#GOTW- Let's Write a Story - Page 3

Prakash picked up the spoon and said "Bebe, Avni tab khaa payegi jab yeh badmash uska haath chore ga"
Bebe, Maddy and Kareea started laughing, Neil spat out his water and loosened his grip, taking the chance Avni got up and said "main abhi aati hoon" and took a hurried exit to avoid further embarrasment.
Neil pretended to attend a call and walked away and sneaked into the kitchen where Avni was pretending to be busy.
Avni sensed Neil behind her and tried to move away but Neil quickly got hold of her hand and pulled her back towards him
Avni: Neil yeh tum kya kar rahe ho, koi ...?
Neil: Sshhh

Neel caged her in his arms more tightly and then starts to breathe in the nape of her neck... feeling his hot breathe on her neck.. she feels charmed in his proximity.. she feels like she is under a spell which can't be broken ever...
He starts to touch nape of her neck by his lips.. he gives her many wet kisses.. when he is about to mark her his.. he hears someone coughing.. neel still doesn't want to let go avni out of his arms because he thinks that it might be illusion.. but avni forcefully finds her way out of his arms and when she turns she finds bebe standing on the door of kitchen with her eyes covered by her hands..
She blushes and says "bebe"
This brings confused neel who was staring avni dumbfoundedly out of his trance.. he too turns and see bebe.
He stammers while blushing "be-bebe aap ya-yaha"

Bebe "now can i open my eyes"

"Uff! Tun dono ko naa gift wrapper mein wrap karke second honeymoon pe bhejna chahiye, sacchi," Bebe spoke, embarrassed.

Neil was staring at bebe. He gave an angry look to bebe.
Bebe - tum dono hi salto. Jab jhagda pura ho jaaye tab faiska bata dena. Mai toh jaa rahi hoon.
Neil was angry with bebe and avni but didn't showed his anger.Yeh bebe sach mai hamare romance ki dushman hai, he thought.. He just pulled avni closer and dragged themselves to the room.
He said - Tum kya samajhti ho apne aap ko mrs neil. Can't u go with ur sweet hubby ?
Avni nodded a yes and then started running away.
Neil thought in his mind " Aise nahi jaane doonga wifey. And he got hold of her again. He dragged her closer to him. And he took them to the bed...

He looked at her shivering looks. He was tempted to kiss them, but he stopped.

Intazaar shabd vapis mat bolna. Mai kabhi bhi tumse door nahi jaa sakta hoon na kabhi jaane doonga wifey.. Aur yeh tum yaad rakhna, avni.

Avni was wonderstruck and happy hearing those words from Neil. And she saw him walking away. Kaha jaa rahe ho. Roku
She got hold of him and made him sit. She closed his eyes and softly kissed his lips , passionately, gengly. He was tempted for this as he finally was contended that she was his. He reciprocated. She crashed her lips fiercly,demandinghis attention. And he was surprised at her action...

As they broke apart, they placed their heads together (forehead touching) to catch their breath.

Avni: Neil tum jaana chata te ki main tumhare baare main kya fee karti hoon... main tumse, i love ...
Neil: Ssshhh, tum kuch kehne ki zaroorat nahi hai... matlab abhi nahi... main woh pal bohot special banana chata hoon, tumhare liye...

Avni couldn't hold her emotions, how can someone love her so unconditionally. She just went straight into his arms and Neil recipricated the hug with equal passion.


( a confession on the way, im excited... lets get the story moving ) 😆

Avni was feeling that she was in heaven. Neil delt that his soil came to peace. They both were resting in each other's arms, in each other's company. How peaceful moments they were having. Beads of tears were stuck to a mother's eye who was watching them. She said god may keep my cchildren happy. And those two souls were relieved of all pains till now in their life

Avni was feeling that she was in heaven. Neil delt that his soil came to peace. They both were resting in each other's arms, in each other's company. How peaceful moments they were having. Beads of tears were stuck to a mother's eye who was watching them. She said god may keep my cchildren happy. And those two souls were relieved of all pains till now in their life.




Neil spoke up : Hamara confession grand style me hoga. And we have 10 days for it. So it should be a surprise for each other.

Avni : Thik hai. Mai poori tayaari ke saath aaungi. Tum bhi aana zaroor.



( have mentioned the last line emphasising cpz i want that till their confession no tragedy comes acoording to my thoughts. As @AvniNeil mentioned that he /she (i don't know her gender) is exicted for the confession)

Neil wasn't to be seen during the entire day. Avni knew he was upto something and was really excited. Each passing minute seemed to remind her of his promise, his kiss, their first kiss! She couldn't wait to see him, but Neil had to leave for an important meeting with the DCP.