My Angel BeHir FF IF_NC_ENTRY Ch 13 on Pg 44 - Page 3

Originally posted by: sonie32

ahahaha🤣🤣ash🤣

last line🤣🤣🤣 i'm loving it<3😳

rehaan babu ne yaha bhi peecha nahi choda hum readers ka🤣

and bultu as usual...fattu🤣

bela love you girl...poor maahir🤣

awesome again👏👏👏

Originally posted by: Maria.Jewel

Omg Ash! I think you convinced me of Bela's badass character as much as you did with Mahir last time. Very well written! 10/10👏

Also could you give an intro about the characters like you did last time or is it not allowed? Because i see that Kuhu, Rehan, Yuvi, Anu, Adi and Bultu are all on Bela's team of friends. Who are they and are they related somehow? That kind of knowledge would be interesting as well

Originally posted by: fortitudeoth

👏 🤣

This is a strong first chapter. But the word limit is going to work against you. I think the strongest part of your stories is all the details you write. Even with the limit you have written so well!

Does Mr. Thick Glasses have any friends? I can perfectly imagine Bela with this role reversal. Every character does not seem out of place so far. You have written their dialogues and roles perfectly.

Thank you for including Bultu 😆

Excellent update Ash! Looking forward to the rest of the story.

Originally posted by: humtumsalman

wow
waiting for next update

Originally posted by: nuomi.riceball

This is so interesting and exciting.
Plz update soon!!

Originally posted by: Sunshine-1

I am loving this role-reversal story. Bold Bela and introvert Mahir- very interesting. First meet itself was great. Waiting for the next update.

Originally posted by: life4me

Lovely concept and awesome update. Continue soon.