RS:(22-10-17) An AvNeil 5S (all posts unressed) - Page 10

Originally posted by: NarbhiForever..

Amazing update dear.

Loved it.

Neil is changed??

They understand what other means or want to say very well. But it is confusing...

Update next part soon!

Originally posted by: AvNeil_TV

Great work... do update soon

Originally posted by: preya_radev

Yaya finally u updated...haha about how I write these lengthy comment is I write about the update as I read along and u deserve such comments they way u write all your rs ...so coming to #3 I just loved it... loved how avn knew it was neil and how she also notices his stubbles and messy hair...loved how neil looked up and he heard a sound... And noticed a silver thing on a hand which slipped away from the railing the way he thought "is it her and im damn sure her means avni for him... loved how dd came and greeted neil and also loved how dd noticed neil doesn't look ok...liked how neil again looked up to the second floor...loved how when neil asked dd "any one of them are connecting to that place to the second floor ...aww neil knew dd was lying when he said he doesn't know...haha I would love to see dd smirk but glad neil noticed it and knew there is something that's y dd is smirking...aww poor avni is still affected by neil but I love it...what foul drama did neil create sanju am I missing out on something?...aww the way avni was remembering her moments on how she met neil and what happened and how she was falling for him even more was touching...when neil asked "so sab aagay and when dd said yes and how he thought to himself wasn't that the answer he wanted but maybe somewhere he wanted to know about avni...oh wow so neil doesn't drink anymore and how dd was shocked to know that...haha I knew avneil room were going to be next to each other.. but loved how when neil stepped out and took few steps forward and how he knew straight away its avni...loved how avni turned around when she felt someone behind her and the way neil name came out of her mouth...liked how he noticed she was nervous due to the way she breathing...great both had to look away from each other...at least he moved and sat next to her and looked at her...liked how they both were breaking the ice slowly but staring off with hi...aww loved how neil noticed avni got her nose pierced and thought it suits her... loved it when neil noticed the bracelet on avni hand and realised it was her hand that he saw when he came up and loved how avni noticed him looking at her bracelet where his eyes widened and then saw some type of spark in his eyes ...aww loved how avni breath hitched when neil looked at her making her look away...loved how neil was noticing all of avni action...when neil asked avni "boyfriend with both looking at each other again and how she replied "good and how avni notices something strange passing in neils eyes maybe jealously?... haha when avni asks yours and how he replies good due to lost in thoughts and when he realised and how he shouted "what hell no that made me laugh but was happy that finally avni laughed and how neils also laughed not forgetting to mention how he finds her laugh so beautiful...hayee when neil said "nah how I get lost in someone when I have u asking question which made avni stop laughing and how she repeated her question again not realizing that she asked him already ...liked how neil asked avni is seen someone and how replied no and asked him where he said he is not interested and loved how avni left her sentence hanging when she said "I thought u and mithali and neil he didn't know how to answer and then avni mentioned about the kiss and how neiil looked at questionably as he didn't know she had seen it... The way neil was trying to describe how things were between him and mithali and was not getting the write words and when he mentioned "slept he did notice the hurt on avni face...liked how both were getting comfortable with each other...hayee loved how neil winked at avni when he said "double promotion... loved how he asked how things were between her and rhea and was happy to know that things were ok...wow they actually talked a lot that's its 5:30 really cant wait for the next part sanju baby update soon lots of love and hugs from your shona

Originally posted by: pri12

This was amazinggg...Loved it..

You always come with amazing ideas for stories...

Loosing First Love is always painful..You just cant forget it

Neil was just play boy and I guess now he is in love with Avni

Originally posted by: blablabla_mo7

What's the target? Wondering if I'll get an update today.. hehehe

Originally posted by: Arieltabi

So he was a playboy😕😆.

But looks like he changed. I wonder what changed him. Why he stopped calling.

Poor Avni one sided love. Really interested to know what happens next. Please update soon.

Here is a question for you'll.

Originally posted by: ...SA...

Here is a question for you'll.

So ..you guys read 3 chapters.

Now tell me..what do u think about about Avni's feelings for Neil..name the feelings she has for Neil..

Love or just attraction or something else?

Note for . Avengers.

Di..where are u? Post adhoora sa lagta hai aapke like ke bina...

Read it soon..❤️

I think it's love 😳...actually I believe it is love bcoz this is something which makes u sometimes so helpless That u can't control Ur own heart to love someone even when u know that the person will not love u back
p.s.sanju I m wondering why suddenly this question popped up in Ur mind 😆 😆

In my opinion, it's love which she feels deeply for Neil. Hence, this hasn't allowed her to move on as she kept holding to herself for unknown reasons or thinking she will meet him one day despite all these years gone by. She is that one selfless person who could do anything for him to keep him happy even if that will hurt her.