AvNeil Fan-Fiction : Chase Against Time Ch31: Pg41 on 11/09

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 7 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Amayrasharma18
Heyyy !!!! This story is getting amazing ...loved this part !! It is a complete thriller !! Loved Ananya's attitude here...and Neil too!!
Do continue soon..!!! Eagerly waiting for next part and story to unfold!!

Thank You! I am glad you love these characters. I will try and update the next chapter in a day or two. ;)

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 7 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Veenapain
Please don't stop.Story is really good.I love your style of writing.Loved both the update.

Thank You! It's good to know the story is worth a read for you. I will only pull a story off when it's not being read. Because then it reflects how good (actually, bad or pathetic or whatever you wanna name it) a story is.

Anyways, as of now, I am jotting this down and I will do until it reached its conclusion or I am being asked not to.

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 7 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Globetrotter_me
Wow! This was fantastic!

Thank You!! I am glad you found it worth your time and reviewed as well!

Edited by -shenz- - 7 years ago

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 7 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: paayaal
This was the way to get her to cooperate...not force her to accept police protection but inform her that her cooperation can save other lives! But kaafi der mein samajh aaya Neil😆

Loved how Ananya displayed that shez no damsel in distress & that her confidence in her abilities is not hollow...still a bit of caution wouldn't go remiss!

Neilz attracted to her...I guess shez getting ther too!

Nice! 😃

He might have tried all other options before trying to this one out. You never know. Or he might have not. Maybe, he is the Tubelight here. ;)

I don't want Ananya or for that matter, Avni to play damsel in distress card. We have got enough women out there playing that card. Let's get Ananya some action packed scenes.

Neil has much more coming his way than what he would have thought. What and how, is not something I should disclose. 😆 I have already said enough.

Her attraction, let's keep that for you to figure out. :)

Thank you!!

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 7 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: AgnesFan
Avni will prove a death to Neil 😆 The girl is so stubborn ! But Neil is not so easy to give up . He has his own ways to make her agree . The whole scene played in office was rather sexy .😆 Avni showing off her defense skills to Neil 😆 Neil decides not to break her bubble 😳 Banda is smitten !_

Thank you! Avni/Ananya is sexy when she is stubborn ;) I, initially had the plan to get this executed at her studio apartment. But that would have rather given them much more opportunity than what I wished for them to have. So restricted them to office background, for now.

Banda is? It's too early to comment on that :)

Thank You!