#GOTW- Let's Write a Story

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Posted: 8 years ago
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This game is really simple. I will write the first sentence, and then you will have to write another continuing it. We will play this for a week, and at the end, we will join all the lines to make it a story. Just make sure that you don't add any unnecessary line that deviates the story into some other direction. WRITE ONLY MEANINGFUL LINES. Also, each post should contain only ONE dialogue or Avni and Neil each.

Do not quote posts qhile continuing the story and please do not chat unnecessarily. You can quote to answer queries.

Idea credits: Kya Qusoor Hai Amla Ka Forum
Edited by __shibani__ - 8 years ago

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oh_nakhrewaali thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
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Avni assumed that Neil was asleep, but what she wasn't aware of was that Neil was watching her struggle wiping her hair.
"Ugh! Yeh baal!" She muttered softly and continued wiping her hair roughly, wincing everytime doing so pained her. Neil enjoyed watching her mutter to herself but decided to help her.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Avni suddenly felt a pair of hands gently take the towel from her and continued the task. Avni was shocked for a second before she realized that it was Neil. They both stayed silent as Neil lovingly wiped her hair. He stopped to pull a chair for Avni and himself, "Betho, I think so we Have a lot to talk about."
I fear that I might have spoiled it.
Btw, I like your idea
Edited by Avneilfan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Avneilfan

Avni suddenly felt a pair of hands gently take the towel from her and continued the task. Avni was shocked for a second before she realized that it was Neil. They both stayed silent as Neil lovingly wiped her hair. He stopped to pull a chair for Avni and himself, "Betho, I think so we Have a lot to talk about."

I fear that I might have spoiled it.
Btw, I like your idea

@bold, no you haven't😳
@red, credita go to my friend from KQHAK forum😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Avneilfan

Avni suddenly felt a pair of hands gently take the towel from her and continued the task. Avni was shocked for a second before she realized that it was Neil. They both stayed silent as Neil lovingly wiped her hair. He stopped to pull a chair for Avni and himself, "Betho, I think so we Have a lot to talk about."

I fear that I might have spoiled it.
Btw, I like your idea





But u have left avneil na. Do u still want to continue on them. To say i am SamilovesAvNeil from wattpad. And i could continueit...


Avni asked - What's teh important matter.
Neil - Sirf ha ya na me jawaab dena
Avni : Ha thik hai
Neil - Do u want to continue this relationship
Avni : Ha
Neil - Do u love me?
Avni : Uhh... ha


gosh. I thought i would spoil it
oh_nakhrewaali thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#6
Please stick to writing maximum two dialogues per post
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Posted: 8 years ago
#7

Originally posted by: SweetgirlSami1



But u have left avneil na. Do u still want to continue on them. To say i am SamilovesAvNeil from wattpad. And i could continueit...


Avni asked - What's teh important matter.
Neil - Sirf ha ya na me jawaab dena
Avni : Ha thik hai
Neil - Do u want to continue this relationship
Avni : Ha
Neil - Do u love me?
Avni : Uhh... ha


gosh. I thought i would spoil it


Yes I hv. But let's enjoy the little freedom I hv before i leave forever. ONS update will be to mark my farewell
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Neil looked at her in shock. He hadn't expected her to voice out her emotions out loud. He was happy! He couldn't express his feelings. But then, his happiness was short lived.
"Neil, pyaar karne aur pyaar nibhaane mein farak hai. Main tumse pyaar toh karti hoon, par nibha sakungi yaa nahi, I am not sure,"
Neil knew he had to convince her of how strong she was and that thier love wasn't weak.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Avneilfan


Yes I hv. But let's enjoy the little freedom I hv before i leave forever. ONS update will be to mark my farewell




I wondered if it could join it back to me. 🥺
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey @Avneilfan and Samiksha,
Sorry if I sound rude, but do not chat here please, becuase it breaks the flow of the story for both, the writers and readers😊

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