AvNeil FF: Haal-e-dil (BOOK 2) Part 33 UPDATED (PAGE 5) - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Zuu zuu baby well I have comment on book1 about u been back so wont mention it again but still I will say happy to see u back coming to the update loved chapter 32 loved how mitali was teasing avni and neil and then neela joined her to tease avni and neil especially when she was like "fine toh tum lag rahe ho neil konsw doctor ne yeh chamatkar kiya haan avni?... loved bebe concern for neil and then how neil joked saying "oh god tv serial waale chale gaye mere bebe ko chod kar...haha this nurse seems so moody ...even Im wondering what the gift could be... hayee neil never leaves a chance to romance with avni loved how he pulled her close to him haha loved it when neil said "koi nahin aayega our security guard nurse made sure that no one disturbs our romance...loved how tucked the strands of avni heir behind her ears...haha avni always trying tio get away but its always impossible for her... loved it when neil said how the family cut short their beautiful moment and how she wants to go away from him was able to imagine him pout while saying that////liked how avni was concerned for neil and told him to listen to her and rest but neil been neil...aww and poor boy got upset... could even him saying "okay jaao nahin karni tumse baat while folding his hand and looking the other way...haha loved it when avni decide to pull neil leg and said "now I am 100% sure that the chubby baby was you haha look at u cutie " and loved how she was about to pull his cheek but he hit her hand... awww loved it also when avni said " awww baby tusse naaraz ho? Baby tussi naaraz naa ho... loved how neil murmured "dialogue chor so that avni can hear it and avni pretended that now it was enough... loved how she said "ok enough I think the nurse was right I should leave THE PATIENT alone by stretching on the word patient and was about to go but neil was quick enough to grab her hand and stop her...hah aim happy avni won again... whe neil said "tussi jaa rahi ho? Tussi naa jaoo that dialogue just reminded me of kuch kuch hota hain movie and then how avni said dialogue chor and the way the both burst out laghing was sweet to read..liked how avni was watching neil while he was sleeping... So finally neil is getting discharged after twoo weeks...liked how avni asked neil if he remembers the say she was discharged...and how neil replied back saying "yea u were sitting on the bed like im am right now and I was busy packing the stuff like u are doing now... liked how avni grabbed neil phone and after that saif came close to neil and wrapped her arms around his neck and said remember how we talked about haal-e-dil... Liked how avni silenced neil when he was about to talk... liked how avni said "so I was wondering would u like to know my haal-e-dil and the neil replying say "is that even something to ask? Avni u are unbelievable... Did avni take neil in the wrong way since she started to pack the stuff again and gave neil his phone back...while neil was thinking about the whole point of the conversation ...haha the way shwets said dinner is ready and how bebe said is a sarcasm way "rabba hum sab ke raksha kare haha could imagine shweta making faces at bebe...hhaha the way avni was opeinig the envelope and shweta couldn't wait and opened it herself... yaya love bebe she gave the best gift to avneil honeymoon vacation...haha everyone was happy but I just loved avniel reaction could imagine avni choking while drinking water and neil with the soon stuck half way with mouth wide open it actually made me crack up ...when avneil was alone on the table I thought neil would say something else but he ended up saying " I think I am going be sick can u bring some medicine and water to the room I am going to sleep and even avni was surprised with that...8ff u just made me blush when avni entered the room all worried and then I was all blushing when neil wrapped his arms around her waist and his face buried in the side of her neck...lloved how neil silenced avni as he had no interest to leave avni anytime soon and avni her smile was getting big and her heart was racing fast while holding on to the tray tightly ...lovec how neil turned avni around and then shouted " we are going on our honeymoon haha I was actually laughing when he was break dancing and winking and sending flying kissed and if people were cheering for him...like avni even I had never imagine neil like this but thanks to u I kind of imagine neil doing all that... Aww when neil clamed down and asked avni in a soft tone if she is happy and how avni replied in the same tone asking if he is fine...haha ok now I burst out laughing when neil said "oh my wifey what will I do with u tubelight fil mein salam khan ke opposite tumhe jaanna chaiye that and how avnei replied saying "who kyun and I could imagine neil and his face palm action ...liked how avneil understand each other neil was about to tell avni if she doesn't want to go but before he could finish his sentence avni hugged neil and he knew exactly how happy his wifey is and whats going in her head and the only thing is that she doesn't know how to express it awww loved how u mentioned without words avneil talked to each other in the language of hugs...liked how neil fell asleep o the bed and avni smiled and didn't sleep on the couch and slept on the other side of the bed...aww how I missed that smirk of neil when he realised he was sleeping next to his wifey on the bed and she had no objections ...haye the scene of where neil was busy lost in looking at avni and when she was about to weak up how he pretending to sleep and then hugged her by the stomach made me remember the actual scene between avneik that happened in the show...the way how avni carefully moved neil hand and was about to get up but neil grabbed her wrist a=making her fall on him and how his good morning made avni heart skip a beat...loved how neil said "so the missus is finally ok with this eh? and avni knew what he clearly meant but she didn't say anything...and when avni didn't say anything neil opened his eyes to find a blushing avni..haha the way neil said all thanks to bebe he got his answers and when avni was confused and how gave all the reason I was like good point neil all thanks to my writer zuu zuu...now I really cant wait for the hm zuu zuu update soon lots of love from me...

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Posted: 7 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: avneil2

Awesome update.avneil honeymoon.pls continue soon.

Yes honeymoon 😳
Thankyou
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Posted: 7 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Tanvi4

Was waitng for update thanks for update it was amezing

Sorry for keeping you hanging. But good to know someone was waiting 😛
Thankyou 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Tumpa12

read all parts in one go
loved da ff
superbly written
update soon
n do pm me plzzz

In one go? 👏 That's nice!
Thankyou so much 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: nimarious

@zuu..
Ur welcome...
I m very happy that u r back...
hope to see u here as before...
waisebhi aajkl yaha bht kuch ho rha h 😆
that chuhi drama

As before thoda mushkil hai.. but I won't take that much time I took to update this. 😆
Arrey I know.. I have finished watching till that Chuhi chuhi entry 😡


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Posted: 7 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: pri12

Welcome Back Zuuu 🤗

Its been a long time...How r you??
Loved this one...AvNeil will go for honeymoon!!!
Waiting for their romance ;)

Priii 🤗
I am good. Hope you are doing good too.
Thankyou so much 😳
Missed much.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Finally an update after so long
Amazing update
Neil and Avni's romance can't be stopped now
Neil's reaction on honeymoon was hilarious
When he reached room, he acted like a child
Eagerly waiting for next update
Update soon

Haha haan main vanvaas mein gayithi lol 😆
Ikr, I like doing that to Neil 😆
Thankyou Gurveen 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: Kshailja

Yeaayyy, You are back...

Are you okay?? Everything fine?? You just disappeared...
But happy to see you back..
And Congratulations for Book 2...
Coming back to the chapter..
It's awesome...
Bebe is really the best.. The surprise.. I love it...
Greece... Wow... Finally a proper honeymoon..
And AvNeil romance.. I m lovin' it..
But I want some intense romance... Hehehehe..
I know I am demanding..
But Kya kre, when it comes to AvNeil, I become like this...
So update soon..

Hii Shailuuu. Was busy due to shifting, internet problems, work and also health But all good now thankfully.
Thankyou so much. Book 2 wouldn't have been possible without you all.
So happy to know you loved it. I was actually nervous to post after a long time 😆😆
I am fed up of Avneil's scattered romantic moments that I want a proper honeymoon for them, here if not there! Everyone wants that I know 😛
Haha demanding hona chahiye. You are on the right track.
Love you 😳

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Posted: 7 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: preya_radev

Zuu zuu baby well I have comment on book1 about u been back so wont mention it again but still I will say happy to see u back coming to the update loved chapter 32 loved how mitali was teasing avni and neil and then neela joined her to tease avni and neil especially when she was like "fine toh tum lag rahe ho neil konsw doctor ne yeh chamatkar kiya haan avni?... loved bebe concern for neil and then how neil joked saying "oh god tv serial waale chale gaye mere bebe ko chod kar...haha this nurse seems so moody ...even Im wondering what the gift could be... hayee neil never leaves a chance to romance with avni loved how he pulled her close to him haha loved it when neil said "koi nahin aayega our security guard nurse made sure that no one disturbs our romance...loved how tucked the strands of avni heir behind her ears...haha avni always trying tio get away but its always impossible for her... loved it when neil said how the family cut short their beautiful moment and how she wants to go away from him was able to imagine him pout while saying that////liked how avni was concerned for neil and told him to listen to her and rest but neil been neil...aww and poor boy got upset... could even him saying "okay jaao nahin karni tumse baat while folding his hand and looking the other way...haha loved it when avni decide to pull neil leg and said "now I am 100% sure that the chubby baby was you haha look at u cutie " and loved how she was about to pull his cheek but he hit her hand... awww loved it also when avni said " awww baby tusse naaraz ho? Baby tussi naaraz naa ho... loved how neil murmured "dialogue chor so that avni can hear it and avni pretended that now it was enough... loved how she said "ok enough I think the nurse was right I should leave THE PATIENT alone by stretching on the word patient and was about to go but neil was quick enough to grab her hand and stop her...hah aim happy avni won again... whe neil said "tussi jaa rahi ho? Tussi naa jaoo that dialogue just reminded me of kuch kuch hota hain movie and then how avni said dialogue chor and the way the both burst out laghing was sweet to read..liked how avni was watching neil while he was sleeping... So finally neil is getting discharged after twoo weeks...liked how avni asked neil if he remembers the say she was discharged...and how neil replied back saying "yea u were sitting on the bed like im am right now and I was busy packing the stuff like u are doing now... liked how avni grabbed neil phone and after that saif came close to neil and wrapped her arms around his neck and said remember how we talked about haal-e-dil... Liked how avni silenced neil when he was about to talk... liked how avni said "so I was wondering would u like to know my haal-e-dil and the neil replying say "is that even something to ask? Avni u are unbelievable... Did avni take neil in the wrong way since she started to pack the stuff again and gave neil his phone back...while neil was thinking about the whole point of the conversation ...haha the way shwets said dinner is ready and how bebe said is a sarcasm way "rabba hum sab ke raksha kare haha could imagine shweta making faces at bebe...hhaha the way avni was opeinig the envelope and shweta couldn't wait and opened it herself... yaya love bebe she gave the best gift to avneil honeymoon vacation...haha everyone was happy but I just loved avniel reaction could imagine avni choking while drinking water and neil with the soon stuck half way with mouth wide open it actually made me crack up ...when avneil was alone on the table I thought neil would say something else but he ended up saying " I think I am going be sick can u bring some medicine and water to the room I am going to sleep and even avni was surprised with that...8ff u just made me blush when avni entered the room all worried and then I was all blushing when neil wrapped his arms around her waist and his face buried in the side of her neck...lloved how neil silenced avni as he had no interest to leave avni anytime soon and avni her smile was getting big and her heart was racing fast while holding on to the tray tightly ...lovec how neil turned avni around and then shouted " we are going on our honeymoon haha I was actually laughing when he was break dancing and winking and sending flying kissed and if people were cheering for him...like avni even I had never imagine neil like this but thanks to u I kind of imagine neil doing all that... Aww when neil clamed down and asked avni in a soft tone if she is happy and how avni replied in the same tone asking if he is fine...haha ok now I burst out laughing when neil said "oh my wifey what will I do with u tubelight fil mein salam khan ke opposite tumhe jaanna chaiye that and how avnei replied saying "who kyun and I could imagine neil and his face palm action ...liked how avneil understand each other neil was about to tell avni if she doesn't want to go but before he could finish his sentence avni hugged neil and he knew exactly how happy his wifey is and whats going in her head and the only thing is that she doesn't know how to express it awww loved how u mentioned without words avneil talked to each other in the language of hugs...liked how neil fell asleep o the bed and avni smiled and didn't sleep on the couch and slept on the other side of the bed...aww how I missed that smirk of neil when he realised he was sleeping next to his wifey on the bed and she had no objections ...haye the scene of where neil was busy lost in looking at avni and when she was about to weak up how he pretending to sleep and then hugged her by the stomach made me remember the actual scene between avneik that happened in the show...the way how avni carefully moved neil hand and was about to get up but neil grabbed her wrist a=making her fall on him and how his good morning made avni heart skip a beat...loved how neil said "so the missus is finally ok with this eh? and avni knew what he clearly meant but she didn't say anything...and when avni didn't say anything neil opened his eyes to find a blushing avni..haha the way neil said all thanks to bebe he got his answers and when avni was confused and how gave all the reason I was like good point neil all thanks to my writer zuu zuu...now I really cant wait for the hm zuu zuu update soon lots of love from me...

Oh how I missed this Preya. Still very astonished about the fact that you never get tired of writing so long. Ma Sha Allah.
Thankyou so much. This is not even enough to thank you for this comment.
Just love you Preya and missed you.
Sometimes you pull off the emotions better than me in just your comments that it makes me smile throughout. 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#30
hii cutie.. so good to see you back..
Missed you a lot...
Chapter was awesome as always. It should be after all it's first chapter of the second book of my favourite author...😃
Naughty Mitali, lovely bebe, over excited shweta and the love birds... I just love the way you brought all the magic back within a single update so effortlessly.

I really missed your writing..
So Mr and Mrs Tillu finally on honeymoon.. Woh bhi Greece.. I am sure we'll enjoy that too..

Yeah!! We value things most when we are at the verge of losing them... But fortunate are those who get them back so that they could let that person know about it..

Anyways thank you for coming back..
Keep writing such lovely chapters and don't make us wait for sooo long...

HAPPY DIWALI..

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