AvNeil SS:AN ALPINE AFFAIR (last part: pg 17)

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Globetrotter_me

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Posted: 7 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: avneil2
Superb update. Thank god Martha ki kitchen mein war nahi aayi. Loved it. Continue soon

thank you :) martha is thankful too that her kitchen is saved!

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Globetrotter_me

@Globetrotter_me

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Posted: 7 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: Avni_reddy
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It's beautifully written dear... 👏 their cute banter.. aww simply adorable... the scene was so realistic. It happens with every couple atleast once when they are on a trip together... loved it 😊

Wooo finally they found a roof on their heads ! Martha and jon are bliss to read... so nice of them.

The kitchen scene... yet another cutesy moment

Woah ! Jon gave the alcohol bottle to Avni saying "use it wisely"
😉 I'm sure she will 😛 and would love to read the next part asap plsss

oh! Thank you so much!! <3

And neil and avni are extremely content right now with the roof on their head..

Yes avni's use of that wine bottle is all upto your imagination. Wine plus cold like that plus a small bed... Endless possibilities 😉😉

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Globetrotter_me

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Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: AgnesFan
Both the parts were so adorable
Their fight over missing the train 😆 This happens with every normal couples . I can imagine them sitting with their back facing each other 😆 That was so cute even to imagine . If I were there I would have pulled both their cheeks 😳 ESP Zain 😳 The guy is more than adorable when he pouts .😳 Neil giving heat to her 😳😳

At last Avni's wish was fulfilled . Thanks to blizzards 😆
Martha and Jon were more than kind and sweet . ESP their banter and Martha blushing over Neil's remark 😆😳 I loved it .

The whole session of preparing dinner 😆 It was more than cute . Neil playing with dough and warning Avni not to spoil the kitchen 😆 The guy is just 😆 Avni knows her ways to give back to her husband only to get back double the time from him 😳😆

I love the fluffiness AvNeil are a dream 😳 Show mei kabhi milega bhi 🥱
Thanks for writing it . You are doing wonderful 👏

thank you so much! Means a lot!

Neil is such a charmer. No one is immune to it. Not even martha!

And he leaves no stone un- turned to become more loving towards his wife!

Thanks again! <3

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Globetrotter_me

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Posted: 7 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: Veenapain
Very nice . Waiting for next.

thank you! I'll try and update it soon.

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Globetrotter_me

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Posted: 7 years ago

#105

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Veenapai

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Posted: 7 years ago

#106

Loved the update very much. Waiting to see what is Neil's surprise.

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Brightglow

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Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#107

Wow wow... this was absolute AvNeil dreamland ❤️

Loved every bit of it.. Neil man he's so charming... I can't resist calling for him ! In love with his cute antics of teasing his wifey in the shower, while getting ready and ofcourse in the bed when he says "toh" was pretty hot! 😉

And and the selfies of them...u've written so nicely 👏 I could almost imagine Adiza in this style pics 🥳

Hmmm so surprise for wifey haa... please update sssooonnn... don't take long pls

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HighOnSarcasm

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Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#108

Apparently I missed last 2 updates. So this is a combined comment for all 3😳

The cute bickering of AvNeil was so so cute! Thank God the fight didn't escalate & they both said sorry!

Loved Martha & Jon...wish there were more pple like them in the world..!

Neil teasing Avni with DDLJ dialogues & asking her to wear the saree was sooo precious!!

Avni doesn't know Neilz planning a surprise for her but we do & I can't wait to see what he has planned!!!

Their holiday is coming to an end...their 1 week went away too fast!

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Globetrotter_me

@Globetrotter_me

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: Veenapain
Loved the update very much. Waiting to see what is Neil's surprise.

thank you so much!!I'll try and update it soon

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Globetrotter_me

@Globetrotter_me

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: Avni_reddy
Wow wow... this was absolute AvNeil dreamland ❤️
Loved every bit of it.. Neil man he's so charming... I can't resist calling for him ! In love with his cute antics of teasing his wifey in the shower, while getting ready and ofcourse in the bed when he says "toh" was pretty hot! 😉

And and the selfies of them...u've written so nicely 👏 I could almost imagine Adiza in this style pics 🥳

Hmmm so surprise for wifey haa... please update sssooonnn... don't take long pls

thank you! I am glad you liked the part.

And as far as selfies are concerned I hope we get more of adiza selfies, because yesterday was a happy day. Now, when it comes to avneil, in my head they take a lot of selfies.

Yup, you'll have to wait for the surprise just like avni has to. I'll try and update it soon.