AVNEIL FF : NAINA ASHQ NA HO - BOOK 2 (CHAPTER 47 UPDATED ON PG 60)

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Posted: 8 years ago

#231

Originally posted by: crazysweetie
Today I'm not getting any words for your writing skills. All words seem to be very small. I'll only say keep writing like this.

That's such a sweetie compliment... Just like your name..

Sure... If you guys keep supporting I'll keep writing...

Thanka a tonnn dear

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Posted: 8 years ago

#232

Originally posted by: shikhsk
Omggg my heart beat was rising and falling every moment n especially during car chasing...Oh god vihuuu

Thank you Shikha...🤗

I m so glad the car didn't turned out to be horrible...

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Posted: 8 years ago

#233

Originally posted by: Ishita2017
The update was more than awesome. Vihu you are such a wonderful writer I could imagine the whole scene in front of my eyes while reading it. I have become a Jabra fan of your fanfiction 😊

Well Ishu... First of all a big thank you...🤗

Welcome to the thread...

Getting compliments like this... Makes me feel worth writing...

Jabra fan.. Thanks again... That's like too much for me😳

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Posted: 8 years ago

#234

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
interesting

Thanks Mysti...😊

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Posted: 8 years ago

#235

Originally posted by: firsttimehere
Awesome !! i just dont have words to describe how wonderful this was !!

Thank you so much...

That's the biggest compliment a writer can receive..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#236

Originally posted by: vu1998

Bilkul ji bilkul...
Aapka no comment bhi hamare liye world's best comment hai...
I guess it means good... But even if it meant bad... Then also... Thank you Shailu...😃

Bas good..

Itna hi samjh payi tu mujhe itne comment-o se...

Hey bhagwan ab mujhe utha hi lo...

Beta, tune itna mast likha h ki shabd kam par gye bayan krne ko...

Pehle toh itti late update ki..Lekin chalo maaf kiya coz update complan pee k aaya tha...

And then that truth revelation..

Omg! uss doctor ki itni himmat ki mere Neil ko torture kre.. Lekin usne kr diya.. Bahot ganda h yaar wo doctor.. But chalo use bhi maaf kiya coz usne mere Neil ko bachaya..

And then wo Nalayak Mark.. Sahi mein agar wo mere haath lag gya na toh bachega nai..

Fir Vishakha.. Yaar aise insaan hote h kya duniya mein..

She is so damn perfect.. I am feeling so bad for her... Usne Neil and Ayna dono ko kho diya.. But now I hope Neil Khanna should remain her bestfriend to call her chubby.. I like this nick name.. And her outburst.. You described it so so so well.. Especially jab wo use shadi k liye bolti h..

And Neil is so gadha.. How can he think ki ye sab Avni ka kaam h.. I can feel the hurt which Avni faced at that time..

Or jab use realise hua ki he is NEIL KHANNA.. That moment was like ab kuchh achha hoga.. Lekin fir wo gussa ho k chala gya.. And even he pushed her aside... Felt so bad...

Or wo high speed wala scene... Waise kitna maja aa rha hoga high speed mein car chalane mein.. Ek baar try krenge.. Bas break na fail ho jaye.. Hehehehe..

Or wo scene tune Dilwale se liya tha kya?? Dono ka car facing each other on the side of hills in high speed..

I can totally imagine that scene...

Finally Tillu is back.. Usne Avni ko bacha liya...

And that forehead kiss... Aww kitna cute tha..

"ye mausam ki baarish, ye baarish ka pani, ye pani ki boonde, tujhe hi toh dhoondhe." bas ye bg mein baja do..

And now waiting for them to go back to Khanna house..

Avni should sing, " Mera piya ghar aaya oh Raam ji.."

Ab na agle update k liye itna mat tadpana..

Hm toh har ghante update check krte the.. Ki ab aaya hoga ab aaya hoga.. Lekin nai aaya tha..

Or jab aaya toh bas khushi ka thikana nai tha..

So aisi khushi deti reh.. Or jaldi se update kr de next part..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#237

Originally posted by: Neeyat
Finally the wait is over Nd the confusion is over...
Trust me, this was just an awesome update...I just loved it damn much...
Pls yaar, ab jaldi update karna...
I'll be waiting...

Yes!! The confusion is finally over...

I'll trust you Neeyat... Thank you so much...😃

Main try karungi...

Last time promise tod diya tha... Isliye no promises now onwards...

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Posted: 8 years ago

#238

Originally posted by: vidz2122
vihuu ... awsome
my heart was achng ...
the turmoil neil is going through ...
so this is d end of neil kapoor right ??

I'll say it's new start of our Tillu...😉

Dr sngh ...i undrstnd that he wantd to save his daughter from guilt ... but what he did with neil ani with neil's family was hellish ... poor neil .. so much of torture ...

Yes!! Any reason can't justify what Dr Singh did to our Neil...

Vishaka ... she is such a sweetheart ... i was very scard when you introduced her to d story ... but she really surprised me ... so much of courage to stand against her father for other ... she even knws that the true will shatter her world .. but still was ready to give her life for avneil ..

Whenever Vishakha is praised I feel like I have succeded as a writer..

Avni ... credt goes to u for describing avni so beautifully ... her state when neil denied the truth .. was well written

Thank you...😊

NEIL ... neil is neil always ... he makes sure avni is safe evry time ... it looks like god has creatd neil to save avni .. poor tillu ... injectd all those medicines and underwent all those mental tortures ... i felt very sad when he called chubby ,... i knw its too much for him to accept ...

Sometimes, I feel like he has turned into a 24/7 bodyguard... No pain no gain... Tillu underwent a lot of pain.. Now time for gain..

and atlast about u ...u are such an amazng writtr ... as i always tell u.. this is my fav ff ever ...vihuu lots of hugs and kisses ... wont break ur bone ... you have given us a treat ... neils turmoil was superb ... his conclusns comparsn ... evrythng .. i have no words ... and avnitrust on neil when she said" i knw " i loved that part ... superb it is ... i loved it

About me...☺️ OMG!! Aaj kal pair zamin par nahi tikte...😆..
Thank you so much.. So so much..
Ofcourse

with lots of love
vidya

Thanks again..
Lots of love from my side too..
Vihu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#239

Originally posted by: Dreamer3
Waooo..Vihu..!!!
This was beyond Awesomeness..😉
You penned down every emotion of everyone..so perfectly..👏
Past Revelation..about Mr. Khanna..and Vishakha's condition..😭
Mr. Kapoor is dead..Feeling really bad for her...😭
Vihu..!!! Wesy any surprise for Miss Chubby..I know ky characters bohot ziada hein..per koee New Entry Miss Chubby ky liyee..???😃😆
Continue Soon...😊

Thank you Aqsa...

I really enjoy writing emotional parts...

And am so glad that you enjoyed reading them..

Surprise... Will think about it... Chubby will have to wait a bit...

Right now focus will be on Avneil...

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Posted: 8 years ago

#240

Originally posted by: nimarious
vihuuu such an amazing update it was ...
everything was in a sequence ...
Dr Singh narrating the past...
vishakha's turmoil...I feel pity for her...
she is such a sweet heart...
Neil's reaction n his denial ..
n not to forget abt avni...
Neil saving avni...
n the Kiss was just awww
the way u portray her emotions is tremendous...
everything was described so beautifully...
wat an amazing writer u r vihu...
lots of hugs to u 🤗 🤗
ur ff is my favourite seriously...
do update soon...