RS:Juhi's bachha track : (08-10-2017) last part on pg 14

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Sanvee_R

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Posted: 7 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: pri12
This was amazinggg...Loved it Loved it..
I cried reading the update...You are amazing writer...
Poor avni😭
Her Lines in the end were heart breaking..

Aw.. thank-you pri..😃❤️

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Debaparna ghosh

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Posted: 7 years ago

#62

u made me cry...why this always happens to avni..just why???anyways nice part...nd give 1 more part possible

Edited by Lusi123 - 7 years ago

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Nandhu_Arshi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#63

You are making me cry Avni doesn't deserve any of this !!!

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ChhalkiSyaahi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#64

Sanju...

This is so beautiful and poignant. I can totally see Avni walking out of the house. Neil really needs to justify his actions. And Shweta ignoring Tillu was too good. Continue soon dear. I had tears in my eyes reading this. I read both the chapters in one go

You know Avni needs to understand that she is not Neela, neither is her situation same as her Neela Maa.. Avni's reaction will be different. My poor girl.

Continue soon Sanju. I just loved this.

Edited by PrincessFlavia - 7 years ago

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Sanvee_R

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Posted: 7 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: Lusi123
u made me cry...why this always happens to avni..just why???anyways nice part...nd give 1 more part possible

Sorry for making you emotional 😳

Yup..one more is coming..😊

Thank-you..

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Sanvee_R

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Posted: 7 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: Nanak_Arshi
You are making me cry Avni doesn't deserve any of this !!!

I'm sorry

But it's what I felt she'll feel is such a situation arises...😳

Thank-you 😊

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Sanvee_R

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Posted: 7 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: PrincessFlavia
Sanju...
This is so beautiful and poignant. I can totally see Avni walking out of the house. Neil really needs to justify his actions. And Shweta ignoring Tillu was too good. Continue soon dear. I had tears in my eyes reading this. I read both the chapters in one go

You know Avni needs to understand that she is not Neela, neither is her situation same as her Neela Maa.. Avni's reaction will be different. My poor girl.

Continue soon Sanju. I just loved this.

Thank-you sooo much...😊

Yes, I agree avni needs to understand that she isn't Neela ..she isn't Ayesha...she is Avni..Avni Neil...😳

Will try to update soon...

N thanks for the comment❤️