Behir Fan Fiction : THE FAULT IN OUR STARS - Page 11

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Posted: 6 years ago
Thnxx for updating... this is awesome !!! I just luv ur story!! 👏 and plzzz update soon.. 😳
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Nice update dear
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Haeyy
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-- Vish! You're here!!!
Bela was happy and utterly surprised seeing her. She ran and hugged Vish. Vish hugged her back. Bela said, while hugging
-- Thank God that you're here Vish! I can't tell you how relieved I am after seeing you here...
-- Really Bela? Well I don't think so..
-- What?
Bela was a little surprised by this. Vish continued
-- I'm here for the last 3-4 days. In our kind, we can sense if our friends or foes are around. But you were so busy in romancing that Mahir...kabhi room mein toh kabhi pool mein, how would you know anything else!
All of Bela's happiness got vanished in a moment. She was shocked seeing the audacity of Vish.
-- Are you out of your mind Vish? Don't forget that I'm your naagraani.
-- I don't forget it Bela. But you should remind this more to yourself. You are responsible for the protection of naaglok and naagmani.You have any idea what happened in all these time? We were so broken thinking about you. That you fell off the cliff. We were searching ways to get back to you, because you fell off on our enimys' territory. Which means by instinct you will not change your avatar. You must have fallen in human for m. It took us long to track you. But we lost the track in the middle.
-- Why did you lose it?
Vish replied with a smirk...
-- Because you had made love to a human Bela..that's why you lost your power for several days.
Bela stood numb. How could she forget? Living among all these human she didn't need to change her avatar for months. This is why she missed to notice this. But again Bela was on rage...why does she have to listen to Vishakha about all these..
-- That's none of your business Vishakha, that's personal. Don't you dare to talk to me like this ever.
Bela turned back her face and took the moment to calm down. Vishakha said from behind
-- If this upsets you, then I'm sorry Bela. But you have left no other option.
-- I might have not sensed your presence, but if there were any danger arrived on my kind, I would have sensed for sure Vish, you know this.
-- Yes its right that no danger had come during these months. But someone has arrived from the past Bela..
Bela astonishingly asked
-- Who?
-- Our naagraj...Vikrant!


-- Leave it Aditya...that's enough for today...you may go now..
-- Its ok hekim ji, I'll just separate the weeds and I'm done..
-- no no...you go and get rest. Rafi can do this..
Mahir stood up and cleaned his hands. When he was leaving the hekim stopped him
-- Take the bowl over there Aditya, you must have this after lunch ok...don't forget..
-- ok hekim ji..
Mahir saw two bowls on the table. He took one of them and left. He was retrospecting the moments when hekim ji told Bela to look after him. He was thinking to himself while crossing the yard, isn't this was his desire for so long! To be with her...to get her attention...to be her life..He was the happiest man right now!

-- Vik...Vikrant!?
Vish nodded her head. As if a huge burden has been removed from Bela's heart today..she quickly got the memories of Vikrant..of him loving her...of the happy moments. And then he being shot by the boys...Bela got a smile in her face while tears were rolling down her cheeks. Vish saw the smile on Bela's face and got happy as well.
-- Yes Bela...he has returned. Your love has brought him back! Now you have nothing to worry about, you soulmate has come!
-- Soulmate!! Mahir!!!
Bela mumbled. She felt weak on her knees and quickly hold the chauki and sat on it. Indeed she is happy hearing that Vikrant is alive. But she is in a fix in the complexity of the situation. According to guruji and every one, Mahir is her soulmate. She has moved on in life with Mahir. And Vikrant has appeared now.
Vishakha came near Bela and asked
-- What happened Bela, aren't you happy that Vikrant is alive?
-- I am Vish. Its just that I don't know what to do now
-- I will tell you what to do. Let's go back to our place
-- I so want to...but what about Mahir?
-- What about him?
-- He will not go back there...he doesn't want to retrospect the heartaching memories.
-- Bela, don't be ridiculous. What is the need of taking him along with us? He better stay in this village.
-- What do you mean??
Bela shouted in astonishmen. But Before Vish could reply, a voice came from behind
-- Who are you?
Both Bela and Vish looked back to face Mahir standing on the door with a bowl in his hand. And Mahir was shocked seeing Vish there.
-- You?...how did you get here?
-- It took me long way Mahir...I got some people in the town who said that you live in this remote village. I thought Bela must be here also that's why I came.
Mahir came inside the hut and stood beside Bela.
-- Why have you come here Vish?
-- To take Bela with me..
-- Excuse me!
Mahir was highly surprised. So was Bela.
-- Listen to me Mahir. Bela's father is at death bed...Since very long he has been taking only Bela's name...He only wants to see her for the last time. Actually everyone in the city knows about how Mr. Andy shot you. And how he committed suicide after that and wha...
-- Dad committed suicide!!!
Mahir was broken...completely...Bela who was trying to cut short Vish suddenly got numb at this revealation.
-- Yes Mahir, don't you know about this?
Mahir...suddenly at a lost of everything got tons of emotions building up in him. He held Bela's elbow from one hand to turn her towards him and asked
-- Why didn't you tell me this?
-- Mahir...I...
But Bela could not complete her words..Vish quickly made up another story..
-- Kuhu...
Mahir looked at Vish now,
-- Yes Mahir, Kuhu. She said she regrets having a brother like you. She was so outraged that she not only drived Bela out of the house, but also sent Adi to kill her. Adi pushed Bela from the cliff.
Mahir was shocked. Is it the truth? He doesn't believe that his dear sister can do anything of this sort. But again Kuhu is so temparamental. But does that mean that she will try to kill Bela! He certainly doesn't believe Vish, but then why is Bela standing quiet? What could Bela do eventually. She is now in such a deep dig!
-- Maybe Bela didn't want to hurt you with all these, that's why she kept it hidden. Nobody wants you back home Mahir. But you see, Bela's father beleived that she is alive. He has been searching her everywhere. His condition is worst, that's why I came to look for her. We tracked the river and got in a small town.But while talking with the town people I got a hint that you are alive and you are living in this village with a new identity, which means Bela could also be alive and probably with you.
-- And what made you think that?
The sound astonished all the three present in the room, because it was hekim ji who asked the question standing on the door while holding another bowl.
-- You mistakenly took the wrong bowl Aditya, or should I refer you as Mahir?
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Posted: 6 years ago
Nice update dear
What he will do now.
Waiting for next update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
The three, Bela-Mahir-Vish, are in a fix right now. The question was certainly for Mahir. So the rest preferred to stay quiet.
-- Don't stand still. I know your name is Mahir. I also know that you knew Bela before. Now you will tell me the truth that you've hidden from us Mahir.
Mahir looked at Bela and then Vish. They were also in distress. He understood he has to take care of the situation. He said to hekim ji,
-- Hekim ji, let's go to the chamber plz.
Hekim ji nodded yes and went to his chamber. Mahir followed him. Bela again sits on the bed, while Vish puts a hand on her shoulder to console her.
When Mahir entered the room of hekim's chamber he saw Rafi still working. Hekim ji was sitting on a chair nearby.
-- Come Aditya...oh sorry...Mahir. Come inside and start. Rafi, go outside.
-- That's not needed Hekim ji, Rafi can know everything as well.
-- Okay then, start. And don't you dare lying to me this time.
-- I won't Hekim ji..I'm telling you everything today...This story started one year ago when my younger brother decided to marry Bela...
Mahir did not skip a single element of the reality. Both the hekim and Rafi were listening to him.

-- Why does things happen like this Vish? Why?
-- Bela, I know what must be going inside you.
-- No you don't Vish. Its like I have fallen in a deep river and the more I try to swim the more I get drowned. I just thought that I can move on in life with Mahir, but whenever I try to fix my present, my past comes and messses them.
-- Are you talking about Vikrant, Bela?
-- I don't know Vish, may be yes...you tell me what did he say? Where was he until now? Why didn't he come to meet me when I was dying for him? Why didn't he come to stop us when you and I were taking revenge for his murder? Did he say anything for this Vish?
-- Well, I didn't ask him Bela...actually we didn't even think of asking him anything. We are happy that our naagraaj has returned so...
-- He is not your naagraaj Vish. Mahir is my husband now..
-- But he is a human!
-- Doesn't matter
-- Yes it does. How can you think of addressing Mahir as naagraaj when he doesn't even know that you are a naagin? He is unaware of so many realities Bela.
-- I will tell him the truths very soon
-- When Bela? You couldn't even tell him the truth regarding his father in all these months, and didn't you notice how shocked he was when he heard that you knew of his father's death and still hid it! Now imagine what will be his reaction after knowing the absolute truth.
Bela thought for a while. Only she knows how hard it was for her to convince Mahir when he believed that Bela killed Sumi ma...When Mahir is angry, he doesn't want to listen. But at this point of their life, Bela can't even imagine of losing Mahir. She loves him more than anything right now.
-- Bela...Bela are you listening?
-- Huh!...Yes Vish...what were you saying?
-- I was saying that Mahir won't understand anything right now...you have to give him time for that.
-- You're right.
-- That's why I'm suggesting.
-- Suggesting what?
-- Didn't you listen anything at all!? I'm asking you to come with me in our place.
-- What? Why? What sort of suggestion is this?
-- Bela, listen carefully. See, Mahir is still not ready to digest everything...I'm sure the incidents that too k place in his life are too harsh to handle. Now he needs your support. So don't tell him about your reality now. Let things go as it is going now. Meanwhile you come with me pretending to meet your father. Just for 2-3 days only. Come and sort everything with Vikrant. I'm sure he'll understand you.
Bela was listening to Vish very carefully. After listening everything she said..
-- Let me think of this for some time Vish. I'll tell you later.
Vish sighed and replied,
-- As you wish.

After listening everything from Mahir, hekim ji couldn't stop his tears from coming out. Well he always knew that this boy is hiding something, an ocean of sorrow. But listening to him and realizing how he lost everything from his life and ended up here, reminds him of losing his loved ones years back. Mahir was still telling his story,
-- I thought, perhaps dad will be living happily with his second wife and children. and my sister must be focusing on her family by now. But Vish, the girl whom you saw with us, just told me that my father is no more. And it is my sister that tried to kill Bela. I have literally no one to think of now hekim ji, except for Bela and this village.
-- I can understand everything Mahir beta. But yet, why do you want to stay here only? You can still go back and can handle your father's business.
-- To be honest hekim ji, once I didn't want to go back because I was afraid to face dad. But now that I realize that my father was regretting, I definitely want to go back to my house. I also have questions to ask to my sister. That why did she do this with Bela.
-- So, you want to go back.
-- Yes hekim ji, but with everyone in this village.
-- What?
-- Yes hekim ji. Before all these drama happened in my life I was working on a project. Our company had got the deal to build a society...And we'll be getting around one third of the apartments. That society will be built just outside the city and can accommodate all these villagers.
-- That's very thoughtful of you Mahir, but you can't plan all these by yourself.
-- I'm not planning this by myself hekim ji. Imran is also involved.
-- Imran?!
-- Yes, as per tradition, he is the next head of the village after his father. So I don't think that the villagers will have any problem with his idea.
-- Well Mahir, that'll take a long talk. As per now, I have to tell everything to Mukhya ji. So should I also say that you want to leave?
Mahir thinks for a while and says,
-- I'll let you know about this by night hekim ji. Till then, don't say anything regarding this plan to mukhya ji. He may not agree after hearing Imran's involvement.


Bela took Vish to Safia hatun's cottage and requested her to let her stay there. The old lady pleasantly agreed. After returning to Bela's cottage she saw Mahir sitting on the bed while his eyes are closed. He must be feeling very tired by now, Bela thought. She went to him and hugged him tightly. Mahir hugged her back. Bela said,
-- Are you angry with me that I hid about things from you?
-- Yes!
Bela broke the hug and sat beside him. She cupped his face with her hands and said,
-- I didn't want to hurt you Mahir.
-- Bela, I only get hurt by lies and deceives. Why do you get so concerned of things that weren't at your control Bela!
-- Because I'm afraid Mahir.
-- Afraid of what?
-- Afraid of losing you.
Mahir took Bela in his arms and said,
-- Bela...you can never lose me..we'll be together like this...forever!
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Posted: 6 years ago
Awesome update dear
Loved it
Mahir idea about shifting everyone to colony was nice.
Update soon please
Thanks
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Posted: 6 years ago
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