Rivanya os-agar tum sath ho..Dill Ye Sambhal Jaye..(chapter 2 on pg2)) - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice keep it up ..waiting for ur next update :D
Edited by -AriaNe- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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At night..
Shivanya was sleep..
Ritik was on sofa..ritik look shivanya..
Ritik-sote hue kitni masum lag ti hai aur jag te abhi chilla de ge..gussa nak par he rah ta hai..

At jungle
Shivanya-aryan..Aryan..kaha ho tum..he hold her bend..he take her in his arms..he hold her tightly..
Aryan-tum aaj bhi der se ayi..ab aaj much bat nahi hogi..
Shivanya-aryan kah do Jo kah na hai..kal feet ye pal ho ya na ho..
He hold her in his arms..
Shivanya I love u...
Shivanya was wake up..
Shivanya-ruko..ritik was shocked..
Shivanya hug him tightly..please muje chord k mat jao..ritik says hua me yahi hu..shivanya realized that its dreem just..n she hug him..
Shivanya-i m sorry..WO me sapna..
Ritik-its OK..tumhe haq hai..
Shivanya look at his eyes..
At morning..
Shivanya wars towal only..n ritik came in room..ritik slowly slowly came near of her..she feels embraced..
He touch the towal..
Shivanya s heartbeat was fast..
Ritik-towal utaro..
Shivanya-kya..
Ritik-khud utarti ho ya me utaru..
Shivanya was shoked..
Ritik-medam ye yellow towal nahi mari dhoti hai Jo aaj puja me pahen ni hai..ritik was lounging.. Tum dar gye na..😆
Shivanya-kya..😲
Ritik-kitna ganda soch ti ho..waise agar tumhe koi problame nahi..to muje koi problame nahi..he touch her towal..
Shivaya-chodo..shivanya s hearbeet was fast
Shivanya-dekho mare pas mat ana varna..me chilla do ge..
Ritik-😆😆jao..jao..mari bivi ho tum koi nahi ane wala..
Shivanya starts crying..
Ritik-sorry baba..me majak kar raha that..
Shivanya can't stop crying..😭
Ritik-shivanya..acha bus mari dhoti rakh lo..shivanya..
He hold her hand tightly..shivanya dekho muje tum larki ho is ka MATLAB ye nahi k tum par haq dikhao apna..tumhe pura haq hai..don't cry..ritik was gone..
He lock the dor..he says from outside aap change kar lo..😕
Shivanya-aap kitne ache hai..par me apko kaise samjao Jo rista aap chhte hai WO kabhi nahi ban sakta..
At puja..
Angad-bhaiya aap ko aur bhabhi k liye honymoon plan kiya hai..simla me..
Shivanya-simla..waha to..
Ritik-waha kya shivanya..
Waha hamara wood house hai..jaha me aur aryan paheli bar mile the..shivanya thoughts..
Shivanya-kuch nahi..

At wood house..
Ritik look outside from window..that's was fireflys..ritik hold one..
Shivanya-kitni beautiful hai..
Ritik-app se nahi..shivanya was smaile..
Thare was one dairy on the table..ritik hold the dairy..
Ritik opin the dairy..thare was alots of aryan..
Shivanya-wo..ye..
Ritik-muje kuch nahi jan na..he hold her hand..ye tumhara kal tha shivanya..aur mare pyaar agar dum hai to aap ko muje se koi alag nahi kar sakta..
Shivanya-ritik..aap..
Ritik-kaha na kuch mat bollo..
Shivanya-13 sal ki thi jab use milli..bachapne me pyar ho gya..bahot acha lag ta tha kab sab kahte the..shivanya to aryan ki hai..pata nahi chala kab use apna man ne lagi..
Ritik-waise mari bhi ak girl friend thi..jab me kg ma that..roj mari chocolate mangti..me muakura kar de de ta..
Shivanya-😆😆
Pricap
Shivanya near of bonfire.. He was come an kiss on her chicks..he try to opin her cholis dori..
Shivanya push him..
Shivanaya-kya kar rahe ho..
Ritik-muje laga itna time ho gya...khush thi aap..
Shivanaya-muakura diya is ka ye MATLAB nikla aap be..aap sirf muje touch kar na chahte ho..surf haq dikhana chate ho..
Ritik push her on the floor..he hold her hands titghtly..
Shivanya-chodo muje..
Ritik-kyu..haq hai mara..yahi hota hai na haq dikha na..


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -AriaNe-

nice keep it up ..waiting for ur next update :D

Tnx..updated..if u like I want long cmnt..😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Haha ritik to bada fast nikala... Kg wala love🤣 Super cute update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kit_Kat

Haha ritik to bada fast nikala... Kg wala love🤣 Super cute update

Yaa..but precap bahot hot hai..but thoda angry bhi hai ritik..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: jaan..rantara..


Yaa..but precap bahot hot hai..but thoda angry bhi hai ritik..


Hot and angry ritik is a deadly combo
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome 😊 cont soon[/QUOTE
Tnx..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: jaan..rantara..

Tnx..updated..if u like I want long cmnt..😉

hehe see mostly i just hit like but comment as i was happy to see this os of rivanya
this forum has barely ff//os u knw...anyways love ur story do continue 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Awesome update
Loved it
Please continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
awesome update
loll dhoti part was quite funny 🤣
oh god ritik got to know abt Aryan but didn't judge shivanya 🤗
shivanya love Aryan since age 13 😲
ritik is so understanding husband 🤗
precap look shocking 😲
continue plz

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