avneil os u r only mine always(completed)

Avneil OS U r only mine

Hello friends I m newbie a silent reader, this is my first very attempt of writing os on any tv couple so kindly hit the like button if u like my attempt appreciations n criticisms both are welcome...
I m writing an os after avni came to know that mishti is not neil's daughter...she is daughter of juhi n vidhyut... avni saw birth certificate of mis
hti with her parents' name as juhi n vidhyut r and neil is also in goa along with avni.Every night neil n avni meet in hotel room n discuss all day's happenings n their further strategies...n one day avni was late n neil was waiting for her in their room...
N(to himself while sitting on sofa):Aaj avni ko bahut late ho gaya roj toh is time tak aa jati hai...I hope sab thik hai...avni plzzz jaldi aa jao muje tumhari fikar ho rahi...
After some time neil stood up from sofa n started walking right n left in their room
N(to himself):mein is tarah se intezaar nhi kr sakta muje avni k pass jana hoga...pr jao kese...kese bhi pr tuje jana padega neil..teri avni k liye...kuch bhi ban jana electrician,plumber delivery boy...
While thinking this he was about to open room door to go out avni entered into the door...neil saw avni n pulled her inside the room n closed the door n holded avni from her shoulders n fear of losing her was clearly evident in his eyes..whereas avni's eyes were filled with happy tears...
So guys are you liking plzzz comment...will continue soon

Nice attempt dear.. it was little childish and funny and sweet...

Nice start... Plz do continue

continue..
N(while cupping avni's face in his hands):avni kaha rahe gae thi tum...tum janti ho mein kitna dar gaya tha...tumse kitni bar kahe chuka hu ki darta hu tumhe khone se...nhi rahe paouga tumhare bina..aur tumhari aakho me aaso Kyu...kya hua muje btao(Neil was looking at her hands face to see any kind of bruises)..btao muje avni Kya hua...tumhe kahi chot lagi hai...us vidyut ne tumse kuch kaha...wese mein janta hu meri lady don ko ache se ladna ata hai...pr muje Kya hua tumhare yeh aaso muje takleef de rahe hai..
But avni was lost in his eyes..n was extremely happy...
N:mein khud hi ja kr us vidyut ko thik krte hu uski himmat kese hue meri biwi ki aakho me aaso lane ki..
Neil was about to go when avni held Neil's hand n hugged him tightly..neil was shocked by avni's this sudden gesture as avni has not hugged him this much tightly before...
A:Neil aaj mein bahut khush hu..bahut..(while hugging Neil n caressing Neil's hairs)Neil tum sirf mere ho...tum pr sirf mera haq hai...
N:avni mein hamesha se sirf tumhara hi hu aur tumhara hi rahunga..pr tumhe kya hua hai..
While saying this Neil pulled avni out of their hug but avni was not ready to leave him..
N:avni muje btaogi bhi ki Kya hua hai..
Finally avni too lift him..
A(while wiping her tears n holding Neil's hands): Neil mishti tumhari aur juhi ki beti nhi hai...woh juhi aur vidyut ki beti hai... aaj mene mishti ka birth certificate dekha jis pr vidyut aur juhi ka naam likha tha aur juhi ki baki pregnancy reports jis pr husband ki place pr vidyut k sign the..muje nhi pta juhi ne mishti ko tumhari beti Kyu bola..pr aaj mein bahut khush hu..
Neil was also very happy but shocked that why juhi told them such a big lie..avni again hugged Neil..
A:mein janti hu tumne kahi bar kaha h ki juhi aur bachi k aa jane se hamare rishte pr koi asar nhi padega...aur tum sirf mujse pyaar krte ho...aur muje bhi pta h ki tum muje kabhi nhi chodhoge pr pta nhi kyu dil k kissi ek kone me esa lagta tha ki tum pr sirf mera haq nhi kissi aur ka bhi hai...juhi aur uski bachi ka...aur mein itni bhi mahaan nhi neil..takleef hoti thi yeh soch kr..mein chahti thi tum pr sirf mera haq ho...sirf mera..kyunki zindagi mein pehli bar kuch hai jo sirf mein apne liye chahti hu..woh ho tum..
Neil's heart was very happy by hearing this avni's confession n was thinking
N(to himself): mein nhi janta tha ki tum mujse itna pyaar krti ho..(n Neil hugged avni more tightly n kissed on avni's hair)
A:tum jante ho ki mein hamesha se pyaar se dur bhagti thi pr pta nhi kab muje tumse pyaar ho gaya..phir jab juhi wapas ae toh dil me ek ajeeb se bechani hoti thi...pr ab sab thik hai..tumne us raat ko kuch nhi kiya tha..
N:avni mein bhi aaj bahut khush hu..muje lagta tha mene gharwalo ka neela maa ka vishwas kho diya hai...woh kuch kehte nhi the pr unki aakho se yeh saaf lagta tha ki unka bharosa todha hai mene unse aakhe nhi mila pta tha... .tumhe takleef di hai..pr phir bhi tumne mera saath diya hai..
Saying this Neil pulled avni out of their hug n said..
N:but now I m happy n relieved from this guilt..
Here avni was continuously staring Neil his eyes..lips,hair, nose..
Neil too noticed avni staring at him like she never stared him before..n felt a sudden shy..
N:wifey kya baat hai muje is tarah toh tumne kabhi nhi dekha..but it's ok I m liking this..
Avni looked down n blushed .n went little far from him to control her breathing..her heart was beating very fast..
N:avni pr phir bhi hume us bachi ko bachana hai aur yeh pta lagana hai ki juhi ne humse itna badha jhoot kyu bola..
A:haa Neil us bachi ko toh bachenge hi bahut dari sehmi rehti hai...
N:hmm...pr muje pta nhi ki meri biwi mujse itna pyaar krti hai..
Saying this Neil took few steps towards avni..n avni too blushed listening this...neil took another few steps towards avni n now they were only few inches away from each other..
N:Kya baat hai wifey aaj tumne ek bhi step piche nhi liya..wese toh jab bhi mein tumhare paas ata hu tum piche ho jati ho..
A:pr aaj nhi hongi..jis tarah se tum pr sirf mera haq hai..wese hi muj pr bhi sirf tumhaara haq hai..
Hearing this Neil pulled avni by her shoulders towards him..n avni's hands were on Neil's shirt..
N:muj nhi pta tha ki meri wife itni romantic hai.
A:woh toh mein hamesha se hi hu but tumne dekha aaj hai pehli bar..
N(while teasing avni):acha esa Kya...pr muje yeh haq wali baat samaj nhi ae...ki tum pr sirf mera haq hai...matlab Kya...kindly elaborate..
Avni saw Neil's mischievous smile..n understood what he meant by this...
A:haq se mera mtlb tha yeh..
Avni took Neil's hands n placed them on her waist n put her hands around Neil's neck.
Neil's eyes were wide open..n he was waiting for this moments from a long time..
A:I love u
N:I love u too avni..
Both were lost in each others' eyes n neil was also looking at avni's lips as if asking for her permission...avni closed her eyes as giving him his rights over her ..n finally Neil kissed avni...

Thank u for reading n motivating me...n sorry for any spelling n grammatical mistake as typing in phone is very tiring...
Kindly comment if you liked my first attempt..apprecation n criticism both are welcome...

Too good yaar kash this happens in show too

Originally posted by: Tumpa12

lovely one

Thank u dear 😊

Originally posted by: Tanvi4

Superb i loved it

thnku so much... 😉

Originally posted by: Afsana103

Too good yaar kash this happens in show too

yeah I too want a little more expressive avni

Superb.loved it.do write more.😊

Superb
Loved it
Thanks a lot