Avneil:Destined to be yours.A Unique love story.chapter 4 pg 2

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So coming on to the characters. All characters in the show except for all negative people gurumaa sapola gang etc. And dayaben is positive. Juhi is not in my ff. And Avni's parents are died already in a plane crash.So coming on to the characters. All characters in the show except for all negative people gurumaa sapola gang etc. And dayaben is positive. Juhi is not in my ff. And Avni's parents are fied already in a plane crash.this story is a completely different one..and it is amazing ,full of suspense...and u will have to guess many things..this is a story u would never have read..nor have thought..so here u go the prologue.i will describe avni and neil ...</font>
Avni is a college girl. She used to live in India, Mumbai but temporarily shifted for 4 years to Delhi with her stepmom Neela (same as in the show) for her college . She is a cute chubby girl but her parents died in a plane crash . Fortunately His father Ashish mehta had married two ladies, Ayesha and Neela. Ayesha gave birth tp Avni nd Aman. Neela loved both of them like their own mother. Dayaben always loved her grandchildren. Ketan and diksha, they were loving adults as bua and chachu. Hetal was a loving chachi of avni and riya. Riya was a loving sister. She is a chubby lively girl. Loves her mother father avni and her family. She and Avni were like best friends and best sisters.



Neil is also a college boy. He was also living in Mumbai.He shifted to Delhi temporarily for 4 years for his college. He had her fun loving parents and grandmom, whom he called bebe. He had his real sister Kareena. He loved her more than anyone and was overprotective for her. He Shifted with Kareena to Delhi. Kareena was also a college girl.
Neil was a flirty guy.



Watch how the unique love story of AvNeil reveals!

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Posted: 8 years ago
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please comment everyone..don't just view
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Sami.. Nice concept..
He's not a cop here.. Although it's hard to imagine DM positive and loving but still..
Do update the chapter soon.. I really liked the title Destined to be yours..

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: vu1998

Sami.. Nice concept..

He's not a cop here.. Although it's hard to imagine DM positive and loving but still..
Do update the chapter soon.. I really liked the title Destined to be yours..



yaa..neil is not a cop...dm is positive in all 3 ffs of mine.cvs are making worst of her character and not at all doing justice...so i am doing justice with her...miss reema ji..she played her character very well..yaa will update soon...and thx for the title...to tell this is a college story
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: shreya2202

Nice concept, plz continue 😊


yaa sure yaar...
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Originally posted by: sushfiza

Nice intro

Continue soon



thx soo much yaar...i will continue soon.friends?besties?what is ur name?mine samiksha or u call me sami..
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Avni was glancing her college. She murmured to herself " Yeh meri manzil hai. Aur mujhe isse koi bhi door nahi kar sakta She was happy to start her new journey. She wanted to meet new friends and people. She didn't want any enemy there. She already lost her most precious people in the world. So she started walking to her class. Unfortunately she bumped into someone.

She saw that person. He was a young boy and was the most handsome lovely looking person. He stood up and looked to her with a genuine smile. She smiled back to him. He extended his hand and asked " I am new here. Can i be friends with u? Avni : First tell ur name. Mine is Avni. He : I am Neil. She extended her hand firmly and said : I am too new here. Nice to meet u.

They started walking that they again bumped into each other. They laughed. He started walking faster. She noticed that the room he entered was her room too. She entered the room. The seat which was left was adjacent to him and 2 girls . When she sat there, the girls greeted her. The girl adjacent to her was Lavanya and adjacent to Lavanya was Samiksha. The professor came in. He greeted all the students. Everyone liked the professor. The professor told that i teach students in a fun and encouraging manner. So i would like to know ur views after a month...

The professor as liked by everyone on day only. And the day got over.


The bell rang. Avni asked both the girls there names. They both told avni. And avni made friends with them . So Avni was feeling happy as she made 3 friends in one day only... So blissful her life was. She thanked god for giving such beautiful friends to her...



(Author's note : i will add kia later in the story ... And now to tell my story is based on suspense..)

Precap : A new day. Will the day would have surprises or tragedy for avni

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This bonus update is for vohu's bday,deepti,sanju,shreya,dragon,devsaya,shalija,oorja,shibu,shikha,mehak and everyone who commented on my updates ans stories.anyway please do comment on all my stories and do comment on 'what will happen'.do continue the short story soon.
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hey i am getting no comments..should i delete it...if i won't get any response then the story is discontinued😡
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Originally posted by: Sami72

hey i am getting no comments..should i delete it...if i won't get any response then the story is discontinued😡

No No pls continue 😃

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