

he enters amols room and amol sees him and says

amol: jiju plse dont come to me now plse leave me alone

neil:amol plse listen to me

amol:no jiju if u are here to take avnis side then i am not going to listen anything

neil:who told that i will not take her side i know its avni mistake and i scolded her a lot for todays antics of her

amol:really?

neil:yes if u want u can go and check poor girl she might be crying now

amol:with concern what ?and realises and changes topic and asks neil what was he doing as a professor in the clg

then neil explains him everything and leaves after sometime spending time with neelama and amol

at khannas house avni was very angry with neil for two things

and she is going to confront him for that two mistakes but he is not at home yet and she goes to her room and starts reading novel

neil then enters home and goes to bebe who was sitting on sofa and asks her if she had her dinner to which she replies

bebe:u can ask directly that whether avni had dinner or not (in sarcastic way)

neil:bebe i asked about u only and if u think so then u can answer

bebe:oh ok then yes i had my dinner and now go and have ur dinner supressing her laugh as she know neil will not go untill she gives information about avni

now neil sighed and asks bebe

neil:bebe plse give me answer with cute puppy face

to which bebe laughed and said

bebe:tillu i know i am ur bebe and yes she did not have her dinner and y are u asking me u know right? that without u she will not have her dinner

neil:thanku bebe and goes to his room thinking how should he face avni

neil opened their room door as soon as he entered the room he didnt find avni and went to balcony

avni:finally u got time to come to me (in angry tone)

neil:oh avni i missed u a lot saying this he hugged her from behind

suddenly he felt pain on his foot as avni started damping his foot and shoved him away

avni:neil dont u dare to come near me and how dare u to do all this and started crying

neil immediately went to her side cupping her face and

neil:sorry avni i am sorry plse dont cry u know that i cant see tears from ur eyes plse stop crying

avni: shoved his hands and says oh really then y did u shouted at me when amol was shouting at me and u made me apologise first

neil:again went near avni and cupped her face and said thats y i went to his house and warned him not to shout at you one more time

avni:really saying this she stopped crying

neil:really i have shouted at him very harshly poor boy he might me be very sad

avni:she was feeling bad now and was about to ask what did he scold

neil diverted the topic and said

neil:avni yaar i am feeling very hungry plse let us have dinner asked her holding her hand

avni:first go and wash ur hands with dettol and then touch me because u touched that stupid tiya who is my enemy and by the y did u give her handshake and turned with angry

neil:smiled looking at her jealousy and hugged her from behind and said wow wifey someone is jealous

avni:oh hello i am not jealous i just hate her thats it

and she turned around to look at neil and said come lets have dinner to which neil smiled and kissed on her forehead and said

neil:ok lets go my innocent cutipie

avni:innocent , i am not innocent

neil:laughed and said yeah u r not okay?

avni :keep that in ur mind

and they both have their dinner


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Posted: 7 years ago
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chapter 6

after having dinner both avni and neil go to their room and neil goes to change his dress and avni calls to neela ma to know amol was ok or not because she thinks neil might have scolded him a lot

avni:hi maa how are you?

neela:i am fine bacha and how are you now?

avni:i am ok maa but how is amol is he okay now?

neela:she doesnt know what neil would have told to avni and starts yes he is fine and at first he was dull but after neil came and spended time with him he is in good mood now

avni: what is he not sad neil might have shouted at him right?

neela: y would neil do that and realised that neil might have lied to her and stops in the midway

our avni understands and

avni:ok maa i will call u tomorrow mrng bye(in angry tone)

neela:oh god donno what will neil do now and how will he pacify my stubborn daughter with little smile on her face

avni :was waiting out the bathroom door and shouting at neil to come fast

neil:aray yaar wait i am coming

and he opens the door and as soon as he opens the door avni pours water on his face and he is all wet again

neil: avniii what have you done? little bit shocked

avni:what have i done dont u know what i did and how dare u to lie to me

neil :y what did i do now and lie what lie

avni:dont act innocent i called neela ma and u lied to me that u scolded amol and started throwing pillow at him

neil:avni avni i am sry baby plse stop that and is running here and there in the room

now they both gets slipped and first neil falls on the bed and then avni falls on him and neil holds her waist and is not letting her to get up

avni:in angry tone neil leave me

neil:no i am not going to leave u untill u forgive me

avni: i am not going to forgive u very easily neil khanna

neil: ok then ur wish i am not going to leave u

avni: ok then bare my weight

neil:oh my innocent wifey u think u are punishing me but i am enjoying it i can bare u my whole life saying this he kissed her on cheek

avni blushed at the moment and now she rested at his chest

avni:neil u know when u came to clg i had many questions in my mind and i was happy and worried at the same time and now i am very happy that now i can see u even in clg which is ur working place too

neil:oh my dear wifey i know and i am also very happy that i can c ur new side and ur jealousy too

avni: neil and i am warning u stay away from her

neil: with little smile from whom

avni: oh as u dont know

neil:yeah i really dont know

avni: ok then listen to me carefully stay away from tiya ok now

neil:ok and hold her even tight and they both slept in comfortable position


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Posted: 7 years ago
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chapter 7

next morning at clg

neil:good morning students

students: good morning sir

tiya: goodmorning handsome

neil: with smile on his face goodmorning tiya u said it now but dont do next time as i am ur professor not a classmate do u get that in a simple tone

tiya: with some anger ok sir

avni: smiles seeing this

and the class continues and pricipal comes in middle of the class and introduces new professor to everyone including neel

pricipal: hello students how is ur new professor

students: good sir

principal: ok now let me introduce ur another new professor mr.sandeep he is ur new professor for satellite communications (as i am ece student i dont know other subjects and only know my core subjects) and he is here

all girls are mesmerized by his handsomeness and are very happy at first neil and now sandeep and they were thinking what did they do that they got two new handsome professors

sandeep:hello students and turns to neil and gives him shakehand and introduces himself and in return neil also intorduces himself

principal:ok now i got to go u people continue

neil: ok sir

and sandeep and principal leaves from the room and neil continues with his class

and lunch break and all head towards canteen

avni: priya i dont want to have lunch

priya: y avni what happened y dont u want to have

avni: i dont know i am not feeling well

priya:its ok have some juice atleast

avni:ok let us go

they go to canteen and sit on a table and opposite to their table neil and sandeep are already their with their dishes infront of them and are about to eat

ali came towards avni and asked her what do u want to eat

avni: i will have juice and u go and get ur lunch

in clg everyone knows that ali and avni are friends and they have lunch together

ali:y u too have lunch i am going to get two plates

avni: no yaar ali i dont want to eat

ali: ok then i too will not eat and turns towards neil and messages him that avni is not having her food

neil sees alis msg and drops the spoon such that avni could look at him and speaks little louder so that avni hears him

neil: sandeep u have i dont want to have lunch today

sandeep: y what happened neil y are u not eating

neil: no i dont want to eat

avni watches this and asks ali to bring her lunch too and starts having her lunch and neil smiles seeing avni and starts his lunch

sandeep: arey neil u r really weird u told just now u dont want to eat and now u are eating

neil: little embaressed oh yeah but i am feeling hungry now

avni and ali smiles as they know the reason

sandeep: thinks y is he behaving like this

after having lunch every go to their classrooms and neil stays at canteen as he dont have class to take now

ali goes near neil and introduces himself as no one doubts them

neil: in smaller tone thanks yaar ali if u would have not msged me avni would have not had her lunch by the way y was she ignoring her lunch

ali: dont know she told that she was not feeling well

neil: oh is it so and thinks this girl will never listen to me i told her not to have oil food early in the morning and she had and n that is y she was not willing to have her lunch this girl is damn crazy and i am not going to leave her today

ali: neil what are u thinking

neil: nothing and u canteen is too good yaar

ali: thanku sir

neil: ok c u bye i have to go and before leaving he told ali that if u have doubt on any one plse inform me

ali:ok yaar sure and he hugs neil and neil leaves from there

neil goes to library and checks the students list and professors list who are new to this clg so that he can find the culprit out of them

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