AVNEIL FF : NAINA ASHQ NA HO - BOOK 2 (CHAPTER 47 UPDATED ON PG 60)

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Gurveen

@Gurveen

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#341

Nice update
Both tried to settle scores with each other
What is Neil hiding about Ali from Avni???
Update next part soon

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srividhya68

@srividhya68

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#342

awesome upt
loved it
their score settling was cute
avneil convo at the end was nice
waiting for next chap
cont soon

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vidya dasan

@vidz2122

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#343

Originally posted by: vu1998
Thank you for such a pinku comment Vidya...
I m glad that you noticed every chota mota thing...
Last part.. Well special thanks for that... I wrote everything that came to my mind...
That lil jealousy and possessiveness is inbuilt in his hardware.. Sirf software hi ude hain uske.

Ye sapna bhi jald poora hoga...😳😳
Aapka sehyog chahiye...
Aashirwaad dijiye Vidya ji

hamara aashirvaad aapke saath hai beta ....😆😆 ...

u are greats ji ...

aise romance dedho ..

hacuffs romace

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crazysweetie

@crazysweetie

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#344

You are fab. Continue soon. You built suspense by giving such a precap.

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__VIHU

@__VIHU

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#345

Originally posted by: Kshailja
Res
Neend aa rhi abhi or comment bahot lamba krna h so kal karungi.. Hehehehe
Unres

Aye aye Captain...
It was awesome... This chapter needed to be written...
Everyone teasing them...😆😆

When I started reading the chapter, I thought did I miss anything in last chapter? Coz sab has q rahe Neil pe... But then jab pata chala. ... Haha haha. Avni knows how to get back to his Supercop... I want all these to happen in the show...

Neil teasing Avni in front of Bebe and Shweta was cute. .. I loved that cheek kiss...😳

Wow, Cricket match... Like hum Saath Saath h. ... Loved it...
Neil kitta badmash h, khud ki batting kr liya or Avni ko nai diya.. Very bad... Hehehehe but Ali is there... I like this New Ali...
And when Neil said I don't share what's my favourite, I think he is referring to Avni too... Hehehe...

And Ali Avni duo is awesome. ... Really love them... Ali tera Kya hoga Ali... Haha haha...

Neil is jealous but not that much... Waise bhi q jealous hona ,Avni loves him only. .

Finally Avni knows what Ali feels for her. ... Relief mila...

And what's Neil hiding???
Ab tune ye bol k or curious kr diya...

So jaldi se update Kar de...
Waiting for it eagerly...

And love you dher sara for writing this story, again and again thank you...

Kitna wait karaya... Jaldi unres nahi kar sakti..

Yaar that cheek kiss idea was yours... Me churaofying that😎

Yeah!! Sahi pakde hai... The lines were referred to Avni not bat.. And Ali got them too...

I also love Ali Avni friendship.. I follow the show from starting and Ali Avni to be a couple... Infact I missed few episode before leap and mistook Neil to be Ali in few initial minutes of after leap episode...

But Tillu stole the show... And Avneil are best..

Lo kaha ki baat kahin aur hi le gayi main...

Thank you yaar..

Main jAldi se update kar dungi..

Lots of love.. Jhappi te pappiyan bhi..

And thanks for the kissi idea...

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Zenab

@Duskyylilac

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#346

Congratulations Vihu

Keep posting

And amazing update

They are so cute

Poor Avni itni mehnat ke baad she didn't get chance to bat 😆

Lots of Love

Zainab

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Electro.Cutie

@Electro.Cutie

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#347

First of all hearty congratulations on becoming a goldie my dearest Vihuuu 🤗

Arisha and meli pyaari cutie... Res ke baad unres naam ki bhi koi cheez hoti hai😆

Hahaha main bhooli nahi hoon Vihu. Yeh "res" mujhe humesha haunt karta hai. Aaj toh issko anjaam dekhar rahungi 😆😎

Actually I resed it to be the first and I was but kismat ka khel dekho sabse aakhir mein unres karrahi hoon

Chalo koi nahi.

I read chapter 41 42 and 43 altogether and right now I am mesmerized by your writing skills. Masha Allah kya likha hai.

I just loved the way you ended Vishakha's role. Just one word comes to my mind, flawless! There I even felt like you were ending this FF and my heart screamed a nooo way too dramatically.

Coming to Avni and Neil's romance, besharmi ki heights karraki hai dono ne 😆 Infront of all family members. Hats off to them and most importantly you Vihu sweetie. I know it's out of your comfort zone ( you mentioned ).. same here 😛 but you did a good job with those scenes. Bringing the past scenes like paratha and paani added more into your writing and I connected well. Just awesome.

I love each and every character here and their personality specially Shweta. Kaash woh aisi hoti show mein toh AvNeil ki zindagi sawar jaati. But show mein toh masala chahiye. 🤢

Anyways.. when you mentioned the song "Kehe du tumhe ya chup rahu..." I was so happy idk why 😆 Maybe because I am too hooked to that song these days.

Last but not the least I am in love with these better halves even more now. Can't wait for more updates. Hope you are happy to see me because I am more than glad to be commenting over here.

Missed beyond words.

Lots of loves

Zuuu

Ps: You didn't ask me but let me tell you I also give permission to call Mummy Patel, Mummy Patel 😆😆 *I like being kebab mein haddi* Hahaha

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shikha

@shikhsk

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#348

Meri Zuu ki Zain why u r like this.Where r you lost these days..???? Mummy Patel so worried

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Kriyanshi

@Kriyaina

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#349

Hey vihu..

I know i am late.. Bt jaise hi chapter read kiya na toh cmnt kr rhi hu..aakhir khud ko koi kaise rok h skta aesa chapter padne k baad.. 😛

Now Firstly a big wala congratulations to you for becoming a goldie..👏👏

Kya update h..superb.👍🏼 Sb avneil ko tease kr rhe h.. 😳

Aur avneil ek dusre tease krwane ka koi mauka nhi chod rhe h...

Bechari avni though she took her teasing revenge bt neil ne bhi phr se sweet revenge le liya uss kiss ki wajah se woh bhi interest k sath..

Mujhe lgta h Waise uske shirt ki jagah agr avni neil ko kiss krti na toh may be woh uss teasing bach jaati..😉 Bt then koi na avni ne nhi toh neil ne de di..

And cricket scene was awesome..neil himself done batting but avni k chance aane pr " I am too tired to play"..

Bt then come our avni's buddy ali...to help her.. Bt yaa I like this ali..

And possesive neil khanna ko bhi leke aa gye...and if I say that I ❤️ this neil khanna then it would be an understatement...

And yaa finally avni ko pta chl gya ki ali loves her...but neil have made her understood not to misunderstand him.. That's good..

And now its my last line iss update k liye..

Yrr tum itna acha soch kaise pati ho.. And tumari story goddd i am in love with this...sare characters itne achhe h.. Kash in shweta's character was like this..ya phr cvs aesa bna de..

But you have made me curious now what neil's hiding..yrr rat ko main so kaise paugii..bt yeh toh tb hi pta chl paega jab tum update kro.. So plsss Update sooonnn dear..

P. S. I have this question... Are you by any chance an artist or writer in real life... I mean itna achha imagine krti ho.. Itna achha likhti ho...

Now finally bye till your next chapter...

Edited by Kriyaina - 8 years ago