Behir Fan Fiction : THE FAULT IN OUR STARS - Page 12

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-- So what have you decided Mahir? Will you leave this village for good?
Mukhya ji asked this to Mahir, who is standing in front of Mukhya ji, hekim ji and some other villagers or head of their houses. Hekim ji told about everything to mukhya ji taking his time. Of course he skipped the part of Mahir and Imran planning to relocate the villagers. Rather he made the mukhya understand everything calmly, so that he doesn't get Mahir wrong. After listening to everything the mukhya only had one query, what was the necessity of telling the lies. But hekim ji made him understand that perhaps he was afraid to disclose everything back then. But now he has truly accepted everything of his life and is ready to move on. The mukhya ji then called some of the villagers and told them everything and gave them time to think of what to do about him. By evening the entire village came to them united. They have no problem with anything, if Mahir wishes then he can stay in the village happily and if he wishes then he can leave anytime. Mukhya ji and hekim ji called Mahir to know his decision.
Meanwhile, Bela and Mahir had their conversation. Mahir didn't want to leave Bela with Vish. He doesn't trust Vish. But Bela was adamant that she will go and Mahir will stay in the village for now. Basically, Bela wants to sort things with Vikrant at first. She's afraid, what if Vikrant gets mad at her for everything? And tries to harm Mahir. Better she should confront him first. She's sure that she'll make Vikrant understand about the reality. Then she can refocus on her present, but at first she must fix her past. That's why she eventually made Mahir agreed to let her go with Vish.

-- So what have you decided Adit...oh Mahir?
-- Mukhya ji, I would like to stay in the village for some more time. I don't want to leave now.
The villagers felt a sense of relief by this. Mahir could see it, because they all had smiles on their faces now.
Even mukhya and hekim ji were happy, Mukhya ji said,
-- So you want to stay more. That's good Mahir, we'd like to have you among us for some time also.
-- Thanks mukhya ji...you guyz mean a lot to me now.
-- So do you Mahir.
Said hekim ji.
Mahir smiled and said,
-- Thanks hekim ji. But Bela will have to go for now.
-- What? But why?
-- As you guyz know, someone from our friends has come to this village. She has told me that Bela's father is in his death bed. And he wants to see Bela.
-- Okay Mahir, but I don't think that it is appropriate to let them go alone. Someone from the village can escort them.
The villagers agreed with hekim ji. Mahir said,
-- I was concerned for the same hekim ji. But Vish, I mean our friend, she has come here on her own. They are sure that they can manage.
-- That's ok Mahir, but yet I can not allow them to go alone Mahir. Some of us will accompany them till the town. If they agree, only then they can leave tomorrow morning.
Mukhya ji concluded with this. Mahir had no other option but to agree.

-- But what is the need of this? I've come by myself right? Then I can leave also.
-- I'm sure you can, Vish. But when Bela's there, I'm taking the best of the measures. Do you understand?
-- Do I have any choice to disagree? Bela, you tell him plz.
-- Mahir is right Vish, someone must accompany us through this dense forest.
-- Yes of course, what was I expecting!
Vish left the cottage with this. After she left, Mahir went and closed the door.
Bela was surprised but yet was smiling.
-- That looks rude Mahir ji! As if you are happy that she's left.
Mahir came and hugged Bela,
-- I am. She doesn't leave you alone. How am I supposed to get romantic with you?! (Winks)
-- Huh!
They hugged each other again. Just then Vish knocked at the door. Mahir was disturbed, yet went to open the door.
-- Why did you colse the door so early! I could not even cross half of the yard. Anyways, Bela, plz come out for a second.
Bela while leaving saw Mahir's face,
-- In a moment Mahir ji.
She said while putting one hand on his face. Mahir smiled.
Vish took Bela in a side and said,
-- Bela, what is this? Why are you agreeing with Mahir? You know na that they will slow us down?
-- I know Vish, but you have to understand. There concern is not regardless here..
-- But Bela...
-- If it gives them peace of mind, then what is the problem? They will go with us and that's final.
Vish agreed at last.

When Bela came to the room she saw Mahir waiting for her. She came near him and stood in front of him, while he's sitting in the bed. She hugged him like this. He innocently said,
-- Its our anniversary Bela, and I've fallen sick. On top of that, you are also talking about leaving. How will I live for the rest of the days?
-- I know Mahir ji. Even I don't want to leave you for a second. But you know na, I have to go.
-- Why don't you want to take me with you then?
-- Mahir, you see the villagers have done so much for us. I don't want to hurt them by any mean. What will they think if both of us leave together this suddenly? Even we hadn't planned this right? But I must see dad now. But you can stay here right?
Mahir was listening to Bela with all his heart, she feels for the villagers exactly the same way. Just after Bela finished talking Mahir took her in his arms for a tight hug.
-- Mahir Ji! I'm leaving for only a few days...one week maximum.
-- How could you be so nice to everyone Bela? How do you care for everyone?
Bela smiled and replied,
-- I've learned it from you Mahir Ji.
Mahir came out of the hug, but Bela was still in his arms.
-- But I'm not that good Bela. You have to agree with my two conditions, only then you can leave.
-- Oh really, what are they?
-- First, I'll come with you...
-- What?
-- Till the forest end..
-- Mahir ji...
-- That's final.
-- Okay, agreed. Next?
-- Next, you have to compensate for the losses.
-- What losses?
-- Areh...!! My morning kisses..
-- Oow...okay...and how do I do that?
Bela also got naughty by now. Mahir forwarded his right cheek smilingly. And Bela without any nokjhok put a kiss on his cheek. They both felt the intimacy as Bela's lips touched his skin. Bela put another kiss on his cheek.
-- And what about this cheek!
Mahir, like a child, forwarded his left cheek. Bela smilingly kissed his left cheek also, then his forehead, his nose tip, his chin. And for the last kiss Bela stopped. Mahir opened his eyes which he had closed during the first kiss. He cupped Bela's face with his hands and soon engaged in the most intimate ever kiss with her lips. Bela also reciprocated passionately. They were lost in their world of passion. Kissing and loving each other, they moved towards the bed and fell on the bed. Mahir on top of her, broke the smooch and looked at the beautiful face of Bela. Bela welcomed him as he kissed her forehead and closed her eyes to enter the world of love.
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Posted: 6 years ago
Once again a cute update
But what happens next
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Update soonish
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Posted: 6 years ago
Awesome
Very well written
Hope Vikrant doesn't trouble Bela

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Awesome
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Posted: 6 years ago
Nice update dear
Loved it
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Very nice. Update soon.
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Posted: 6 years ago
zara sunao tuo
update kardigiya
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Bela: Why are you being so sad Mahir ji? I'm telling you na, I'll be back within a week. Likh ke le lo...
Bela suddenly remembered this. The promise that she had made to her Mahirji. She promised that she will be back within a week. But it's been 3 months since she is away from Mahir. She still remembers the day she saw Mahir for the last time. The sad face of Mahir, thinking of staying away from his beloved wife. They left each other with a hope of having a better future, but it was the fault of their destiny may be.
Bela came with Vishakha in the city. She met Vikrant, who was unaware of Mahir being alive. So he perceived that as Mahir was killed, though not by Bela but because of her, she doesn't have any other option left except for Vikrant. But Vikrant's plan failed big time as he found out that not only Mahir was alive, but also behir had consummated their marriage. Vikrant was outraged, yet he chose not to respond at that moment. Bela thought it was kind of him for sacrificing his love. But she didn't know that he had another plan under his sleeves. Bela went to Sehgal mansion to inform Kuhu that Mahir is alive and will be back soon. Besides Bela had another task to do given by Mahir himself, to inform Imran about how Mahir has a plan to shift the villagers in the city. But Bela was surprised as hell as she saw Sumitra and Andy not only alive but also living like before. With all the curiosity, she chose to contact Sumitra at first. But it was her grave mistake.
Bela closes her eyes thinking of all these things that has happened in the past several months. She remembers talking with Sumitra.
S: Areh Bela, welcome. What a coincidence! The last time also we met at this haveli right?
B: Ma, what is all this? You're alive? Even dad is alive? But how?
S: Aren't you happy Bela? See, everything is perfect ! Actually, I was never dead you see. And for Andy...well..I used some sanjivani herbs to cure him that's all. That guy couldn't even shoot properly you know, he didn't shoot his head. But got injured as the bullet escaped touching his scalp only. I had to take care of him and make him healthy again, you know, because Mahir is not here anymore, so someone had to look after such a mighty business, right?
Sumitra finished all these background stories in a breath, but Bela was stuck in only one line. Did she mention sanjivani herbs?
B: How do you know about sanjivani herbs? They are only known to...
S: To the icchadharees, I know
B: What? But how do you know that?
Vikrant: because she is my mother and the queen of nidhok vangsh.
Bela turned around to see Vikrant hearing his voice. His lines astonished her, but the real surprise was when she turned around and saw the purple naagin in stead of Sumitra.
Soon she knew everything about them. How Vikrant plotted everything against her on that night of catastrophe, why sumitra did all the drama of being dead just so that Mahir leaves Bela, how her plan flopped as Andy tried to kill his son and lastly why Sumitra saved Andy.
S: According to the will, if something happens to Mahir Sehgal, the property will pass on to Yuvi. Well Vikrant can play that part. But he needs to be trained, that's why I rescued Andy. But he would panic thinking about Mahir, so I had to erase his memory of some time. But that man posed problem for me, as no one actually knows where is Mahir, and Andy doesn't remember shooting him, he is now searching for Mahir.
V: That's why we are still playing along..
But soon Vikrant informed his mother of Mahir being alive. She sensed danger and ordered him to kill Mahir. And also to capture Bela. Bela tried to use power but couldn't. She remembered making love with Mahir before leaving the village. Which means, she had temporarily lost her powers. It gave Sumitra and Vikrant enough time to capture Bela and place her in a cell surrounded by belpatra. Vishakha was also under the spell of Vikrant for all these days. She loves Vikrant, and wished to get him. So when Vikrant sent her to go back to the village and kill Mahir, she refused. Because she was smart, and she understood that if Mahir is killed, then Vikrant can try to get Bela. Vikrant could not even know about Mahir's location without Vish, so he tried upon her. But after all his efforts, when Vishakha didn't agree to finish Mahir, Vikrant thought he will make Bela his without thinking about whether that human is alive or not. But as soon as Vish knew about his intentions, she joined hands with Bela and promised to help her escape.
Bela wiped her tears. In any moment Vish will arrive with aghori baba, who will remove the belpatra and the spell from the cell. Bela will be free.
--I'm coming Mahir...very soon...dream of us!
Bela was eventually freed. Vishakha helped her escape from the city, without letting Vikrant know anything. Finally in front of the jungle, Vish hugged Bela and told her to stay with Mahir. Then it was Bela crossing the dense jungle by her self. She still remembers how Mahir was holding her hand the whole time while going through the jungle last time.
-- Finally Mahir...I'm coming to you, after all these months...
Bela turned into a snake so that she can cross the jungle faster. She moved so fast that she had no time to observe anything else. But as soon as she reached near the entrance of the village and turned into a human, the sight just took her breath away. Yes there was a village here, once upon a time. But right now, there's nothing left but ashes. Where is everyone? Where is Mahir?

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