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Neetu94

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Posted: 7 years ago

#111

Yaar ...It's very nice...Jaldi upload karo na sanju..

Waiting 4r last part impatiently

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AvNeil123

@AvNeil123

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Posted: 7 years ago

#112

Avni amd Riya's friendship is amazing. Loved thhis part.

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Wingsoflove_2

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Posted: 7 years ago

#113

Its amazing.u did a grt job yaar.pls continue soon.😊

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docritu99

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Posted: 7 years ago

#114

For #3 and #4

Neil was indeed a playboy.. He really had one night stand with Mitali.. i thought its going to be some MU from Avni's side..

Riya is darling here.. afterall all her negative work is done by Mithali here 😆

Avneil are so cute..They are still so connected.. wonder why Neil cutoff the contact with all suddenly..
And y was riya Laughing? Neil told her everything?

Avni in Sareee.. Neil's gonna drool over her big time..
Waiting for next part..

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ChhalkiSyaahi

@ChhalkiSyaahi

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#115

Hi Sanju...

I read both the parts now... So now coming to part 3, their meet was fabulous. They were so uncomfortable to begin with and then just one question from Avni and Neil just screwed it. It was fun to read that part. So Neil had a purely physical relationship with Mitali. I don't know what to make out of it. It was really a sweet part. Going to re read the fourth chapter again before commenting.

Love
Flavia

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ChhalkiSyaahi

@ChhalkiSyaahi

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#116

So Avni remembers his choice...Black Coffee... Neil is surprised. But I am not.
And Neil is so uncomfortable around Rhea... I suppose that was from lack of sleep.😉
It was a pleasant surprise to see Neil reuniting with Rhea and Ali. ANd so uncomfortable around Mitali. I still want to know the reason why he stopped talking to Avni after two months.
It was nice to see Rhea and ALi teasing Avni.
And Avni's saree being non revealing.🤣Rhea is too much.
Update soon girl. Waiting for it. What's your target this time?😉

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ShreeparnaSen36

@ShreeparnaSen36

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#117

When will you update the next part😊😊😊

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Sanvee_R

@Sanvee0812

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#118

Arieltabi ,sneha ,blablabla ,NarbhiForever ,Zenab,Shona...
thankyou for your POVs...

i wanted to know what it iss...thinking about something deeply,can confuse one at times😳

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Sanvee_R

@Sanvee0812

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Posted: 7 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: Ashi3
Sanju..
Sorry, I'm late to reply.

Ah! At last Neil is here! And the first one to see him is Avni. Neil is equally affected by Avni. When he realises that someone was present at the balcony, his first thought was whether it is Avni. All he wanted to find was a way to reach the second floor.

So Neil is still in contact with DD? But DD don't want to answer his question regarding the person staying in the second floor. Hmmm...

I feel bad for Avni. Poor girl is so heartbroken. But from Avni's thoughts, I don't think I can blame Neil either. And I don't think he is as bad as people consider him to be. I can sense that he too had some feelings for her. Now how strong were those emotions or how involved was he in them; I don't know. Let's just wait & watch.

Neil Khanna is trying to better himself? Interesting. So he has stopped drinking.

I loved their first encounter! (Well, not literally first.) Awkwardness turning into a comfortable rapport. I like that! They did discuss Mitali & he noticed her getting hurt too. Hmmm.. So what are you going to do about it Mr. Neil Khanna?

Please update the next part Sanju. I'm waiting...

Ashi...thankyou soo much❤️...

if not all, you'll get some answers from the next chapter

hope you'll like the last chapter too😳

Originally posted by: Zenab78
Fantastic update Sanju
They are trying to enjoy this time without thinking about past and Ahad why he was looking Avni Strangely
Last part is going to be awesome can't wait
Silent reader pls do like and cmnt so that we can get update quickly
Loved it ❤️

Y he's looking strangely,

ab tak toh u got to know it na.😳

Thankyou soo muchZenab😃

Originally posted by: chahat_sinha
Plz update soon

updated😊

Originally posted by: Srivanithummeti
Next part pls

updated...comment please😳

Originally posted by: nimarious
sanju such a Mind blowing update...
can't express it in words seriously...
it had everything emotions, love, concern , care...
beautiful scenes...
riya ali and neil patch up
I really want to know wat he told them 😳
I doubt why Neil left...there must be some solid reason bcoz I don't think he is that type of guy...
I m just in love with ur story
can't wait for the next part
plz plz update soon

Snehu...my jaan🤗

so ...u know the reason now...hope you liked it😳

Thankyou❤️

Originally posted by: Tunailuvsahil
Only 1prt r left?plz make this ss write more plz

but i have some spl post too...😳

Originally posted by: blablabla_mo7
Nice.. wondering whats gonna happen next? Curious on why waa Riya laughing.. now I have to wait for another day... haih.,

You know what happened...😉

Thanks😃

Originally posted by: Radiant_Eyes_
Nice one. Is arjun a third angle here?
Soo neil wanted to come for reunion..Means he hasnt firgotten them. Can u reveal the incident in coming parts pls.
Amazing series

Sakshi..thankyou..😃

he likes Avni that's all...no third angle...😳

Originally posted by: Neetu94
Yaar ...It's very nice...Jaldi upload karo na sanju..
Waiting 4r last part impatiently

thankyou neetu😃

updated..do leave a comment reviewing it😳

Originally posted by: -AvniNeil-
Avni amd Riya's friendship is amazing. Loved thhis part.

Thankyouu😃

Originally posted by: avneil2
Its amazing.u did a grt job yaar.pls continue soon.😊

Thank-youu😳😃

Originally posted by: docritu99
For #3 and #4

Neil was indeed a playboy.. He really had one night stand with Mitali.. i thought its going to be some MU from Avni's side..

Riya is darling here.. afterall all her negative work is done by Mithali here 😆

Avneil are so cute..They are still so connected.. wonder why Neil cutoff the contact with all suddenly..
And y was riya Laughing? Neil told her everything?

Avni in Sareee.. Neil's gonna drool over her big time..
Waiting for next part..

I really couldn't give proper description of individuals...but he isn't exactly a play boy(*😳*)

he did😉

Thankyou RIya🤗

Originally posted by: Tumpa12
interesting
update soon

Thankyouu 😃

Originally posted by: PrincessFlavia
Hi Sanju...

I read both the parts now... So now coming to part 3, their meet was fabulous. They were so uncomfortable to begin with and then just one question from Avni and Neil just screwed it. It was fun to read that part. So Neil had a purely physical relationship with Mitali. I don't know what to make out of it. It was really a sweet part. Going to re read the fourth chapter again before commenting.
So Avni remembers his choice...Black Coffee... Neil is surprised. But I am not.
And Neil is so uncomfortable around Rhea... I suppose that was from lack of sleep.😉
It was a pleasant surprise to see Neil reuniting with Rhea and Ali. ANd so uncomfortable around Mitali. I still want to know the reason why he stopped talking to Avni after two months.
It was nice to see Rhea and ALi teasing Avni.
And Avni's saree being non revealing.🤣Rhea is too much.
Update soon girl. Waiting for it. What's your target this time?😉
Love
Flavia

Thankyou soo much Flavia❤️...

he was uncomfortable because of his guilt...😳

my target was 35😆