Italy our new destination - Behir FF New Chapter 10 LAST updated - Page 5

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Posted: 6 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: The.Wanderer

Sarah too good!! That's it for now. I have a lot more to say. But travelling right now. Will continue once I reach home.
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Thanku Ash 🤗 Yay waiting for your comment then. Travel safe 😉
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Posted: 6 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: sarahgul



Thank you my lovely claire 🤗
Yes finally they Met. yes i wanted everything to look very realistic. Happy that you felt that way.

Anu coming back ? Hmm let me see maybe or maybe not 😆
Oh i have to find out what it means. 😆
Oh now i know what it means Thanku again for the compliment.



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If she comes back, please don't make her evil. I think with how mature Anu was during the breakup, she can be willing to let Mahir go to Bela or maybe even help them 😃 😛

I had to check what you wrote meant so it was my turn to make you check something I wrote 😉

I will be waiting to read about their next meet 😆

I have commented enough for now.
Edited by fortitudeoth - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#43
Awesome update. Continue soon pls.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#44
Hey so nice part..
Finally the wait is over and both behir met each other
Despite having pains seeing one other both forgot their past and enjoyed
Beautifully written
Waiting eagerly for next part
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Posted: 6 years ago
#45
Yes. So Sarah. First of all the way you describe the places, it's next to none. You are amazing in that sense. Just too good. And especially the way you have done it in last two chapters, it's mind blowing.

So now the story part. You have handled everything so maturely. Especially the break up part. Your version of BeHir... ❤️ They are mature as well as childish both at the same time. I am loving them.


Continue soon. Waiting for the next part. 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: fortitudeoth



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If she comes back, please don't make her evil. I think with how mature Anu was during the breakup, she can be willing to let Mahir go to Bela or maybe even help them 😃 😛

I had to check what you wrote meant so it was my turn to make you check something I wrote 😉

I will be waiting to read about their next meet 😆

I have commented enough for now.

Ha ya check it. 😆 I am not giving you any spoiler. Just wait and watch. 😉
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Posted: 6 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: life4me

Awesome update. Continue soon pls.


Thanku 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
#48

Thanku 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: _nakshi_

Hey so nice part..

Finally the wait is over and both behir met each other
Despite having pains seeing one other both forgot their past and enjoyed
Beautifully written
Waiting eagerly for next part


Thanku 😊 Yes finally the wait is over. Yes i will try to update it next week
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Posted: 6 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: The.Wanderer

Yes. So Sarah. First of all the way you describe the places, it's next to none. You are amazing in that sense. Just too good. And especially the way you have done it in last two chapters, it's mind blowing.

So now the story part. You have handled everything so maturely. Especially the break up part. Your version of BeHir... ❤️ They are mature as well as childish both at the same time. I am loving them.


Continue soon. Waiting for the next part. 😊


Arey meri Ash thank you so much 🤗 i always wanted to see behir like that. ❤️

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