AvNeil FF: Afeemi Hai Tera Mera Pyaar(Part 18,Pg 46//Oct 17)

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Shailja

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Posted: 8 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: pri12
Shailja this is superb...I love their fights
Waise bhi dunia ki kisi bhi ladki ko moti kaho wo react kregi hi 🤣
Neil is being stupid and Avni teasing him..I hope onscreen bhi kuch aisa hi ho ..
Neil kissed her on cheek
Please continue soon and take care :)

Thank you so much...

Me too think ki on screen bhi aisa kuchh ho..

Specially that kissing on the cheek..

That can gowith th. current track ..

Let'ssee what is in the store .. Will Update soon ..Willupdat

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Shailja

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Posted: 8 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: vu1998
Shailu.. Thank you for extending it..
Neil teasing Avni was Ok but Avni ne to hadh hi kardi.. She said she love Ali... But as a friend... I know.
Ek pagal ko dusra pagal hi samajh sakta hai...🤣
OMG!! He kissed her... I imagined it and then smiled for 10 mins...😳

Shailu.. This was a dhamakedaar episode...
I think you're goona give me good doses of light romance between them...
Loved it..
Love you..
Vihu

Thank you Vihuuu...

I extended coz AvNeil ka romance cheej hi aisa h ki ek do episode mein nai ho paega.. 😆

I will think more romantic scenes..

And kissing on the cheek wala toh yaar CVs ko show mein dikhana chahiye.. Kab tak hume tadpaenge..

Love you too dher sara...

Will update soon..

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Shailja

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Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Zenab78
Aww he kissed her lovely
Finally Bebe accepted her as Avni and DIL of khannas
Superb update
Continue soon

Thank you so much yaar..

Glad you all are liking it..

Will update soon..

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Ifa_Hassan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Hey read all the chapter and i loved it . I loved hiw you write Avneil scenes how you explained avni past to everyone in the house . Awww how neil kissed avni that was so cute and they teasing each other . Last chapter was super cute...

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Posted: 8 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: ShailjaShan

Thank you Vihuuu...
I extended coz AvNeil ka romance cheej hi aisa h ki ek do episode mein nai ho paega.. 😆
I will think more romantic scenes..
And kissing on the cheek wala toh yaar CVs ko show mein dikhana chahiye.. Kab tak hume tadpaenge..
Love you too dher sara...
Will update soon..

I agree yaar ek cheek kiss to banta hai...

Lekin ye CVs.. Zaalim kahin ke...

Thank god we have writers like you...

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Shailja

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Posted: 8 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: -Mairaa-
Hey read all the chapter and i loved it . I loved hiw you write Avneil scenes how you explained avni past to everyone in the house . Awww how neil kissed avni that was so cute and they teasing each other . Last chapter was super cute...

Thank you so much for reading and liking the story..

😊

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Shailja

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Posted: 8 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: vu1998

I agree yaar ek cheek kiss to banta hai...
Lekin ye CVs.. Zaalim kahin ke...
Thank god we have writers like you...

And i thank God that we have writers like you...

Or Zaalima toh tm bhi ho yaar..

Abhi tak update nai kiya..

Update your story soon...

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Gurveen

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Posted: 8 years ago

#48

Amazing update
Neil is a sweetheart that he is ready to let avni go and believes in love
Update soon please

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Shailja

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Posted: 8 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: Gurveen
Amazing update
Neil is a sweetheart that he is ready to let avni go and believes in love
Update soon please

Thank you so much for reading this..

Will update soon..

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srinithi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#50

I never realized you updated so soon.

train part was my favorite . mere sath kisi ki zindgi Kush nahi hoti💔 mere ateet ka saya hota hai

bebe is so forward thinking and she accepted her 👏 I always loved her character . I wish she does the same in show

Prakash is gonna be the best FIL . his bonding with Avni is so special n beautiful . I loved this line betiyan Gale lagti hai . he said it on screen right😳

Avni ko upar tak bahon mei 😳 n he started hi usual nautaunki followed by Tom n Jerry fight .

I thought Avni would mention that why she called him bewkoof.

ek pagal ko hi doosra pagal samaj ata hai . tillu n his dialogues🤪