AvNeil FF: ISS DIL KA KYA KARUN( Epilogue updated on Page 47)

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Electro.Cutie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#271

Nainooo forgive this late lateef 😆😭

But but.. This chapter was so emotional. But I loved it. All the dialogues were on point. The way Avni said "Agar Neil ko kuch hogaya toh mein waise bhi marjaungi." And the things Neil requested Ali to tell Avni were both so beautiful yet so heart wrenching!

Neil is such a kind soul how dare Ali do that to my Neil!!! He went there to save you but you run away like a coward as Avni said??

Iss Ali ka kuch karo jaldi se Nainooo.

And the precap is kinda making me nervous. Haha phirse Nainooo special twist na aajaye. 😆

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Deepti_98

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Posted: 8 years ago

#272

Originally posted by: pri12
Deepti u just gave me heart attack with part 11 ...Oh God I was afraid...Ali ko gaaliya di maine kitni saari 😆
While reading part 12 I had 1000 volts smile on my face...
Loved it.. They met exactly at the same place and same day...Neil is so cute...He asked her hand for marriage
Yayyy AvNeil marriage coming up

Keep the 1000 volts smile on your face sweetie...

Your comment bought one on my face too😳

But I don't think I will showing marriage but yeah I will write 2-3 updates showing AvNeil

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Deepti_98

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Posted: 8 years ago

#273

Originally posted by: AgnesFan
11th update mei dil todkar 12th update mei marham Patti..😆
I thought this whole khand was of that idiot Ali but Bach gaya meri curse se agle update mei.. bagwan ke liye use akal aya.. warna he would be kabab me haddi 🤢
u just made the day after such heart breaking episode 😭
I loved that last part where be was asking Avni's hands from nanno Neela n Aman..💔 I wish we get this particular scene on screen
at last swetha too accepted
planning to update marriage or is it over

Thank you for such encouraging and lovely words Sri🤗

OMG! I made your day, thank you so much😳

Yeah even I want Neil to ask for Avni's hand from everyone...

No I won't be updating marriage but will write 2-3 more updates only...

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Deepti_98

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Posted: 8 years ago

#274

Originally posted by: Electro.Cutie
Nainooo forgive this late lateef 😆😭
But but.. This chapter was so emotional. But I loved it. All the dialogues were on point. The way Avni said "Agar Neil ko kuch hogaya toh mein waise bhi marjaungi." And the things Neil requested Ali to tell Avni were both so beautiful yet so heart wrenching!
Neil is such a kind soul how dare Ali do that to my Neil!!! He went there to save you but you run away like a coward as Avni said??
Iss Ali ka kuch karo jaldi se Nainooo.
And the precap is kinda making me nervous. Haha phirse Nainooo special twist na aajaye. 😆

I am so happy you liked the Chapter 11 too. I thought it was a huge disappointment for everyone...

Seems like you haven't read the next part on Pg 37, do read it and review cutie❤️

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__VIHU

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Posted: 8 years ago

#275

OMG!!!

What a confession...

Loved it Deepu..

They met at sea shore and "I love you".. Awww

Then haath maangna.. From Neela... Aman.. And Nanno..

Brilliant idea..

Love you yaar...

Please update soon...

I really wanna see them together

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Electro.Cutie

@Electro.Cutie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#276

Originally posted by: Deepti_98
I am so happy you liked the Chapter 11 too. I thought it was a huge disappointment for everyone...
Seems like you haven't read the next part on Pg 37, do read it and review cutie❤️

Omg how did I miss that 😲 Really speaking Nainooo when I read the previous part the title didn't say about the confession 😆 Maybe that's why I didn't know it was updated.

Talking about the chapter.. Omg a beach confession is so so unique!! How did you come up with such a thing?.. the place they first met. It was lovely how you described everything that happened there. ❤️

And asking each and everyone for Avni's hand and promising to everyone.. only Neil Khanna can do that! Such a beautiful scene. 😳 Avni is lucky 😆

But Nainooo is this the last part???..I got last part vibes. Hope it's not. I would love to read lots of AvNeil romance 😆

Lots of love 🤗

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vidya dasan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#277

awww sweeet .. that i love you part is my fav ... reunion was perfct ... us loved it ... you made me sad ystrdy .. but today .. ts amazing ... 😳 ... keeep writing

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Gurveen

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Posted: 8 years ago

#278

Mind blowing update
Aah finally they confessed their love
And totally loved the way Neil brought Avni back in his life by asking everyone's permission
They had a beautiful happily ever after
Please write epilogue

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Deepti_98

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Posted: 8 years ago

#279

Originally posted by: Zenab78
Lovely dear
Beautifully penned

Thanks Zainab😳

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Deepti_98

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Posted: 8 years ago

#280

Originally posted by: vu1998
OMG!!!
What a confession...
Loved it Deepu..
They met at sea shore and "I love you".. Awww
Then haath maangna.. From Neela... Aman.. And Nanno..
Brilliant idea..
Love you yaar...
Please update soon...
I really wanna see them together

Such a sweet comment Vihu🤗

So happy you liked the confession idea...

I was having that idea since a long time...

Love you too...

Will be updating the epilogue soon..