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Mahi114

@Mahi114

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Posted: 6 years ago

#61

Chapter is super emotional

Can u update soon

It's been a week since u updated

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Sarah Gul

@sarahgul

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: ratna.nanda
This is so good..so beautiful. ..and you are writing it so well yaar!
Waiting for next update!

Thank you Ratna. 😊

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Sarah Gul

@sarahgul

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: Mahi114
Chapter is super emotional
Can u update soon
It's been a week since u updated

Thank you Mahi.. 😊

Yes i will update the next chap next week.. Sorry but going through a bad break up. 😭

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fortitudeoth

@fortitudeoth

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: sarahgul

Thank you Mahi..😊

Yes i will update the next chap next week.. Sorry but going through a bad break up.😭

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Maria

@Maria.Jewel

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#65

I am commenting here so that i remember to start this tomorrow :)

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Sunshine-1

@Sunshine-1

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#66

They are so cute yaar. Its so emotional

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The.Wanderer

@The.Wanderer

Rocker

Posted: 6 years ago

#67

Ch 3

Bella's reaction to having kids was ADORABLE!! Like so cute!! The way you especially wrote that part in italics was just too good. It made me feel like conversation happened at a very fast pace.

Meera being a bit of a surprise... Well well well... 😉 How awkward Mahir must have felt telling Bella about their exploits... ☺️

But Bella took the news of having not one but two kids really well. I can't even imagine what she must have gone through when she found out that she has managed to forget her kids. And how understanding Mahir is being.

Mahir is the best dad in the world! To manage two kids while dealing with his own pain and uncertainties is just too good.

Love the way you have explored Bella and Mahir's equation here. It's just so comfortable. Despite her not remembering anything she is looking to him for support when she doesn't remember anything. That underlying trust is so touching.

I am loving the pace of this story. Neither too slow nor too fast. Keep it up and

UPDATE SOON!! 😆