Avneil TS:Kismat (LAST PART UPDATED AT PG 11 13/11) - Page 5

Originally posted by: pri12

Juhi And Dakhan Dyal...wah wah kya jodi hai😆😆

Loved Loved this part..

Neil is so broken without her

you like this new jodi na 😆 .. thank you so much..without avni neel is not neel 😭

Originally posted by: Ravinanaik

Awsome

thank you so much

Originally posted by: Bhavsss

Just read through both the parts, and I am immensely moved by your words. Neil and Avni, both their pain has been depicted so beautifully. I absolutely love this! Please update soon :)

thank you so much.. thank you for this complement... thank you so much... will update soon.. right now working on it

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

Omg ! What a twist . The POV was totally heartbreaking and beautifully penned when u suddenly made Juhi was in love DD . I was in splits. sorry if I hurt you . It was really ROFL moment for me in that serious update

thank you so much... no no its ok... don't be sorry.. i just wanted to make juhi stay away from neel so introduced this twist

Originally posted by: BeutifulSmile

This is the first time,i am commenting for any ts...I really liked your creative imagination😳,u really penned it beautifully👏.Its so amazing and the stanzas of those collective songs are not only a songs,but just a perfect meaning to interpret the situation.After every paragraph be it POV or normal lines story,according to the situations demand,u chose d beautiful lines to give d deeper meanings❤️.Nice emotions of neil,what he feels about avni...His world is only revolve around one and only girl avni😳😳.

@BOLD-I really want those scenes to come out true for fans in the show.CVs should take some great inspiration from u as u have written it so beautifully😃😃.Prakash is really a sweetheart who could see his son's unspoken pain but sweta...🤬.And yes nice twist in the story,DD got a gf😉but felt bad for avneil😭😭.

After yesterday's stressful episode,your ts is really a stress buster😳😳.Good job ,keep it up👍🏼

Do update your next part soon, coz i m curious to know about the next part😉😉

thank you so much... thank you.. i am very glad that u loved my style of writing... i loved that you find it amazing... thank you so much for appreciating my efforts and idea of writing songs to provide deeper meaning to the words i write... yeah neel has only one girl that is avni.. thank you so much...
It's really a very big compliment that CV's should get inspired by me.. alao it would be a dream come true if the scenes will reach the fans through the serial... Shweta is opposite of prakash .. yeah finally DD gets a girlfriend.. avneil is sad today but maybe not in next chapter... 😊 😉
Thank you so much.. thank you.. for this complement
Thank you so much
will update soon... right now working on it... am a bit busy so not finding time to finish that chapter..
Once again thank you so much.. i am really jumping with joy after reading your comment..

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Amazing update
Juhi never loved Neil and told that Shweta was the culprit
In fact she is in love with dd
Hope they find Avni soon
Update soon please

thank you so much .. yeah juhi never loved neel .. she always loved DD.. for shweta she deserves to be exposed.. yeah they will find each other soon... avneil can't be far for soon.. will update soon... right now working on it...

Originally posted by: Kshailja

This was so good...

The new twist that Juhi having crush on DD... Hehehe..

And Neil saying that he will make AvNeil for real and forever... Waiting for this moment eagerly...

Update soon..

thank you so much... liked this twist na... 😉 .. will update soon then your wait will be over.. avneil is goals

Originally posted by: preya_radev

hey mehak just read this ts and i must say u r doing an amazing job... the first parts was amazing...poor neil the way he screamed shouting where avni is.. he was in so much pain...i actually loved the way avni was thinking about juhi... but when juhi started tell avni how she has came between her and neil and the lecture she started on how neil is hers and all i felt like slapping her... poor avni was so hurt by juhi words and the way she broke down was emotional it felt like i could see avni like that right in front of me...the way u described avni pov was lovely and in that she realized she loved neil...no i was like where r u neil avni is planning to go away... when avni left that note for neil and writes your avni but then crossed out the yours bit was actually touching.
loved the second part... the way neil comes to his apartment to see the door open and how he thought he will give avni a good lecture so she doesnt do that again... when neil called avni few times and when she didnt come out how he started searching for her everywhere and finally he sees the note that avni left for him...loved neil pov the way he was not ready to believe that avni has left him and starts to check the apartment again including the cupboard where he sees only his clothes and not avnis...i felt so sorry for neil... the way neil decided to go to khanna mansion thinking someone must have said something to avni which caused her to leave.. loved it that before leaving he told dd that he need cctv footage of his apartment floor...loved how neil ignored shweta and answered prakash...loved it how neil turns to shweta and asked what she said to avni which made everyone face shweta and how bebe questioned her...loved it on how he shouted at shweta...finally dd came with cctv footage and neil saw it was juhi as avni had left after that... omg for a sec i was shocked seen neil anger towards juhi... loved how neela told neil to leave juhi... the way neela questioned juhi though the anger was clearly evident in her voice...omg the way shweta lied to juhi... hawww so juhi and neil were never gf or bf neil was going to propose to juhi on that day but she met with an accident what a twist but the biggest twist was when juhi mentioned that she liked dd and dd reaction just made me laugh...neil was hurt by shweta action and maybe things wont be the same between anymore she has done a lot of damage... finally dd traced avni call... the way neil said 'lets go and bring avni back... he was so happy to find out where avni was...now i really cant wait for the 3rd part do update soon

thank you so much... thank you very much... i am speechless.. i have no words to express my happiness that i am experiencing after reading your comment..
I am so glad that you loved it so much.. your comment means a lot to me...
Thank you so much... for writing this comment..
Will try to update asap... right now working on it.. i am a bit busy.. so finding it hard to finish soon

Originally posted by: srividhya68

awesome upt
loved it
cont soon

thank you so much.. will try to update soon

Originally posted by: vu1998

Absolutely fantastic Mehak...

Neil angry at Juhi.. And his inner turmoil.. Perfectly expressed.

Juhi and DD.. I mean it was another level.. My favourite part was this one...

Missed Avni in this update..

Super curious for next update...

thank you so much... thank you... juhi and DD new love sensation... thank you.. will try to update soon.. right now working on it