AvNeil FF: Haal-e-dil (BOOK 2) Part 33 UPDATED (PAGE 5) - Page 5

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

Girl where had you been !

Eagerly awaited honeymoon is coming up ! Have you been to Greece Zuu ?

Avni still hadn't come from her mei manhooz hon thing . I thought Neil was gonna cry for hurting her . It seemed so .

Neil and his lame jokes . Only he could pass such jokes ! How I miss this side of him in the show . What if he had voiced his mind that only Avni can leave her husband 😆 She is really a teacher as Neil says .

You are wonderful as always with your dialogues .

Update soon . Take care

Lots of love

Originally posted by: avneil2

Wow,loved it.pls continue soon.Waiting for honeymoon update.

Originally posted by: nimarious

Nice one zuu...
Ur dialogues always amaze me...
it lighten up my mood...
miss this neil in the show so much...
that kotwal thing was hilarious 😆
yes seriously avni is surely untrustable when it comes to Neil...
looking forward for their honeymoon in Greece...
do update soon
miss u 🤗

Originally posted by: Zenab78

Neil and his jokes

Wow they are going on honeymoon

Nice update

Update soon

Originally posted by: srividhya68

fabulous upt
loved it
cont soon

Originally posted by: Tanvi4

Superb one n loved the way u hv wrote n love their binding too. Will wait for next part

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Beautiful update
They had a long way to o cover before becoming husband and wife in true sense
Update soon please

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

good..

Originally posted by: shikhsk

Meri Zuu ki Zain.Finally saw it FF n now reading it .two parts back to back.brilliant as usual.bt second one I see you used the word Kotwal which I used once n see how nicely u used it rhyming with courtwalon . lovely update my love

Hayee zuu zuu loved this part a lot... Loved how neil came and was like "hey beautiful which scared avni out of the blue as she was busy with her work in the kitchen... loved how both were challenging each other when avni said she isn't not scared of anything and neil...hayee loved how after there convo neil was following avni everywhere and due to that avni by accidently cut through neil arm.. she was so worried for him while washing his blood while neil was relaxed and was just staring at avni... haha loved how avni was sarcastic to neil and said ""Keep following me more! I would say, follow me always! and how neil replied back saying "Oh so my wifey at least learnt to be sarcastic? One of the perks of having such a wonderful husband"... omg zuu zuu I just cracked up when neil was like "Ulta chor courtwaalon something something." And when avni corrected him loved his answer where he was like "Haan yes! Is that kotwal? Hahaha you won't believe this then! All my life I have been thinking it says something about the thief scolding the people of court for punishing him."...loved the tubelight convo between avneil especially how neil asked avni if she gets upset when he calls her tubelight and how she said no...oops neil hurt avn by his word which he didn't meant at all there was complete silence between the... loved shweta teasing them thinking they r romancing but in reality things had got tensed between avniel... When avni reached to her room loved how despite neil was sitting at the window looking outside he felt avni presence but still remained in the same position while avni looked at him and remembered the kitchen scene and what he said to her breaking her heart...loved how neil said sorry to avni which made avni look at neil seen him still in the same position looking out...finally neil got up and moved towards avni while avni kept her eyes fixed on his face and moved with his every action...loved how when he sat beside her he pulled her in for a side hug and glad avni didn't move away then...loved how neil cleared things with avni and told her he didn't mean anything but the thing I loved the most was when he said I didn't mean that all I have gone through is because of you. I would rather say the courage that I got to overcome those things is because of you. You are my strength, Avni! And never ever think otherwise! I love you with all my heart. I never knew I had it in me to love someone this much. I can survive any hurdles of this life, but not your silence Avni. Speak to me..." the way avni broke down in neil arms and hugged him was really touching and actually could imagine a scene like that between avneil..hayee finally they r back to their romance especially loved it when neil said "I'll make it up to you as soon as possible... which could be even now." Which made avni pull away from him hayee loved it when neil was like she knows what he means and avni was pretending she doesn't slowly moving away from neil while he was getting closer to her haha avni tricked neil by saying bebe name which made neil move away from her quickly... haha I just missed neil saying "hein loved the scene between them where avni was like "DIY" and neil was like "hein and then when avni was like "DO IT YOURSELF" again neil was like "hein which cracked me up... haha when avni translated it in hindi saying "Khudh Kar lo!" and neil was like I understand hindi and when avni was like "Then why are you going all "hein hein"?" cracked me up again... Haha loved how when neil was like y does he have to pack his bag when avni is there for him and when avni was like "Do I look like your maid?" and how neil replied saying "Don't tell me you are Bheema's twin!" yaar zuu zuu I just love the way u make neil say all of this...haha loved how avni was telling all to take care while neil was watching avni telling them to look after them and not do this and that.. haha when neil was like to avni "Judging by the rate in which you were scolding everyone, I thought you would do the same to me and head all the way to your honeymoon all by yourself." Only neil can give a lame remark like that... Now I cant wait for avenil moment in greece do update soon zuu zuu and hope to see u on the fourm more often like before