Avneil:Destined to be yours.A Unique love story.chapter 4 pg 2 - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: anumiklove

No No pls continue 😃[/QUOTE

yaa sure dear..do u loved the story..please describe..and this story will be completely of suspense

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Newest part..i was waiting for response by everyone.however only @anumiklove and @...san... responsed back...so i am not discontinuing..let me post all parts..then will see the comments..also posting 3 new stories.. and the part is dedicated to u 2...

Avni was wondering a thing since morning when she had seen Neil, and the other 2 girls. She was being reminded of her past . she wondered what happened to her childhood friends Neil,Ali,lavu(lavanya),samu(samiksha) kia,kareena. she, riya ,aman ,mitali,akash,vivek. used to play with all of them. where were they. she was wondering that what happened to them all,mitali had been meeting her every evening since she was her neighbour.she was wondering what happened to all of them after...rest of it flowed away as neela maa came

(mitali has also been here as for her studies. she too is in the same college)

(author note : u have to guess what happened to all of them. also as per all of ur choice , )


neela: kya soch rahi ho avni?

avni : maa yaad hai mai aur riya aman mitali, neil ali kareena lavanya aur samiksha bachpan me khelte thai. fir jab hum 12 saal ke the. tab voh sab kaha chale gaye. hum chaar toh vaha se bach gaye the, par voh sab. aaj bhi unki kitni yaad aati hai. pata nahi inda hai bhi ki nahi.aur hum jab vaha se sabko bachaane ki koshish kiye tab neil,lavanya, samiksha aur kia ke haath me jal gaya tha. uske baad toh voh kabhi nahi mile...

neela : par tum aaj yeh baat kyn kar rahi ho?

avni : maa aaj maine 3 dost banaye. un tino ka naam bhi neil, lavanya ur samiksha tha. unn teeno ke haath bhi ek jala hua cut dikha. teeno ke. aur lavanya samiksha toh mujhe unki ek dost se milane jaa rahe the ki bell baj gayi aur sab apne ghar chale gaye. voh kia kia kuch aisa keh rahe thai.

neela was stunned hearing all this. how it coould be possible. coz if they were alive, they would have come. avni was too having te similiar turmoil..



shift to neil's home

neil : kareena yaad hai bachpan mai ham sab kaise khelte the.

kareena : ha bahi yaad hai. par aaj voh baat aise kyu pooch rahe ho.

neil: aaj maine 1 dost banayi. uska bhi naam avni tha. ham sab ek dusre se 7 saat saal se nahi mile. hum sab dost

kareena : toh

neil : aisa lag raha tha ki voh hamari dost avni hai. us haadseh ke baad

kareena : pata nahi bhai . ho sakta hai. par ab sote hai. us haadseh ko mat yaad dilao...



precap : will they get to know the reality. will they avni get to know what had happened . will all friends meet again



please give hundreds of likes and please comment. do share this story with ur friends.i don't like silent readers if they don't comment..this piece is also hardwork..so please don't ignore..

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Avni was sleeping heavily..her breathing was irregular..whatever happened that day was coming as nightmares in her dreams.and she shouted a lot..suddenly she woke up from her dream to witness that neela was worried for her that why she shouting...she held her head tightly...neela understood it was the same thing she dreamt last night...



avni dressed up in a casual dress and got ready for her work..she reached college...there she bumped into someone...she couldn't see her face as the other girl quickly got up and went to the room she was going. avni sat at the same place where she had to...and then she felt something familiar.she turned her face sideways to see a unexpected thing.kia?how could it be.she felt her past returning ...how could kia be alive..why she is feeling familiar...kia saw her ...but she too felt familiar.she thought"why she is staring me and why do i feel so familiar..what is happening..avni turned her head back and got focused on her study...after the bell rang lavu and samu made her meet with kia...kia said ,hi .nice to meet u..i feel familiar something in u..avni said 'i too am happy to meet u.i too felt familiar...they parted and avni was starting walking when a announcement was heard...

sorry for short update but to drag the story forward i have to do this


do guess what could be the announcement and what is the mystery of kia's and avni's relation

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Posted: 7 years ago
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precap: announcement heard.what could it be?

answer : a surprise

the surprise is a trip...

The voice was audible to everyone ...and then it was...'trip ' 'students interested may submit money by tomorrow...and the trip will have lot's of fun...u will do camping hiking and many fun activities and games.a 3 day trip...

so next day,all submitted the money..avni was in a turmoil.she didn't wanted to visit any place but her friends(neil,lavu,samu,mitali,aman ) made her agree...

so soon the group was seen together in the canteen..neil was sitting with his friends along with aman.(ali and akash vivek).. They were laughing madly...

Avni was sitting with mitali .and Lavanya and Samiksha sat with them..They all had fun ... They all 4 were discussing about the trip..

Riya was coming to the place where the trip was being held.and the trip was tomorrow and riya will reach there today night... riya is coming there for some work. ..

Precap : What will be in the 1st day of trip.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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not getting even a single comment..hey are u all there also or not..coz i always see comments on evry topic except mine..i wonder what's wrong..should i leave ..and discontinue..😡😭
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: srividhya68

great updates
cont soon


thank you so much sweetie..i had given up to continue both my stories...ur comment..but a very short one.. was waiting for many comments.. thx srividhya..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: avneil2

Superb update.pls,continue soon.


thx so much..i hoped more comments and longer ones... and i was literally going to discontinue it.. please do comment longer... what's ur name friend?

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