Rivanya os-agar tum sath ho..Dill Ye Sambhal Jaye..(chapter 2 on pg2))

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Hello..
Rivanyains..
Thish is my os on rivanya..

Plot..
Shivanya is daughter of Mr sinha..he is her life..but he hate shivanya becouae when Shivanya born her mom dai..she want boy but..she is girl..N one panditji says if she born girl child then her daughter s life was in danger..N all thare was same problem too in Mrs sinha s pregnasi..Mrs sinha says save her Childs life to doctor..
Now Shivanya fell so alon..she meets aryan manhodra N find her life partner in him..but her papa fixed her marriage with his friend s son..he is ritik..shivanya marry ritik for her papa..ritik start to love her..but she miss aryam..
Lest see..

If u like plot please cmnt..

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LaLate night at Mumbai..
On rode one girl was crying.she war bridal cloths..n try to find auto..
Shivanya-auto..auto..me tuje nahi Jane dogi..tum Muje maaf nahi karoge..nahi miloge mujese akhri bar..she try to call him..she was band down on the flor..she was crying..
Shivanya-kaha Ho tum..
Shesa was came..
Shesa hold her hand..she says chalo..shivanya..mamaji ki ijat ka sawal hai..thodi der me barat ati hogi..shivanya chalo..
Shivanya hug shesa..
Shivanya-shesa bahot galat hua hai use ke sath..WO tut gya hai..muje use mill na hai..WO jaa raha hai use roko..
Shesa-shivanya ye pal tare papa ke bare me soch ne ka hai chalo..
Shivanya can't stop cry..

After same hours..
At mandap..ritik was waiting..
Shivanya slowly slowly came at mandap..she look so beautiful..ritik first time meet sivanya..he can't take his eyes from her..shivanya was crying..ritik fill her mang..n he Marry shivanya..shivanya can't look at ritik s face ones..

At sivanya s viadayi..
She hug shesa..tears becomeing in her eyes..
Shivanya-papa ab aap ko Koi paresaan karne wala nahi hoga..me jaa rahi ho..ab to ak bar pyaar se ashirvad de do..
Mr sinha put his hand on her chicks..khus raho beta..
She hug her papa..she says papa gale laga lo..
He hate her from her childhood but today he forgive all thing n hug shivanya..
Mr sinha-maaf kar de apne papa ko..Jo khusi tuje yaha nahi mili WO ritik k gar mile ge..
He gives a letter to her..
Mr sinha-tari mom ki letter hai tuje sadi k din de ne ko bolla tha..

At ritik s house..
All welcome shivanya..n all happy..
Angad-bhai ab to aap ko parmnent haq mill gya..aap ka room reddy hai..
Ritik-tum kabhi nahi sudhro ge..use k liye ye naya gar hai.
WO abhi reddy nahi hogi..muje se itna pass ane..
Angad-bhai wo bivi hai apki..aur aap..larki samne se nahi boll ti sarmati hai feer man jati hai..

At suhaagraat..
Shivanya look outside from window..she think about Aryan..
Suddnly ritik was came..he hold shivanya s hand..she feel embraced..
Shivanya-hath hatyiye..
Ritik was shocked..
Shivanya-hath hatyiye..aur mare pass ane ki jarurat nahi hai..mare sath koi jabradaati nahi chalege..
Ritik says acha..kis ne kaha hum aap k sath koi jabardasti karege..
Shivanya-me 21 visdi ki larki hu..mare kuch arman the..jise is sadi ne ak pal me tod diya..
Ritik was smaile..
Ritik-hum aap ke arman ko tut ne nahi dege..waise hum to 19 visdi ka..humari nibhegi kaise..
Shivanya-koi jarurat nahi rista bana ne ki..muje divorce chahiye..
Ritik thought ye larki aise nahi samje gi..
Ritik-hum cort jayege feer bhi hum ko 6 months sath me rah na padega feer hi devorce milega..so hum 6 months k baad hi jate hai..tab tak aap mare gar walo ko paresaan kar do..ak dayan jaise bahu ban jao..wo khud hi decorce de ne kahege..ritik was smailing
Shivanya was smaile..
Ritik-dheeew dhere aap hume samaj jana aur hum aap ko so hum dost ban kar to rah hi sakte hai na..waise me kahi aur jaa kar bhi so jata..par mare parivar walo ko dard hoga..use liye hum ak hi bad par so jaa te hai..aap ko muje par aitbar rakh na hoga..
Shivanya came near of ritik n sleep..

Pricap-
Shivanya wars towal only..n ritik came in room..ritik slowly slowly came near of her..she feels embraced..
He touch the towal..
Shivanya s heartbeat was fast..
Ritik-towal utaro..
Shivanya-kya..
Ritik-khud utarti ho ya me utaru..
Shivanya was shoked..

Edited by jaan..rantara.. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Update soon... would love to read RiVanya OS
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey do update soon
Wud love to read
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Shivanya 21st century Ki ladki hai😆 and rtik 19 century ka😆
Jeez precap...ritik is FF me to show se bhi fast nikala🤣
Nice one dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kit_Kat

Shivanya 21st century Ki ladki hai😆 and rtik 19 century ka😆
Jeez precap...ritik is FF me to show se bhi fast nikala🤣
Nice one dear

Wait karo abhi to ritik shivanya ko devorce dene se roka hai..where where pagal kar de ga use..😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice..can't wait to read more.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: slippery_chilka

Very nice..can't wait to read more.

Tnx..
I try to make thish cute an romantic..😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: jaan..rantara..


Wait karo abhi to ritik shivanya ko devorce dene se roka hai..where where pagal kar de ga use..😉


Ritik shivanya ko apne pyaar me pagal kardega
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kit_Kat


Ritik shivanya ko apne pyaar me pagal kar

dega

😉

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