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Sanvee_R

@Sanvee0812

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Posted: 7 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: Crazy_Saks_
Noce and refreshing Series.

Just one thing . pls make avni shed less tears and put up a brave front against our bad boy neil here. It wud be fun to read.

Anyways. Am loving this series

Thank you soo much..😃😃😃

Less tears...? Well im sorry..idk what I'll do with that...if u want i can make neil shed the same amount of tears ..😆

He isnt bad exactly..😳(*me trying to behave like another avni defending him!*)😳

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Sanvee_R

@Sanvee0812

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Posted: 7 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: Ashi3
the 2nd chapter. Beautiful! ❤️ Totally worth the wait.

So it was Ali. Loved Avni's interaction with everyone.
A triangle between Ali-Riya-DD? Hmmm.. intersting.

By break-up I meant breaking their friendship or whatever was there in between them. Ah! At last Neil Khanna makes his entry! 😎 Let's see what role does he play in all this. Till then let me keep speculating.

Nah! I didn't find too much of Riya. I hate her only in the show. But I love the positive Riya you create. So I don't mind reading more about her.

I'm super-excited to read the next part. Please update soon Sanju.. Waiting...

Thank you ashii😃

Hope you like the 3rd chapter as well...even im not sure..its a triangle or not...😳

Yes ..sort of break up if i go by that meaning...😔

Waiting for your comment...😊

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Sanvee_R

@Sanvee0812

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Posted: 7 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: IsisEirene
Hi Sanju
Read both the parts now. Though I don't remember participating in your poll but I still want to read this fic. I loved the bond between Avni and Rhea. And I am waiting to see what Neil has done with Avni. His hand inside Mitali's shirt... 😕 Kya kiya hai tumne Neil.

And you know you cannot stop updating now... 49 likes on first part and 33 on second...😉 with many more to follow... Girl bring it on... Waiting eagerly for the next part.

PS: Sorry, it took me a while to read and comment on this. Had been a bit busy for the past few days.

And yes... Happy Diwali to you. 😊

Happy Diwali...😃

Thank you soo much..😃

I think the problem is that only...he didn't do anything..he didn't acknowledge her feelings..😳

And about Mithali ... you'll know in chapter 3...It'sokay... Glad you too out time and commended...😊

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Sanvee_R

@Sanvee0812

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Posted: 7 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: avneil2
Wow,its awesome yaar.pls continue soon.

Thank you soo much😃

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Sanvee_R

@Sanvee0812

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Posted: 7 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: Chumki1234
So beautiful chapter
Loved it.continue soon

Thank you 😃

Will update when i reach response Target 😳

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Sanvee_R

@Sanvee0812

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Posted: 7 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: nimarious
happy diwali sanju 🤗
thanks for the diwali gift...
it was seriously worth reading...
I never thought that their encounter will be so light n comfortable...
their conversation was beautiful...
so Neil khanna is changed...
really want to know how they gonna confess to each other...
its really gonna be interesting...
do update soon...

Happy Diwali Sneha..🤗

Thank you 😃😃

Unexpected meet na.. it was soo peaceful..not dramatic..😳

Neil changed? I don't know... 😳

Even me... I really hope the confession will be realistic..😆

Let me dream about it...😳

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blablabla_mo7

@blablabla_mo7

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Posted: 7 years ago

#77

That's nice.. really well written.. will it be too much to ask you to post next 2 parts tmrw?? Hehehehe.. wait is torture 😉

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Sanvee_R

@Sanvee0812

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Posted: 7 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: blablabla_mo7
That's nice.. really well written.. will it be too much to ask you to post next 2 parts tmrw?? Hehehehe.. wait is torture 😉

Thank you😃

I'll post a chapter tmrw if i reach my response Target 😳