AvNeil OS : Raat Akeli Hai - Page 2

Originally posted by: Avneilfan

When I had started reading this, I was like no! you married Avni to Ali!🤢 But as the os progressed I realized that Avni was just jealous of neil's and hers daughter Ahana.😛

Superb yaar!👏

Originally posted by: srividhya68

first i really got heart attack
then i was relieved
awesome os

Originally posted by: Electro.Cutie

Ahana Neil Khanna That sounds so cute!!

Coming to the OS, this was amazing, really! How beautifully you created a simple situation into a wonderful os. Just like everyone else I thought she was married to someone else.. and Neil was dead or they were separated.. Never thought of Ali though. 😆 But you gave a nice surprise.

I loved it!

Do write more.

Originally posted by: shikhsk

Even I thought that this OS is for Ali n Avni .or whether Neil died etc etc.bt this turn out to be very different.they have a daughter ...so cute story

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

shocking and sweet 😆 The first few para gave a total attack to my little heart . whether she was married to Ali or he was dead 😕

And rest was beautiful . so she is jealous of her daughter 😆 always males become jealous . but this was a bliss 😳

Originally posted by: vidz2122

at the begng ... i was likee yaar who is shpng avni and ali ... haha... well I'm also an Avneil fan 😉
you really surprsd me .. I'm glad 😃
it was really nice... thanks... 😊
but will never be jels of neil lovng ahana ...

coz she nevr exprncd dad's love .. it's fiction you know 😉 well she was jealous because she loves neil the most and insecurity and jealousy comes naturally in such a case
any way i love ur neil ...

he is super sweet ...

neil playng with ahana .

.. www sooo sweet ...
its not tillu ka pillu ... its pilli right ???. Yep 😆

.. i loved it ... write more plz sure and thanks again...!!

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Fantastic
First I thought it's about Avni and Ali
But later it was all about Avni and Neil
Loved how Avni complained that Neil doesn't love her like earlier