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Electro.Cutie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#311

Originally posted by: Gurveen
Superb update
Neil teasing Avni was fantastic
At least Aman got to know about dayawanti's real face
Update soon

Thankyou Gurveen.

Aman had to get into his senses sometime 😛

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Electro.Cutie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#312

Originally posted by: Deepti_98
Zuu this is so good
Neil teasing Avni, everyone becoming Kabab mai kaddi
🤣
That Aman Avni scene was beautiful...
Last part was good too❤️
Update the next part soon...

Hi Nainooo. Neil is fed up of those kabab ke haddis 😆

Thankyou 😳

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Electro.Cutie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#313

Originally posted by: vidz2122
Lolll... bedrm scene ... give back his dignity poor bacha ...lol ... very nice ... infact awsmm ... hope cvs give us some wondrful scenes ... teasng wali ... anyway bday comming uppp

Dignity abhi sahi salamat hai 😆

Thankyou vidzz 😳

Even I wish for some cutie cutie scenes on the show

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srinithi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#314

Originally posted by: Electro.Cutie
Vihu did too??? Wow! What a coincidence. You lucky girl Sri. 😆 I really wanted to dedicate this to you since I updated the previous one.
I am so happy to see this comment 😳
Happy advanced birthday greetings. 🤗Btw when's your b'day?
Thank you and love you too ❤️

myself lucky day todau🤪

that's on 25th july😆

thank u for greetings😳

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Electro.Cutie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#315

Originally posted by: tanyashah0110
Very nice...

Thankyou Tanya.😳

Your DP hayeee

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__VIHU

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Posted: 8 years ago

#316

Arrreee yaar... Privacy nahi milti bechaaro ko... Very bad..

Aur phir Bebe tease karti hain ki... Tillu sabke saamne shuru ho jaata hai...

Very nice update cutie...

Aman Avni crying part was really touching...

I really hope we get to see a sensible Aman onscreen too...

The way you brought Avni towards the "SACCHAI" instead of being narrated by Neil directly... It shows the special angle of your writing...

Your every part makes me jump in joy... And excited for next part...

Please update that soon...

Thank you for such a lovely FF and regular updates...

Itnaaa saaara pyaaar for you my love...

And yes... Sorry for late comment...

Actually i m like this only LATE LATEEF...

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Electro.Cutie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#317

Originally posted by: vu1998
Arrreee yaar... Privacy nahi milti bechaaro ko... Very bad..
Aur phir Bebe tease karti hain ki... Tillu sabke saamne shuru ho jaata hai...
Very nice update cutie...
Aman Avni crying part was really touching...
I really hope we get to see a sensible Aman onscreen too...
The way you brought Avni towards the "SACCHAI" instead of being narrated by Neil directly... It shows the special angle of your writing...
Your every part makes me jump in joy... And excited for next part...
Please update that soon...

Thank you for such a lovely FF and regular updates...
Itnaaa saaara pyaaar for you my love...

And yes... Sorry for late comment...
Actually i m like this only LATE LATEEF...

I love you huuuge too my late lateef. 😆😳

Sometimes you are faster than me. We both have our own late and early times. That's okay!

Now coming to this comment. Mein kya kahoon?

You understood me so well. 🤗Actually Neil narrating would have been so typical 😛 and boring for the readers. That's what I thought.

I always wait for your comment Vihu 😃 So glad you love my FF as much as I'm in love with yours. I think main kuch zyada 😉 Toh jaldi se update karr yaar!

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Zenab

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Posted: 8 years ago

#318

Nice update Zuu
Aman came to meet Avni but he is guilty
Hope to see good bond between Aman Avni

Lots of love
Zainab

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Electro.Cutie

@Electro.Cutie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#319

Originally posted by: Zenab78
Nice update Zuu
Aman came to meet Avni but he is guilty
Hope to see good bond between Aman Avni

Lots of love
Zainab

Yeah we'll see how he gets rid of the guilt. 😉

Thankyou Zainab.

Lots of love to you too.

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sonu/ sonali

@preya_radev

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Posted: 8 years ago

#320

Yay finally u use dated but I didn't get to read them on time but now I can so here I go

Chapter 11: loved it Zuu amazing work. Neil felt avni staring st him like how he teased her with that... Thank god even I thought for a second avni forget the way they take to go home. She scared me...Neil was pretending to be angry with avni smd told her to get out of the car and walk home and poor avni took it seriously and got out.. Like how Neil told avni that he was joking and told her to get in the car otherwise he will pick her up and before he could finish the sentence bechari avni ran into the car while Neil stood their smirking...could actually imagine that...liked how Neil said revamped will be sweeter wifey Hayes even I can't wait zuu...loved sheets and Bebe scene made me laugh... Liked how sheets was admiring avneil...liked how Neil was staring at avni while she slept.

Chapter 12: hmm y did avni give a plain good morning to Neil... Liked how neil was admiring her getting read and how her share pally got stuck on his watch and he pulled her loser making her fall on the couch next to him..oops wrong timing sheets and Bebe came...liked how Bebe told Neil to make avni wear the anklets...uff this time this bhima came when avni was about to tell Neil...felt really sorry for Akan... Haha Neely teasin Neil when he was staring at avni when she was talking to Ali...so now Neil was going to tell avni since she was confused about aman been there

Chapter 13:liked how Neil made avni sit down before tells no her...urghh now Ali cam liked how avni knew Neil was frustrated as they kept getting disturbed.. Liked how avni told Ali to leave them alone so that they can talk..liked how avni held Neil's hand and took him upstairs ...hayee loved hoe Neil stood their watching avni with a smile with his hands crossed when she was closing the door and when he was teasing her that also made me laugh...hehe Neil teasing avni when she was blushing...oops this time a,an came to disturb them... Avni got emotionsl seeing him...baby the way u portrayed aman and avni scene it made me have tears in my eyes especially how he took baby steps to enter the room. Avni observing aman when Neil called him by that name... How she touched his cheeks and he hugged her tightly while crying smd she hugged him both dropping on the ground...aman left and avneil was speaking through eyes and like how avni understood this is all because of Neil... Avni was shocked she Neil told her that dayawanti Mehta had planned to kill her and it was not a accident but all planned and how avni wa shocked digesting the news and she crumbled Neil's shirt and he allowed her to do that

Update soon zuu zuu can't wit for the next chap love u and amazing work

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