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Awww thank you so much for remembering me when writing this, honestly this must be one of the sweetest birthday gifts I have ever gotten. Thank you so so so so much for all the love and friendship and well lovely updates you have given me throughout my time onhere
Now coming to the update... Well what can i say? It was too good for me to even comprehend what i could possibly say about it
It was so funny to see Avni teasing him instead and Oh my god Shweta's non stop chatter
😆
And their kitchen romance was written so beautifully that it gave me butterflies
But when Prakash spoke about Neil Kapoors father, that was heartbreaking... and the scene you penned after it was so poignantly painful but then you balanced perfectly with the absolute adorableness of Neil's room
Honestly Vihu... what i have said here is nowhere near enough to describe how much i loved this update, your writing is so damn beautiful. And actually currently I'm thinking to start an ff and wondering what the plot would be, but i could never come up with a plot that so effortlessy twists and turns and resolves but then doesn't resolve, its just perfect vihu, im damn sure you could easily write professionally. Avni on gunpoint and Vishaka commiting suicide!!! Do you see what i mean? What are you doing to us vihu yaar, now Im gonna be restless until you update next
😆 but still never sacrifice your studies... even though writing these stories seem much more appealing, at least to me. Thank you so much again for this birthday gift, i dont think ive recieved one as thoughtful and beautiful as this, im so grateful... waiting for the next up update (but remember to take your time) lots and lots and lots of love
Shreya
Now coming to the update... Well what can i say? It was too good for me to even comprehend what i could possibly say about it
It was so funny to see Avni teasing him instead and Oh my god Shweta's non stop chatter
😆
And their kitchen romance was written so beautifully that it gave me butterflies
But when Prakash spoke about Neil Kapoors father, that was heartbreaking... and the scene you penned after it was so poignantly painful but then you balanced perfectly with the absolute adorableness of Neil's room
Honestly Vihu... what i have said here is nowhere near enough to describe how much i loved this update, your writing is so damn beautiful. And actually currently I'm thinking to start an ff and wondering what the plot would be, but i could never come up with a plot that so effortlessy twists and turns and resolves but then doesn't resolve, its just perfect vihu, im damn sure you could easily write professionally. Avni on gunpoint and Vishaka commiting suicide!!! Do you see what i mean? What are you doing to us vihu yaar, now Im gonna be restless until you update next
😆 but still never sacrifice your studies... even though writing these stories seem much more appealing, at least to me. Thank you so much again for this birthday gift, i dont think ive recieved one as thoughtful and beautiful as this, im so grateful... waiting for the next up update (but remember to take your time) lots and lots and lots of love
Shreya
Indian Idol 15
