My Angel BeHir FF IF_NC_ENTRY Ch 13 on Pg 44

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_nakshi_

@_nakshi_

Sparkler

Posted: 6 years ago

#31

U have started a very new story quite opposite to previous one...

Bold Bela and innocent mahir was something quite interesting..

Haha Bela due to dare kissed mahir and mahir feeling cry

OMG all the best ash

Waiting for their combined studies and wanna know how love blossoms between two opposite poles

Do update soon

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nuomi.riceball

@nuomi.riceball

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Posted: 6 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: The.Wanderer

Thanks Maria!! 😳

I guess I can give an intro to each character informally in a comment and not as a part of the story.

Janvi Sharma is Bella's mother. A single mom and a yesteryear star.

Omkar Kapoor is a filthy rich rich producer who courted and then impregnated Janvi when she was just starting her career.

Bultu, Rehan, Anu, Adi, Kuhu all are Bella's friends.

Yuvi is her boyfriend.

Sumitra and Andy were explained in the into itself.

I hope the characters are clear. 😃

Might I ask the question.

So Bella does not have any relations with her father too?

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The.Wanderer

@The.Wanderer

Rocker

Posted: 6 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: nuomi.riceball

Might I ask the question.

So Bella does not have any relations with her father too?

Nope. Why she doesn't have any relationship with her father will get cleared in the next few chapters.

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Maria

@Maria.Jewel

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Posted: 6 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: The.Wanderer

Thanks Maria!! 😳

I guess I can give an intro to each character informally in a comment and not as a part of the story.

Janvi Sharma is Bella's mother. A single mom and a yesteryear star.

Omkar Kapoor is a filthy rich rich producer who courted and then impregnated Janvi when she was just starting her career.

Bultu, Rehan, Anu, Adi, Kuhu all are Bella's friends.

Yuvi is her boyfriend.

Sumitra and Andy were explained in the into itself.

I hope the characters are clear. 😃

Thanks😆

Also what about Mahir? Can we have someone for him like Kuhu was there for Vibha?😳Obviously its your story and you can do whatever you want but like just saying i shipped Kuhu-Vibha more than Bevish😳

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The.Wanderer

@The.Wanderer

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Posted: 6 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Maria.Jewel

Thanks 😆
Also what about Mahir? Can we have someone for him like Kuhu was there for Vibha?😳Obviously its your story and you can do whatever you want but like just saying i shipped Kuhu-Vibha more than Bevish😳

Nope Mahir will be all alone. He will only have his mother in his corner.😳

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nuomi.riceball

@nuomi.riceball

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Posted: 6 years ago

#36

Does he pay child support or something like that?

Or Bella is treated like any illegitimate daughter?

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Maria

@Maria.Jewel

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+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: The.Wanderer

Nope Mahir will be all alone. He will only have his mother in his corner.😳

aww poor baby <3

But i trust you with your character building and story and oh god mujhse wait nahi ho raha

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Sarah Gul

@sarahgul

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#38

TALIYAN BAJNI CHAHIYE 👏

I love it Ash.. Seeing Bela as the new baddie.. 😆

Have to say.. I just love the way your characters have a backstory that gives us a hint about why the characters are like that.. 👏👏

You have to continue this... And loving the way you also bring humor in your story.. Lovely..

👏👏

Edit - Mujhe ab cute negative wali bela chahiye.. 🤣 🤣

Edited by sarahgul - 6 years ago

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The.Wanderer

@The.Wanderer

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Posted: 6 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: _nakshi_
U have started a very new story quite opposite to previous one...
Bold Bela and innocent mahir was something quite interesting..
Haha Bela due to dare kissed mahir and mahir feeling cry
OMG all the best ash
Waiting for their combined studies and wanna know how love blossoms between two opposite poles
Do update soon

Thanks Pranu!! And yes I thought this would be unique prompt to write about so i chose it. 😃