Behir Fan Fiction : THE FAULT IN OUR STARS - Page 7

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Posted: 6 years ago
#61
Good one😊
What might have Mukhiyaji told?
Eager to know
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Posted: 6 years ago
#62
Is he going to get them married????
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Posted: 6 years ago
#63
Thank God
You finally updated
Do tell when r u going to update next
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Posted: 6 years ago
#64
Continue soon plz
Awesome update it is
Wanna read more
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Posted: 6 years ago
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--What is this noise? What time is it?
Mahir thought as soon as he woke up. He slept till afternoon today.
-- Rafi, where are you?
But Rafi wasn't in the hut. Mahir couldn't understand what the time was. However, he woke up and began to go near the well. He washed his mouth and came back. He noticed everyone was just looking at him only. What's the matter ? He remembered about last night suddenly. Mukhya ji told him not to sleep but he didn't know when he fell asleep. What have the village decided? What else is written for him? Where is Bela? He should go and talk to her. She too has been humiliated. Should he go and check her?
All of these were going inside his head while he saw the village arrangements for some occasion. Which function is coming around ? Of course it's been only 6-7 months and he doesn't know about every ritual of the village. Mahir saw Rafi.
-- Rafi, come here..
He called him. Rafi came to him smiling. Mahir was about to ask about hekim ji when Rafi told him with signs that hekim and mukhya are in the chamber and they have called Mahir. Mahir thought to himself ...so this is the decision time.
He entered the chamber slowly. As soon as he entered the room he saw mukhya, hekim sitting with other people. Mahir knew them all, except for two of them. But he had more things to concern than thinking about other men.
-- Areh Aditya, come inside.
Mukhya ji smiled and said. Mahir was surprised a little.
--You called me mukhya ji?
-- Yes, have a look at these two kurtas. Select one for tonight's function.
This is something Mahir didn't expect before coming to this room. However, he went near the dresses. Hekim ji said
-- Take the other one...umm...the blue one..
Mahir felt really relaxed. Thank God that hekim ji isn't angry with him anymore. He smiled and took the blue one.
-- The premise has been decorated very nicely. Is there any function ?
The room had quite a laugh at this, although Mahir couldn't understand why. Mukhya ji said
-- Yes beta, there is a function. Very special one...
-- Oh. You could have told me sir. I'd have helped in the decorations.
-- No...no... there's no need. We can't let the groom die working for his marriage right!
The room laughed again, but Mahir was stunned. Hekim ji noticed this.

Bela had a mixed feeling since hearing this decision. She will be married to Mahir, once again! When she was blaming her destiny she didn't know this was coming along. Indeed, Bela knew that marrying Mahir can not remove every stain in their relation. But at least there's a hope now since Mahir had agreed to this marriage.
-- This time I won't let you go Mahir ji! I'll love you with everything.
Bela thought and smiled. She was giving a trial to the saree she will be wearing today at evening.She was lost in her thought when she heard his voice .
-- Bela, are you there?
--Mahir ji!
Bela hurriedly tried to adjust her saree. Mahir hearing her voice entered the room and seeing Bela he turned around awkwardly. Bela still adjusting her saree said
-- I'm sorry.
And it echoed because Mahir also said sorry.
-- I want to talk to you.
-- Yeah tell me, you can turn around also..
-- What the hell is going on Bela. You said you want to marry me? The village is preparing for our marriage. Who are you to take this decision alone?
Bela was utterly surprised. What does that mean? Mahir didn't know about it?
-- Mahir ji, I thought you know about it.
--Don't try to fool me Bela...I'm not falling for this time.
-- But Mahir ji...
-- What?What did you think? You can counter me like this? So that I have to marry you? No tell me what did you think? I'll get ready to marry you forgetting everything? This is why you are so busy with your dress and make up, huh?
-- Mahir...plz...let me say something at least...
-- You think I'll forget all those moments when you kept humiliating my love...really Bela...did you actually think I'll be ready to take you as my wife...
-- Mahir stop it...
-- What did you think ? I am a lunatic who falls for the same trap each time...knowing that you killed my mother...
--Mahir stop it.
Bela raised her voice so high that Mahir had to stop.
-- You claim you had loved me once . And you can't believe me for once!...really Mahir? Even I thought that you are guilty for something... but I read your eyes. I saw innocence in them and I loved you. But you...
Bela broke down completely, her weepings made Mahir stand numb. Bela continued
-- I trusted you, even then when I didn't love you. But you could never trust me Mahir...And how would you see innocence in my eyes when you never bothered to know about me Mahir...
Mahir didn't know what to say...if Bela is innocent, even then nothing is sorted. Why did he get punishment then? For what?
Mahir didn't speak anything else. He turned around to leave.
-- If you want to break the marriage then go ahead Mahir. Because it doesn't make any difference to the reality. I am your legal wife...this is the reality.
Mahir listened and went out of the hut. But as soon as he left the premise, he saw hekim ji standing. Seeing Mahir he stopped him and said
-- Where are you coming from Aditya?
-- Actually...
-- You went to meet Bela right? Have some patience, you will have all the time in the world after marriage.
Seeing Mahir hesitating, he said
-- What? Aren't you happy with this marriage?
-- Hekim ji, I have something to tell you...
-- You may tell me...but let me tell you one thing before. Either you marry Bela today or get ready to leave the village. It's your call. And now tell me what do you have to say.
--.. ...nothing...
he nodded a no and began to leave the premise.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#66
Waiting for more
Loving it way too much
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Posted: 6 years ago
#67
Awww...Thanks for a soonish update
We loved it
Awesome
Continue soon
Plzzzx
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Posted: 6 years ago
#68
Nice updates dear
Loved it
Bela mahir confrontation was nice
Now they are married to each other again
Waiting for next update eagerly
Thanks
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Posted: 6 years ago
#69
nice...thanks for updating
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Bela is sitting in veil, in Mahir's hut, on his small bed. Hours ago they got married according to the tradition. Everyone seemed so happy . Except for two of them. One is Mahir certainly , and Bela couldn't feel the happiness thinking about what's going to happen after that. She is still thinking the same. She heard the sound of the door opening. Mahir entered the hut. He came inside a few steps, remembered something and went back and locked the door. He came near the bed. Saw Bela but without saying anything took a pillow from the bed and began to go to the other side of the fence.
-- Mahir ji, where are you going?
Bela sounded confused, she was holding her veil upwards.
-- You sleep here Bela. I'll sleep on the ground.
--Why?
--Oh plz Bela! Stop behaving so innocent. It is not like we used to sleep on the same bed before.
Mahir was so irritated that he didn't wish to even stay in this room. But he has no option.
-- I know Mahir ji, but I'm telling you it's not needed anymore. You can stay in this bed.
-- You know I'm not letting you stay on the ground certainly.
--No one is staying on the ground tonight Mahir ji.
Bela said with a calm and satisfied tune. Mahir took some moments to understand and then began to leave again. Bela stood up and grabbed him by his wrist.
--Bela plz, I'm tired.
-- That's why I'm saying you to stay in the bed.
-- Oh really, months back you could hardly share the bed with me because you felt uncomfortable. Now you want to sleep with me in this tiny bed. May I ask you why?
-- Mahir...
-- We were also married then right? Then why not then but now? Is it always your call,huh? When you need me you'll come to me. And the next moment you'll throw me away like a tissue paper Bela! Is it?
-- What are you saying Mahir? You know the situation which caused our marriage then, don't you? I wasn't ready then...
-- And you know the situation of this marriage now Bela. And I'm not ready and until I can't get it straight, we'll stay like this.
Mahir went to sleep. Bela felt so helpless. When will all these end God? She thought. She rest her head on the pillow, soon it got wet with her tears. And Mahir! Well he knows how to hide his tears, even from himself.
The next morning Mahir woke up and found Bela wasn't in the room. He didn't bother and went near the well. How could anyone look so Beautiful! He thought to himself as soon as he saw her pouring water from the jug on the hands of Samira. Bela's hair on one side, and the smile on her face.
-- You should smile more often, it suits you.
Mahir remembered saying this to her once. He also got a smile on his face remembering that day. He was lost in his thoughts when he heard Bela calling him.
-- Areh where are you lost? Come wash your face..
Mahir went near the well and said
-- I can handle it
-- Main daloongi toh bhi paani hi niklegi...doodh nehin...
Bela said deridely. All the children present there laughed at that.
Mahir didn't drag the conversation. He went to Bela and she poured water on his hands. While washing his face he was scattering water at Bela also, although unknowingly. Bela couldn't take her eyes of her husband. The children left the spot. Behir was also about to leave when Bela slipped on the wet ground near the well. But before she could fall on the ground Mahir held her by her waist. But he couldn't maintain the balance. They fall with Bela on top of him.
-- Not again plz!
Words escaped from Mahir's mouth unintentionally. Last time they fell like this, they were made married by the villagers.
-- Get off Bela...
He began to push her but in this hastle, Bela's mangalsutra got tangled with his shirt's button.
-- I wander what they will do now if they see us like this...
Mahir mumbled with annoyance and started to untangle the mangalsutra. Bela on the other hand could only concentrate on the proximity of them. She could feel Mahir's hot breadth and his heartbeats. She doesn't know what is this unseen force that attracts her towards him so badly. But all she wants nowadays is some sort of gesture from him...Mahir could hardly untangle the chain, before he felt Bela's hand on his cheek. And before even he could look up and meet her eyes, his eyes got closed due to the kiss Bela placed on his lips... Mahir didn't know when did his one hand wrapped Bela's waist and the other hand hold Bela's head...Mahir didn't know when did he start kissing Bela with so much passion...for moments he could only feel those lips attracting him like a powerful magnet.
But in the middle of all these intimacy, Mahir suddenly got the vision of his parents, his mother covered with blood and his father holding a gun.
-- You...only you are responsible for this..
Those words striked him so hard...he immidiately broke the kiss, almost pushed Bela, stood up and ran towards his hut...Bela felt so unwanted and helpless by this action of Mahir, she could only sit down on the ground holding her head.
Edited by shwadhin - 6 years ago

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