The Bodyguard - Chapter 2 (18 Parts, Complete With Epilogue )

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~Grief Is Just Love With No Place To Go~

Prologue One: From A Lover To A Sinner Living A Widow's Life

Sitting in her room, her white sari clung to her body
Her fingers traced the picture in her hands

With a deep sigh she looked down at the chain attached to the handcuff, claiming her to the bed

Looking into the mirror she focused upon her sunken cheeks, her protruding bones and the dark bags under her eyes

Closing her eyes she sighed, this was the life of a prisoner
Forced to live when she didnt want to

Her heart thumped at the thought of her lost love, her protector, the man who owned her heart

Neil Khanna.

A lone tear made its way down her already sticky cheeks
Neela raised her hand to wipe away her tear but she pulled back

"Let me suffer, I killed him, I killed the man I love, I deserve death"
Neela shook her head "Avni please"

Pulling the blanket over her shoulders she turned away from Neela and allowed the grief to consume her again, loneliness being the only warmth she would allow herself to feel

Drowning in his memories she clenched her fists, the blade in her hand cutting through her skin

"main aa raha hoon Khanna "

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Posted: 7 years ago
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~Helping One Person May Not Change The World But It Can Change The World For One Person~

Prologue Two: From Neil To Neo-

Chocolate brown eyes opened wide, grasping the mud in his hand the man flipped himself up

Grabbing the enemies wrist, he threw the mud in his eyes, lifting his leg he kicked him in the stomach, sending him flying back into the tree

Ripping his shirt off, he dropped it to the floor
His bare chest drizzled with sweat

Growling he ran towards the enemy and tackled him to the ground

Lifting his elbow he hit the enemy in the neck, pulling his arm he bent it back , sighing as he heard the snap of his bones he dropped him to the floor

Looking down at him, he grabbed the bag of money then kneeled next to him

" jab aap agalee baar choree karana chaahate hain yaad rakhen"
Kicking mud into his eyes he walked away

Dropping the bag at the homeless shelter, a woman grabbed his leg "Neil Sir, again"

Neil shook his head "Not Neil, Neo"
Sliding his sunglasses on he walked away

Crossing off the day on the calender he smiled "main aa raha hoon Avni"

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Posted: 7 years ago
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~Distance Between Two Hearts Is Not An Obstacle, Rather A Beautiful Reminder Of Just How Strong Love Can Be~

Part One: Judaai-


Raajhan Dhoondan Main Chaleya...
When I went out in search of my Ranjha (lover)
(Raajhan/Ranjha is referring to Heer-Ranjhna, a famous romantic couple in Indian History,
similar to Romeo-Juliet)


Neela stroked Avni's hair as she placed her head on her lap, her tears still dampening Neela's sari.
"I dont know how to live without him" she sobbed

Neela had no words as she held Avni close, blaming herself for all of the events that broke Neil and Avni

Raajhan Milya Na Ve...
I didn't find my Ranjha
Jigra Vichon Agan Laga Ke Rabba...
After igniting a fire inside my heart, O Lord
Lakeeraan Vich Likhdi Judaai...
You've written separation in my destiny


Neil sat to the table, putting some cereal on his spoon, he lifted it then dropped it, shoving the dish away it tipped, spoiling the table

"There isnt enjoyment in anything without you Avni " Neil held onto the necklace in his hand, his eyes glimmered with unshed tears

Kho Gaya, Gum Ho Gaya
He got lost, he disappeared
Waqt Se Churaya Tha Jo
The one whom I had stolen from time
Apna Banaya Tha...
The one whom I had made mine
Ho... Tera, Woh Mera
He was mine
Saath Nibhaya Tha Jo
The one who had been my companion
Apna Banaya Tha...
The one whom I had made mine


Avni had nothing but her memories to rely on to ensure her Neil was real
So many months in this house as a prisoner and she was starting to feel like Neil was just an amazing dream

She wondered how he died, was he alone?
Or did they try to save him?
The thought often became to much so she stopped thinking about it

Chadariya Jheeni Re Jheeni (x2)
The bed sheet is finely woven
Aankhein Bheeni Yeh Bheeni Yeh Bheeni
These eyes are wet
Yaadein Jheeni Re Jheeni Re Jheeni
The memories are all finely woven (in the bed sheet)
Chadariya Jheeni Re Jheeni (x2)
The bed sheet is finely woven
Hai Aankhein Bheeni Yeh Bheeni Yeh Bheeni
These eyes are wet
Yaadein Jheeni Re Jheeni Re Jheeni
The memories are all finely woven


Neil often stroked the side of his bed, the sheets were cold
His life was empty
There was an Avni spaced whole in his life

It left him incomplete but he was sure he would find her soon, he had to
Because if he didnt, well then for once Neil had no smart reply for that question

Aisa Bhi Kya Milna, Saath Ho Ke Tanha
What kind of a meeting is this, being together seems like being alone
Aisi Kyun Saza Humne Hai Paayi, Raanjhna Ve
Why am I being punished in this way, my beloved?
Phir Se Mujhe Jeena, Tujhpe Hai Marna
I want to live once again, I want to die on You (again)
Phir Se Dil Ne Di Hai Yeh Duhaai, Saajna Ve
My heart has once again cursed me, my partner
Lakeeron Pe Likh Di Kyun Judaai...
Why have You've written separation in my destiny?


Avni looked at a very sick Neela, the food on the floor good enough for a dog.
Vivaan had refused to give medication, she needed to run and bring it for her

But just the memories of what the outside world had taken away from her scared her the most, she had to be brave for Neela
But she wasnt sure if she could cope with being part of a world her love was not

Gair Sa Hua Khud Se Bhi, Na Koi Mera
I've become a stranger to my own self, no one is mine
Dard Se Kar Le Chal Yaari, Dil Ye Keh Raha
Become friends with pain, my heart tells me this
Kholun Jo Baahein... Bas Gham Yeh Simat Rahe Hai
When I open my arms, grief is the only one who comes and embraces me
Aankhon Ke Aage... Lamhe Yeh Kyun Ghat Rahe Hai
In front of my eyes, why are these moments slowly decreasing
Jaane Kaise Koi Sehta Judaaiyaan
How can one bear separation (only God knows
)

Neil deleted the voicemail messages from his family, they still wanted to see him but there was warmth in his cold life within the memories of Avni

Leaving this city would be leaving her, he didnt want another marriage and his mission would always be to find her, until that was done Neil would stay alone with his memories of her

Chadariya Jheeni Re Jheeni (x2)
The bed sheet is finely woven
Aankhein Bheeni Yeh Bheeni Yeh Bheeni
These eyes are wet
Yaadein Jheeni Re Jheeni Re Jheeni
The memories are all finely woven
Chadariya Jheeni Re Jheeni (x2)
The bed sheet is finely woven
Hai Aankhein Bheeni Yeh Bheeni Yeh Bheeni
These eyes are wet
Yaadein Jheeni Re Jheeni Re Jheeni
The memories are all finely woven


Avni would have thought shed have cried out by now, but she hadnt as she looked out of the window trying to plan her journey before she found a way to uncuff herself

She kept repeating that this was for Neela ma, but the burden of her loss on her heart wouldnt allow her any strength

Raajhan Dhoondan Main Chaleya...
When I went out in search of my Ranjha
Raajhan Milya Na Ve...
I didn't find my Ranjha
Jigra Vichon Agan Laga Ke Rabba...
After igniting a fire inside my heart, O Lord
Lakeeraan Vich Likhdi Judaai...
You've written separation in my destiny


Neil looked at the picture of Avni on his bookcase, the one he had taken on his phone when she hadn't been looking

Picking it up, he pressed a kiss to the picture before putting it down and walking outside
Edited by Mayakhan12 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Finally the second part! This was awesome Maya. Avni and Neil are so heartbroken. Avni blames herself for Neil's death (aww, poor soul! Little does she know that Neil is alive and is desperately finding her). I am intrigued and wish you all the success for the sequel. Continue soon. Much love, you truly have my heart girl!!❤️
Edited by Zara_Imam - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zara_Imam

Finally the second part! This was awesome Maya. Avni and Neil are so heartbroken. Avni blames herself for Neil's death (aww, poor soul! Little does she know that Neil is alive and is desperately finding her). I am intrigued and wish you all the success for the sequel. Continue soon. Much love, you truly have my heart girl!!❤️

Thank you! I appreciate it, much love😳❤️
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~Difficult Roads Often Lead To Beautiful Destinations~

Part Two: Finding Home In A Crowded Place-

The door slammed, Vivaan had finally gone to work
Avni grabbed her hair grip, working on the handcuffs she finally opened them

Kissing Neela's cheek she stood up "I will get the medicine then be straight back"
Neela stroked her cheek "Be safe"

Pulling her hood up, she pushed the window open, climbed out and jumped down, she was greatful it wasnt a huge distance

The shops were crowded and buzzing with music and people's voices
Her eyes fell to a couple

"Im not kissing you, we're in public" said the girl
The guy wrapped his arms around her waist "Just one"

When the girl shook her head , he pouted and turned away as she laughed

Memories of Neil flooded her head as she made her way through the markets
Grasping her head she sat on the side of the road, taking deep breaths

She looked up to see a poster "Neo, the poor people's saviour " but the picture was scrubbed out

Smiling she was thankful there was still good people in the world
Neil hummed as he walked through the markets, handing out blankets to the poor

Avni stood, bargaining "Please I dont have any money but my mothers ill please"
Neil watched from behind, pulling money out of his wallet he slipped it on the table

Avni turned to see who helped her but couldnt see anyone in the crowd
Paying the man she took the medicine, praying whoever helped her would get their happiness

Neil stood infront of an elderly woman
"I have nothing to give you in return"
He shook his head "Just pray I find the woman I love"

The woman nodded "Whats her name"
Neil smiled
Avni stood behind them, waiting to get past
"Avni, her name is Avni"

Avni gasped, was it one of Vivaan's men, were they looking for her?

The woman patted his head, Avni stood behind a market as she watched the man walk away
Following him she put the medicine in her pocket

Neil looked down at the shadow on the floor, he was being followed
Swinging his keys around his finger he whistled

Turning quickly he grabbed Avni and pushed her into the wall
"Why are you following me"
Avni pushed him back and looked down

Going to run away, he grabbed her wrist, turning her to face him he immediately let go when he saw her face

"Avni" he muttered
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Oh, finally Neil met Avni. Another superfast and awesome update by you. Waiting rather impatiently for the next update...
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~How Lucky Am I To Have Something That Makes Saying Goodbye So Hard~

Part Three: They're Back!!!

Neil's hands were all over Avni, stroking her face, her arms, grasping her hands

"I can't believe you're here, infront of me, I've been looking for you everywhere"
Pulling her to him, he rested his face into the crook of her neck

Allowing her scent to calm him
"Avni, Avni, my Avni" his voice was husky , filled with pain and desperation

Pulling back he looked at her, her hands still down at her sides
Shaking her shoulders, she blinked

"Neil" her hand reached up to touch his face "you're alive"

"Of course i'm alive, you cant get rid of me that quickly"
Avni pressed kisses all over his face "Neil, I thought I lost you"

Neil laughed as she held him close, as he tried to pull away she tugged him back
"No, just let me hold you, I need to know youre real"

Neil wrapped his arms around her waist, lifting her up "Oh Avni, youve lost so much weight, what happened"

She shoved him "I thought you were dead idiot, what took you so long"
Neil smirked "Oh I was trying to find Riya"

"So go to Riya then, idiot"
Neil smiled, kissing her cheek "forgive me"

"You have to help me get Neela Ma out of Vivaan's house, and I will only forgive you when you do what I told you to in the hospital"

Neil saluted "Yes ma'am, show me the way"
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zara_Imam

Oh, finally Neil met Avni. Another superfast and awesome update by you. Waiting rather impatiently for the next update...

Thank you, I have updated!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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hey are they married or not
Itni super fast meeting ! Baap re !
Why did this Vivan wanna get Avni killed and why is he kept her hostage
What is he doing by disguising as Neo ? Just to reach Avni has he been disguising .
Another doubt . Is he a police officer or bodyguard

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