AvNeil SS:AN ALPINE AFFAIR (last part: pg 17)

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Wingsoflove_2

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Posted: 7 years ago

#91

Superb I knew it. They lost their train.😆 their nok-jhok Martha is so sweet.😳 loved it. Continue soon.

Edited by avneil2 - 7 years ago

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Globetrotter_me

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Posted: 7 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: neeraja91
Love it!

thank you, i have just updated part 6 above this. Kindly go through that too :)

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Globetrotter_me

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Posted: 7 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: avneil2
Superb I knew it. They lost their train.😆 their nok-jhok Martha is so sweet.😳 loved it. Continue soon.

thank you so much!! And yup you were correct about the train. I have updated part 6 as well. It is the continuation of the same day. Kindly give it a read :)

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blablabla_mo7

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Posted: 7 years ago

#94

Different concept and loved every part of all 6 so far. Great work

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Posted: 7 years ago

#95

Waiting for the next part !

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Globetrotter_me

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Posted: 7 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: blablabla_mo7
Different concept and loved every part of all 6 so far. Great work

thank you! That makes me glad.

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Globetrotter_me

@Globetrotter_me

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Posted: 7 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: neeraja91
Waiting for the next part !

i just updated it! Do give it a read! :)

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Wingsoflove_2

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Posted: 7 years ago

#98

Superb update. Thank god Martha ki kitchen mein war nahi aayi. Loved it. Continue soon

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Brightglow

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Posted: 7 years ago

#99

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It's beautifully written dear... 👏 their cute banter.. aww simply adorable... the scene was so realistic. It happens with every couple atleast once when they are on a trip together... loved it 😊

Wooo finally they found a roof on their heads ! Martha and jon are bliss to read... so nice of them.

The kitchen scene... yet another cutesy moment

Woah ! Jon gave the alcohol bottle to Avni saying "use it wisely"

😉 I'm sure she will 😛 and would love to read the next part asap plsss

Edited by Avni_reddy - 7 years ago

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#100

Both the parts were so adorable

Their fight over missing the train 😆 This happens with every normal couples . I can imagine them sitting with their back facing each other 😆 That was so cute even to imagine . If I were there I would have pulled both their cheeks 😳 ESP Zain 😳 The guy is more than adorable when he pouts .😳 Neil giving heat to her 😳😳

At last Avni's wish was fulfilled . Thanks to blizzards 😆

Martha and Jon were more than kind and sweet . ESP their banter and Martha blushing over Neil's remark 😆😳 I loved it .

The whole session of preparing dinner 😆 It was more than cute . Neil playing with dough and warning Avni not to spoil the kitchen 😆 The guy is just 😆 Avni knows her ways to give back to her husband only to get back double the time from him 😳😆

I love the fluffiness AvNeil are a dream 😳 Show mei kabhi milega bhi 🥱

Thanks for writing it . You are doing wonderful 👏