Avneil TS:Kismat (LAST PART UPDATED AT PG 11 13/11) - Page 7

Originally posted by: rinku95

awesome

superb ending

Originally posted by: vu1998

Mehak.. Beautiful.. Beautiful.. Beautiful...

Two good news together.. OMG!! Avni pregnant..😳

All songs were beautiful and well suited on their situation..

Neil finally found her.. I loved everything about it..

Waiting for prologue..

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Fantastic update
Avni and Neil are both together after all the trouble and problems
And they also confessed their love too

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

Awesome

Originally posted by: Kshailja

Awesome...

Confession was really good...

I want them to sing in the show to...

And the song selection was very good...

Loved the updates...

Update next part soon..

Originally posted by: anumiklove

hey... where r u?

Right first of all sorry for the late comment I was really excited when I saw that u updated but didn't get time to comment or read it but now here I am coming to the update loved the 3^rd part a lot mehak... the song that u chose when avni was walking in the park lost in her own world and cryinf I was able to imagine it...loved the way u described avni pov...especially loved it when she was like "god u think u will break me completely so u have mistaken I am not weak and vulnerable like u think I am neil says im strong and a brave girl and I wont let him down I wont let him to be proved wrong I will live this life I wont break and let u win so what if u have taken my neil my love from me I have his memories I will love my whole life with those beautiful memories... also loved this line "I cant live without neil his is my life my heart my soul my everything also my heart is with him I had left my heart with him and without my heart I am not alive... omg avni is leaving Mumbai I hope neil gets to her soon... The song that played on the radio was a great choice although it didn't help avni...loved the flashback scene of avneil loved how neil was mesmerized the way avni was singing and how he smiled to himself thinking avni was say the last line to him indirectly... omg loved th ebit where he walked towards her and hugged her from behind while inhaling the nape of her neck singing which made avnii startled hope to see something like that in the show...o loved how avni turned around and placed her hand around his neck and continued singing loved how they were dancing was able to imagine that...opps Neela maa call broke the moment aww poor neil got angry and pretended to sleep as his moment with avni got disturbed...liked how avni came back and saw neil sleeping and how she hugged him and said sorry and he way neil hugged her back tightly...finally neil found avni car but god knows where she went leaving it in the middle...poor neil happy the dd was there loved the way dd hugged neil and also told about the files that had info about the bomb blast and avni is the one to solve it and its none other than amol who was behind the blast...omg and the other report was avni where it states she is pregnant im so happy...even I hope avni is alright since the found her bracelet and that was a gift from neil to her...again loved the second flashback...hayeee loved the way avni got shy when neil hugged her from the back and avni was like "what r u doing neil and the way neil replied "nothing just romancing with my tubelight wifey...aww avni loved neils gift...loved the way neil made avni wear it and puilled her closer...thank god dd was keeping a track of avni and knew she is nearby... I wonder what made neil happy when he was trying avni call and ran to the car poor dd didn't even get his answer..omg these drunken men r after avni I hope she gets away or super cop tillu gets there on time...so that's how avni duppata and bracelet fell on the road...haha good one avni loved how she hit the man between his legs and ran away...damn those guys caught up with avni really don't like how they r touching her...omg thanks to that old couple who made the police siren sound and saved avni...0h wow so this aakash is a police officer and thanks to his grandparents q neil and dd reached to his place where avni is... loved it when neil ran to the room where avni sis and how knocked on the door and how rubbed her eyes thinking she is imagining neil ... loved how neil sang and expressed his feeling to avni...just loved neil confession speech each and every bit was outstanding mehak..and also loved how avni accepted his proposal...now I cant wait for the epilogue so jaldi so update mehak baby and once again fantastic update will also read your other work and comment soon

This is my three shot's epilogue, as requested. Finally I could write this, sorry for such a delay. hope you like it.

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Author's POV

The trio go to the car and sits, in the journey back home, DD tells about the two files and neel tells that his mom has done everything. Avni is having mix emotions after listening to the whole thing, firstly of being in love with her prince charming and of being happy because of the report that told her that she soon will going to be a mother. Being sad at the same time, because of what her aman, no amol has done with neel and also because of Shweta aunty that how could she do that with her, and especially with neel. She bravely fights her tears back because she doesn't want to trouble neel, also she haves a discussion with herself, regarding what she can do now. While laying her head on his shoulder and being in his arms, she thinks. Neel has put his head on hers, he is also thinking but his world is different, he is thinking about their future. While they are in their own worlds, the journey ends and they reach home.

When they reach home, bebe stops avni and neel on the door and does their aarti.

After they come inside and settles down on the sofa, neel and avni tells what happened with them. The family hears them with disbelieve and sees avni with love and concern, and they are glad that their kids are safe and sound now.

At this point Shweta comes to Khanna house, she is standing at the door.

Neel sees her first and he stands and says with anger why have you come here after I have told you not to

Shweta is about to say something but Avni says " I have called her

everyone stands. Neel says in disbelieve "what you

Avni says "yes me, and Shweta aunty come inside please

And Shweta does as avni says.

Everyone is angry with her and does not look at Shweta except avni.

Neel says "but how and why

Avni tells them how she has done.

****FLASHBACK*****

When they are there in their different worlds, with avni caged in his arms and resting on his shoulder she takes out her phone and use it while hiding the screen from neel.

Neel asks "What are you doing

Avni looks at neel and says "nothing

Neel says "avni tell me na

Avni puts her phone down, and says "nothing mr super cop

And she smiles, seeing her neel also smiles and he puts his head back on her head.

**** END OF FLASHBACK*****

Neel says in disbelieve "So you were messaging her in the car

Avni nods.

Neel asks "But why

Avni says "because I want a family neil

Neel says "avni we have a family so why do you want her in the family

Avni says "because she like a mother to me

Neel says "she tried to separate us

Avni says "everyone makes a mistake, and they deserve a second chance. She also deserves, like you gave me. I was case 123, still you gave me a chance to be avni. So cant you give her

Neel says "avni

Avni says "see neel you cant win in this argument, also cant you just forgive her for me, please neel. Bebe please , please dad. Please, pretty please. Neel how many pretty do I have to put before please so that you can forgive her

Neel glares her. When she looks at bebe and dad with sad puppy dog eyes.

Bebe and Prakash says "okay and after seeing a tear in avni's eye neel's heart melt and he turns to Shweta and says "only because of avni I am forgiving you, but I am giving you a warning, even if a tear comes in her eyes because of you then I wont leave you

Listening to neel, avni goes and hugs neel, she says "thank you so much neel and she smiles

And neel hugs her back.

Seeing this everyone smiles.

Shweta gets touched by this gesture of avni and says "I will never separate you, and will never let anyone separate you I promise. Thank you avni and sorry avni and neel, because of me all this happened, and you still got me back here. I don't know how to express my gratitude, also I don't know how to ask for forgiveness, I know that my crime is not forgivable but still forgive me for my deeds and Shweta joins her hands in front of her and cries.

Avni separates herself from neel and goes to her and wipes off her tears and holds her hands and says "don't say like this aunty you are elder to us and please don't say sorry

Shweta eyes got teary again seeing avni's goodness, she says "I have to because of my crimes, please forgive me.

Avni says "I forgive you aunty

Shweta smiles and says "then call me mom

Avni wipes her tears and says "mom

Shweta pulls avni for a quick hug, she says "don't know why I couldn't see your goodness, god bless you

Bebe says "don't worry, from now on start to see it

Shweta says "you are right bebe

Bebe opens her arms and everyone hugs.

*****LEAP (3 months later)(her 5^th month)*****

In the mid-night

In avni and neel's room, neel is on the couch while avni is laying down on the bed, neel is studying a case and avni is studying him.

Avni breaks the silence and says "neel I am hungry

Neel looks at her and asks "what do you wanna have baby

Avni says "whatever you give

Neel says "okay wait, I will bring something good

Neel gets up and goes to the kitchen and makes her favorite poha which she demanded yesterday. He takes it to her.

When he comes back in the room, he finds her to be sitting on the bed with her legs crossed. He says "avni see what I have got for you

Avni looks at the plate and makes a face, she says "poha, you made me poha, I don't wanna have this

Neel says "what do you wanna have neel didn't feel bad as it is their daily routine.

Avni's face lights and she says " white pasta and oreo shake

Neel says "wow what a weird combination

Avni pouts and says "it's a nice combination

Neel says "okay I will get that

Avni smiles and says "you are the best

Neel gets up and again goes to the kitchen to make some things

He brings her pasta and shake to the room and finds avni eating poha.

Neel says "you are eating my poha

Avni says "because you took so long

Neel smiles seeing so chubby and bubbly and then they eat food.

*****LEAP (some months)*****

Avni and neil are in their bedroom, avni is lying down on the bed reading her favorite novel while neel is giving her a nice foot massage.

Neel breaks the silence and says "you know you look so cute being heavily pregnant

Avni smiles and says "yeah neel I know that, you would have told me that atleast a thousand time now

Neel says "yeah maybe you are right

Suddenly, avni feels extreme pain and she throws the book on the bed and shouts in pain.

Neel gets scared seeing avni like this.

He gets up and asks "what happened avni

Avni shouts "what what happened you idiot

Listening to her screams, the family comes running to their room and finds avni cursing and hitting neel with pillows which he is almost able to dodge.

Bebe understands her condition and says "tillu, what are you doing she is in labour, carry her to the car and sunny you go and get the car ready.

Shweta and Prakash go down, while neel picks her avni who is continuously cursing him for his tubelightness that he cant understand that she is in labour.

Neel lays her in the car, when he is about to sit besides her in the backseat, she kicks him.

Avni shouts "don't you dare come near me neel Khanna

Neel's face fell as he goes in front to sit with his dad who is sitting in the driver seat.

Bebe and Shweta sits with avni, bebe has put her head in her lap while Shweta has put her feet in her laps.

Avni is crying loudly in pain and bebe is giving her assurance that everything will get fine soon, and Shweta is helping bebe. Avni is nodding at their words but it seems like nothing is working much as she is in between cursing neel and blaming him for her condition.

Neel says to Prakash "dad she is yelling at me but behaving so nicely with mom and bebe. I have done so much for her in the past months and now she is cursing me

Prakash says "I know neel how it feels, Shweta has done this with me as well when you were on the way

Neel asks "really dad?

Prakash says "yes

Avni shouts "don't talk just run the damn slow car

Prakash and neel gets scared and zips their mouth and Prakash speeds up the car.

When they reach hospital, neel takes avni in.

In the room, avni is there with neel, as the family has gone to do some work, like calling neela, nanno, ali, etc and most importantly doctor.

Avni is in server pain and she shouts "it all happened because of you

Neel says "me??

Avni says "yes you, if you would have stopped that day then this wont have happened today, but no, you didn't. and because of you I am in so much pain neel Khanna, the time the pain stops you are dead neel khanna

Neel is so tensed and avni is making him more, he wants her pain to end soon, but as soon as it ends it will be the death of him.

At that sentence of her everyone was near the door and heard it all, they come inside and faces an awkward situation.

Prakash goes to neel and pats his shoulder. He says to our sad and blushing neel "even your mother has said this to me when you were about to born

Bebe says "avni is behaving just like Shweta

Shweta asks "really bebe?

Bebe says "yes

Doctor comes inside and asks them to go as they have to prepare for delivery.

Neel requested and got the permission to stay with her during her delivery.

During delivery, neel stayed there with avni and supported her. And when they got to hear the first cries of his babies, they also cry a bit.

After delivery, the nurse handed over the kids to avni and neel, when family is there in the room also.

Avni and neel are looking at their kids in awe.

Avni says "I love them already, can we have more?

Neel sees avni in disbelieve and seeing them the family laughed.

Neela asks "have you thought their names?

Bebe says "yeah tell

Avni says "she is inaaya

Neel says "he is ahaan

Everyone smiles.

******LEAP (10 years)******

Bebe says "so this is your mom and dad's story, now you got it

Inaaya says "yes bebe, we got it. also the story when we were on the way was so funny

Ahaan says "yeah inaaya. bebe so this was the twist in our parents story, that separated them but bonded them more strongly, it seems so fairy-tale kind story

Inaaya says "yes ahaan even I think like that too, also our mom and dad are not less then a prince and princess so their story will also be a fairytale kind

Ahaan says "yeah

Bebe says "look even your mom and dad has came back from their business trip

Author s voice " after being parents, neel left police job and joined his father's business, so that his family can live a peaceful life. Because as you know that being a supercop he had to stand with justice which will make many enemy. Which can harm avni or his kids in revenge. Which he doesn't want. Later when their kids ahaan and inaaya grew up a bit, avni also joined the business.

DD and juhi also got married in the end. Even nanno got ali married. And whole Mehta family goes in the jail except hetal and rhea. And atlast everyone lived happily.

Inaaya and ahaan gets up and runs to avneil. Inaaya jumps on avni while ahaan on neel. They carry their kids and avni asks "you missed us?

Inaaya and ahaan says "yes mom

They kissed their kids on their cheeks and puts them on the sofa and sits beside them. Avneil greets bebe.

Ahaan says "mom, bebe today told us your story, when you ran away like a princess who is being haressed by the family, and dad brought you back like a prince, and also what happened when we were about to born

Avni says "really?

Inaaya says "yes

Neel asks "you like it?

Inaaya says "we loved it dad

And they had a lot of talks that afternoon.

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This is my avneil ts, epilogue. I cant believe that I finished my three shot, and thank you very much for appreciating it. Hope you guys like this, if yes don't forget to hit the like and comment down below please. I love comments, so please comment and don't forget to hit the like button who so ever read this, its a humble request.

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