AVNEIL FF : NAINA ASHQ NA HO - BOOK 2 (CHAPTER 47 UPDATED ON PG 60) - Page 22

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Can I let this comment be as "No Comments"???
Edited by Kshailja - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow! This was my only expression that left my mouth . Lastly you updated and what a update it was... You write so well.. It was totally impressive... The conclusion, the revealation, the thrill everything was in sequence... This shows how good you are at writing, i guess you are a topper in English, i bet you will surely become a great author in future... And do remember me as it was my prediction .. (LOL)
Visakha's trauma, Neil' s reaction everything was so well described...
And last but not the least do update soon...
I am too inquisitive to know what happens next...
BTW, if this was your first idea, then i must say you are very good at exaggeration.. 40 chapters seriously...
Lastly update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Today I'm not getting any words for your writing skills. All words seem to be very small. I'll only say keep writing like this.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Omggg my heart beat was rising and falling every moment n especially during car chasing...Oh god vihuuu
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Posted: 8 years ago
The update was more than awesome. Vihu you are such a wonderful writer I could imagine the whole scene in front of my eyes while reading it. I have become a Jabra fan of your fanfiction 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome !! i just dont have words to describe how wonderful this was !!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Finally the wait is over Nd the confusion is over...
Trust me, this was just an awesome update...I just loved it damn much...
Pls yaar, ab jaldi update karna...
I'll be waiting...
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Posted: 8 years ago
vihuu ... awsome
my heart was achng ...
the turmoil neil is going through ...
so this is d end of neil kapoor right ??
Dr sngh ...i undrstnd that he wantd to save his daughter from guilt ... but what he did with neil ani with neil's family was hellish ... poor neil .. so much of torture ...
Vishaka ... she is such a sweetheart ... i was very scard when you introduced her to d story ... but she really surprised me ... so much of courage to stand against her father for other ... she even knws that the true will shatter her world .. but still was ready to give her life for avneil ..

Avni ... credt goes to u for describing avni so beautifully ... her state when neil denied the truth .. was well written

NEIL ... neil is neil always ... he makes sure avni is safe evry time ... it looks like god has creatd neil to save avni .. poor tillu ... injectd all those medicines and underwent all those mental tortures ... i felt very sad when he called chubby ,... i knw its too much for him to accept ...

and atlast about u ...u are such an amazng writtr ... as i always tell u.. this is my fav ff ever ...vihuu lots of hugs and kisses ... wont break ur bone ... you have given us a treat ... neils turmoil was superb ... his conclusns comparsn ... evrythng .. i have no words ... and avni's trust on neil when she said" i knw " i loved that part ... superb it is ... i loved it

with lots of love
vidya
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Posted: 8 years ago
Waooo..Vihu..!!!
This was beyond Awesomeness..😉
You penned down every emotion of everyone..so perfectly..👏
Past Revelation..about Mr. Khanna..and Vishakha's condition..😭
Mr. Kapoor is dead..Feeling really bad for her...😭
Vihu..!!! Wesy any surprise for Miss Chubby..I know ky characters bohot ziada hein..per koee New Entry Miss Chubby ky liyee..???😃😆
Continue Soon...😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Unres, read the comment ive left you on pg 31, well i think its on pg 31 ❤️
Edited by Somewhatwriter - 8 years ago

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