AvNeil FF: THE HOWL OF THE TEMPEST note pg 20, update pg 21 - Page 10

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Posted: 7 years ago
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With Vidyut tracking each move of Avni's he is gonna be dangerous and evil than ever . Wonder what he is upto . He will kidnap and force to marry her and definitely he will have child as a bait to threaten her . Avni will become weak if he is gonna do any damage to the child . And the prologue which you implied her child was born.
Avni's cravings 😆 I enjoyed the scene . Prakash is so cute for words . Swetha 😆 was on roll . Loved her bossing around
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Posted: 7 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

With Vidyut tracking each move of Avni's he is gonna be dangerous and evil than ever . Wonder what he is upto . He will kidnap and force to marry her and definitely he will have child as a bait to threaten her . Avni will become weak if he is gonna do any damage to the child . And the prologue which you implied her child was born.

Avni's cravings 😆 I enjoyed the scene . Prakash is so cute for words . Swetha 😆 was on roll . Loved her bossing around

oho! Sri, have you guessed the entire thing?? 😲
You'll come to know about it soon. With the forthcoming chapters .
And the prologue has already been played ,in the previous chapter.
I am so happy that you enjoyed avni's craving. Prakash and shweta are totally made for each other.
Thanks a ton.
Lots of love!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I must say, you are a Amazing writer,👏 well thought plan and plot, perfect balance of negative and positive, pregnancy track that we all want to see, thanks to you, that wish is granted . now we will see Tillu ke aankh ka tara. ❤️ I want Neela to play with kids and have fun with them. VR is crazier then ever, scary, janooni. I picture all dialogue in my head with expressions, its like a movie, Thank you for restoring Ali's story, we are missing him these days. curious to know who will be his bride. bebe, parkash, and shweata, perfect family picture and their nok jok. if we had same balance of +ive and -ive on show , then we dont need to worry about TRP. I want to know one thing: Avni is Neela,s only child or Aaman is coming too. I hope, during Ali's wedding avnile re-live their wedding moments keep it up dear, update soon😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: canzasana

I must say, you are a Amazing writer,👏 well thought plan and plot, perfect balance of negative and positive, pregnancy track that we all want to see, thanks to you, that wish is granted . now we will see Tillu ke aankh ka tara. ❤️ I want Neela to play with kids and have fun with them. VR is crazier then ever, scary, janooni. I picture all dialogue in my head with expressions, its like a movie, Thank you for restoring Ali's story, we are missing him these days. curious to know who will be his bride. bebe, parkash, and shweata, perfect family picture and their nok jok. if we had same balance of +ive and -ive on show , then we dont need to worry about TRP. I want to know one thing: Avni is Neela,s only child or Aaman is coming too. I hope, during Ali's wedding avnile re-live their wedding moments keep it up dear, update soon😊

hey thank you so so much! I had a huge smile on my face reading your comment :)
The story essentially is similar to the pre leap track. Ali's love interest is a new person as hinted in one of my ts. I am going to continue with the same character But I am in no mood to bring aman or mishti or even riya back. But, ali's wedding is definitely on the cards. Stay tuned. And I'll try and update it as soon as I can.
Thanks a ton!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#95
Awww Prakashji is FIL and father goals yaar.
This is getting interesting.
The total scene of ice cream was just licious.
Kash aise log real life mein hote hain. I felt happy
that Ali isn't single here. Poor fellow naa.[refering
to previous chappies]

Next update soonish plz.😛(puppy eyes)
Was missing your updates terribly, now I feel
content.

SMALL REQUEST: Plz update the other ff also
I'm just obsessed with it and can't stop pondering.

With Love
Kathy ❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kathy_927

Awww Prakashji is FIL and father goals yaar.

This is getting interesting.
The total scene of ice cream was just licious.
Kash aise log real life mein hote hain. I felt happy
that Ali isn't single here. Poor fellow naa.[refering
to previous chappies]

Next update soonish plz.😛(puppy eyes)
Was missing your updates terribly, now I feel
content.

SMALL REQUEST: Plz update the other ff also
I'm just obsessed with it and can't stop pondering.

With Love
Kathy ❤️

hey hi kathy!
Yup prakash is the coolest.plus, since Avni works with him in this ff, they are closer than ever. And, since Ali is not getting any screen space or live story in the show, I thought I'll give him one here;)
i am so glad that you liked this part.
And the puppy eyes are working .Next update will be sooner.

And fateful collision will be updated in a day max two. I am working on it as we speak. So sorry that you had to wait for so long, maaf kardo :)

<3
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Posted: 7 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: Aphrodite_NV

Unres.

Sorry, thodi late ho gayi unres karne mein. Was not at all in a mood to do anything since morning, kuch likha ya padha nahi jaa raha tha.
And coming to the chapters, I must really appreciate you for the two back-to-back updates inspite of having busy days off forum. There is an eerie calmness spread before the storm named Vidyut is ready to unleash himself upon them with all his might and fury. And I'm cent percent sure, that Avni who actually is behaving indifferent towards his death will be the most affected while he harms them and their unborn baby.
Love those little moments of joy you have shown between Avni, Neil and Prakash. Apni Shweta ki toh alag hi baat hai 😉. Can I say how I adore the bond Avni and Prakash share, both here and in the show as well.
Wouldn't want to sound greedy but when can we expect the next update?
Love,
Nivi

hey! Thank you nivi!
No worries! I totally understand . We all have such days.
Yup, you'll have to wait and watch for the actual howl of the tempest.
I am glad you liked the family bonding time. And well ,both prakash and shweta have accepted avni as their own daughter ,so the relationship is as beautiful as it can get.

Thanks a bunch!! The comment means a lot. Next chapter is soon. Promise.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: darsh333

Where is the update??

it will be up in a few minutes .
:)
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Posted: 7 years ago


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