Rivanya OS: Forgive me darling

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi friends i don't really write os and ffs anymore, but i love Rivanya so i have written first and last one. Its a scenario for Rivanya fans i don't know how its comes out but i hope you all like it or not regardless do leave comment pls.


Rivanya OS: Forgive me darling

Scenario

Ritik and Shivanya are living together at Raheja mansion, with Ritik's siblings, Yamini is no more and Shesha is also frozen for a 10000 years. It is 10 months since Ritik and Shivanya have been married..

Shivanya kept looking at the time it was approaching 4pm, she remembered how bad she felt when she forgot her and Ritik's 10 month wedding anniversary. She remembered the argument they had this morning.

"Kaha jare ho?" she called he didn't utter much after their arugement.

"Office he said walking past her. " she was feeling bad.

"aaj tum office se thoda jaldi ana aur."

"aaj meetings hai late hojayega" he said looking towards the door holding a file, and not facing her.

"Ritik sorry mein bhul gay lekhen kal ghar par bahut kam tha to... He turned around hearing those excuses.

"Shivanya tum bas bahana bana rahti ho" she walked over to him.

"nai esa nai hai Ritik mein to" she pleaded.

" kabhi kabhi lagta hai ke tum mujhse pyar nai karti" he said in a kid like tone, and walked off.

"Ritik!" she called but she just walked off.

"Yeh Ritik bhi na esa kyu soch ta hai, mujhe bhi unke kareeb kitna accha lagta hai, aur aaj woh ghar ayaga tab, tab" she smiled to herself.

She waited for his sms patiently, but when she didn't get a reply she felt disheartened. Then her phone beeped. "ok I will come early" she smiled upon seeing that message. She knew her Ritik can't stay mad at her for long. Her eyes lit up when Ritik came through the door.

"tum agaye" she said rushing over to him and hugged him from the back. He felt her hands loop through his arms and her cheek pressed to his back. He slightly smiled,but won't let her off lightly.

"Hmm" he said acting disinterested, she didn't notice, she was all too happy that he came early, she held his hand and leaded him to the sofa.

"accha tum behtho mein abhi aye" he sat down, and saw her wearing his gift that lovely sari, which he gifted with a lovely sleeveless & backless blouse, he just loved the way she gracefully left the room with. He smiled to himself. After 5 minutes she came back in the room holding a dish her locked swaying framing her face as she walked to him. "meine tumhari favourite dish banaye hai" she revealed the little bowl.

"kheer" he said excited taking the bowl from her. She smiled seeing the excitement in his eyes. He took a spoonful. "kesa hai?" he looked up at her remembering their tiff

"acchi hai" he said in a boring tone" she face dropped.

"ruko ese mein mazza nai ayega" she took the bowl from him.

"kya kar rahi ho tum?" she smiled and he was surprised by her actions when she sat down across his lap instantly he held her steady. "tum mera haath se khavo" he felt the spoon to his lips and opened his mouth for her. His eyes were locked with hers. There were no words, she fed him two spoons. He then stopped them. "Ab mere bari" he took the spoon from her, and took a spoonful of kheer all done with their eyes locked, it was like they were in a trance. She gladly welcomed the spoonful. He could feel himself sweating slightly seeing his Shivanya lips envelope that spoon was enough for him to take her there and there. He smirked when the milk trickled down her lip. "oh" she replied going to wipe it off as she was about too. He slightly griped her neck pulling her closer. Shivanya's eyes become shy, and dropped the bowl. Ritik looked down and they both got up.

"Ritik sorry" she said seeing his shirt stained with kheer, it had gone on the outside and inside of the shirt. He laughed.

"koi baat nai darling, mein change karle ta hu" he smiled and so did she they let of each other so he could go to his cupboard.

She saw him pulling his night clothes out, she thought while he did that she will go clear the dishes away in the kitchen.

Ritik struggled with the buttons, he was all sticky from the spill.

"mein madat kar du" he looked up and saw his Shivanya in from of him. She didn't give him a chance she just began to unbutton his shirt. "yeh to dhone padega" she said looking at the state of his shirt. She looked at him as the last button came undone, and she pushed the shirt to the floor. "Hogaya" he held her hands in his. She looked up at him. He pushed the loose strands to the back of her ear, she relished his touch. She saw his smile and hugged him.

" mein kitni lucky hu Ritik ke mujhe tum mile" she said. He smiled feeling his darling wife his arms. She hugged him tighter, her cheek resting against his bare chest, her nose filled with the kheer and his scent. She could feel the urge of wanting to be close to him, He smiled feeling her cheek on his chest , hands on the sides of his waist. Shivanya turned her face forward and kissed that spot on his chest. He opened his eyes and she looked at her. She smiled at him, and willing showered kissed all over his chest, he inhaled and held the back of her head closely as she did. She gently came close to his neck and gave him a few their and then hugged him again. Ritik grinned holding her little frame in his arms. "Shivanya I love you" he whispered in her ear. She smiled hearing those magic words. He broke the hug wanting to see his beloved face.

"ab mere bari?" he said pulling her close.

"kya?" she asked.

"hmm abhi jo tumne kiya" he said playing with her blouse string. She took a step back feeling shy all of a sudden.

"D-dekho Ritik.." she said taking a few steps back. He gave her a full smile. She ran to the window looking away shyly. He went over and wrapped his arms around her waist. He pushed her hair to the side, and gazed at her bare delectable back. He pressed his lips to her nape, she mashed her pallu with her hands and closed her eyes. He pulled her hands into his as he gave her another kiss along her back, then followed by another, Shivanya squeezed his hand as her breath quickened. He let go of one hand and sided it across her belly, making her sigh in pleasure. Hearing her response Ritik angled his face into her neck kissing it and then suckled on her earlobe the same time his hand untied her blouse string. Shivanya's eyes opened, she saw her sari on the floor she looked up straight into her loving husband's eyes, she loved him so much. He pulled her close and their lips met in a sweet kiss, then the kisses because hot and passionate, she looped his neck and he carried her to their bed where they become one.

THE END

hope you liked it 😳



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Posted: 9 years ago
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First of all: Shesha is also frozen for a 10000 years
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This line won my heart. 😆

Second: i love Rivanya so i have written first and last one.

This was a let down because the OS was so good.⭐️

Third: ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️






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Posted: 9 years ago
#3
Awesome dear...its so hot nsexy😊👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Its Amazing.Loved it.👏

Please continue.😊


N this is too good:Shesha is also frozen for a 10000 years..i think Life long imprisonment is better.😆
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In show,the way cv's making her to peek into Rivanya's room shamelessly and seeing their private moments and ruining their cute scenes...nightmare.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow its osm
Do write more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thank you everyone seeing your responses i will cont this ff with another part will post it soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's such a nice and sweet OS... amazing!
will be waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Shesha frozen and that too for 1000 years...Wow! best news in the world. When she wakes up, the whole would have turned into Mars...she can do her angry young man (oops! woman) tone towards the martians...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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working on 2nd part of this os if anyone is interested in still reading it😳
also wanted to ask do you guys prefer me to write dialogue in english or hindi?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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seems no one is interested.. ok thats fine 😊

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