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Revu, I will read all the parts & write back. Sorry haven’t been able to come to forum too. Will be a bit free in a few days. Keep writing.

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Part 15

Vidhi: Dev!!! Please Aunty se baat keejiye. Mere liye ...

Dev nodded his head. Dev knocked Satyawati's room.

Satyawati: Kaun ?

Dev; Maa mein hun

Satyawati rushed and opened the door

Dev : I am sorry Maa.... Shayad kuch zyada hi rudely baat kee aapse ...

Satyawati ; Tu ne toh sach hi kaha Dev. Maafi mangni waali koyi baat nahi uss mein....Vidhi kahan hein?

Dev pointed out his finger to the corner.

Satyawati: Yahan awo Vidhi, mere pass

Vidhi went near Satyawati.

Satyawati : Mein jaanti hun kee tumhein tumhari iss umra mein shaadi ke liye manana theek nahin hein...Par mein Dev ki maa hun.... Theen chaar saal aur rukna mere liye toh mushkil hein beta...

Dev : Maa !! Phir se wahin baat !!! Maa please try to understand.

Satyawati: Pata hein mujhe. Par samajhkar bhi naa samajh isliye rehti hun kyunki Tumhari zindagi mein aur bhi deri dekh nahin pawungi beta. Vidhi !! Beta , Zara phir se sochke batana....Ek naa ek din toh Dev se shaadi hi toh karni hein. Toh woh thode din baad kyun nahi?

Vidhi: Mein aapki respect karti hun. Aapki feelings kaa bhi kadar hein mujhe. Par shaadi jaisi badi commitment ke liye....Kaise ??? I am sorry Aunty....Baat sirf age ki nahin baat hein mere dil se, meri mind se jiske liye mein bilkul tayyar nahin hun abb.... Please Aunty aap dabaw mat daaliye.

Satyawati: Tum donon ki zindagi toh decisions bhi tum log khud hi longe naa ?

Dev : Maa !! It's not like that. Hum donon iss waqt shaadi ke liye mentally prepared nahin hein...Hum donon ko waqt chahiye ....

Satyawati: Theen saalon mein Vidhi ki padayi puri hogi, phir naukri milegi . Aur Dev kya tum sach mein theen saal intezar kar pawoge ?.

Dev : Haan. Gyarah saal apne ateet se upar naa aake aadhe se zindagi kho chuka hun mein ....Abb acchi zindagi milne ke liye, apni humsafar ke liye ek meaning full life ke liye theen saal toh kya uss se zyada saal intezar karunga.... Because I love Vidhi very much.

Satyawati: Kya pata theen saalon mein Vidhi hi badal jaaye ? Woh youg hein toh ho sakta hein ....

Vidhi: Aap mujh pe Shaq kar rahe hein.

Satyawati: Apne dar bata raha hun Vidhi.

Vidhi : Aap yeh dar, fikra, insecurities inn sabko hatake sirf Dev ke dil se dekhiye....Aunty aapke bete sab kuch hein mere liye. Mein respect karti hun unhein, pyaar karti hun unhein....Unke juzbaaton ki kadar karti hun. Unke dard ko samajhne ki koshish karti hun....

Dev : Maa Vidhi ne mujhe jeena sikhaya hein, kya mein uske liye kuch saal intezar nahi kar sakta? Maa Paapa jab aapse shaadi kar rahe the tab aapki marzi nahin pooche. Haan aap donon ek dusre ko pasand kiye the. Par kahin naa kahin aapko jaldi iss ghar ki bahu banane kaa faisla sirf Paapa kaa hi thaa....Aapne Haan bhi nahi kaha aur naa bhi nahi kaha. Bas saath khadi rahi ...Yeh baat aapne khud batayi mujhe....Aapke saath joh huwa usse samajhne mein mujhe thode saal Lage . ...Ek tarah se dekha jaaye toh aapke consent ke Bina aapki shaadi hona naa- insaafi hein naa Maa ? Kya aap chahti hein aapki Bahu Vidhi ke saath bhi Aisa hi ho jaaye ? Aap chup kyun hein Maa ? Kahiye naa....

Vidhi: Dev !!

Dev : Please Vidhi. Mujhe roko mat.

Satyawati: Tumhare sawalon kaa jawab nahin hein mere pass. Mujhe mujhe......mandir jaana hein....

Vidhi : Aunty please....

Satyawati: Mein naaraz nahi hun Vidhi....Bas ghabrahat ho rahi hein.... Shayad mandir se waapis aane ke baad mein koyi faisla le pawungi ....Aisa Mera Dil keh raha hein...

Dev: Mein abhi aapko drop karta hun Maa.

Satyawati: Please..mein akele jaana chahti hun....

Dev and Vidhi nodded their heads.

Satyawati goes to Shiva Temple

Priest : Aap badi udaas dikhayi de rahi hein.

Satyawati: Mere bete ki Ghar jaldi basega yahin soch Rahi thi mein Pandit ji. Par uss mein waqt lagega shayad.

Priest : Sahi samay pe sahi karya ho jaaye toh woh shubh hota Hein.....

Satyawati: Lekin shubh karya mein deri daalna bhi toh theek nahi hein.

Priest : Bhagwan Mahadev ko hi dekh leejiye . Mata Sati ke viyog ke baad barson tak Shivji toh ek tapaswi ke tarah thaa. Phir Mata Parvati aayi, par woh bhi utni jaldi toh nahin huyi. ...Uske liye bhi waqt laga ....Lekin Donon kaa Milan toh huwa hi naa ....Aapke bete kaa bhi yahi haal hein.....

Satyawati: Haan panditji....Kahin saal tak mere bete aise zindagi jee rahe the jisse dekhke maine bhi ummeedein rakhna chod chuki thi....Par abb umeed mili hein.....Aur aapne toh mere pareshani hi door kar dee . Dhanyawad.

Priest : Dhanyawad mujhse nahi bhagwan se kahiye , unhone hi rasta dikhayi hein.

Satyawati bowed her head before the idol and placed flowers .

At Baalghar

Vidhi ; Yeh kya Dev ? Baalghar aane ke baad bhi aap aise mood off kyun hein . I already said Aunty zarur samjhegi.

Dev : I hope so Vidhi....

Ruhi : Dev uncle hamare saath hide and seek kheliye naa. Didi aap bhi chaliye .

Vidhi : Haan Ruhi. Hum donon khelenge ...

Vidhi held Dev's hand.

Dev : Mera man nahi hai.

Vidhi ; Kya man nahi hein ? Ek simple see game hein....Aap haarenge bacchon se kahin issi dar kee wajah se toh aap khelne se mana kar rahe hein?

Ruhi laughed.

Dev : Dar !! Dev Raichand hun main. Yuhi jeetunga. Aur tumhein toh mein pakdunga hi .

Vidhi ; Itna confidence hein ?

Dev : Haan

Vidhi : Toh phir Pakadke dikhayiye naa

Vidhi and Ruhi ran away from there. Dev rushed behind them . The game got started. Dev find out all kids one by one. But he wasn't able to find Vidhi . Because she was sitting on the branch of a tree.

Dev ; Yeh Vidhi kahan gayi ?

Meanwhile Rocky came there.

Dev : Rocky my champion !! Tum toh expert ho naa dhoondhne mein. Zara meri Jaan ko dhoond lo.

Rocky went near the tree and started barking.

Vidhi thought: Yeh Rocky bhi naa !!

Dev : Yahan pe !! Kahan !!

Dev's went upwards and he was surprised to see Vidhi sitting in the tree.

Dev : Dekha Maine tumhein dhoondh hi liya.

Vidhi : Ji nahin....Rocky ke Bina aap mujhe dhoondh hi nahi paate .

Dev : Toh kya tum mere dhoondhne tak aise pedh ke upar hi baithi rehti ?

Vidhi : Aapko toh mein!!

Vidhi throw some leaves on Dev .

Dev laughed and said; Okay maanta hun , tum jeeto mein haar gaya. Rocky tum jawo aur wahan ground mein bacchon ke sath khelo.

Rocky went with kids.

Dev : Abb toh neeche awo Vidhi

Vidhi : Woh mein !!

Dev : Kya huwa ?

Vidhi : Josh mein upar toh Chad gayi. Par abb dar lag raha hein.

Dev laughed

Vidhi : Aapko hasi aa rahe hai. Mujhe ghabrahat ho rahi hein.

Dev : Okay. Tum koodh jawo . Mein hun naa.

Vidhi : Nahin kaise ?

Dev : Mein pakdunga naa ....Trust me

Vidhi: Dev !!

Dev : You can do it Vidhi. Tum toh super girl ho na.

Vidhi closed her eyes and jumped with a scream. But the moment she opened her eyes she realised Dev's arms have catched her safely she took a breath of sigh.

Vidhi : Dev !!

Dev : Jab tak mein hun tumhein girne nahin dunga Vidhi.

Vidhi: Mujhe neeche utariye naa

Dev : Abb tum meri baahon mein ho Vidhi . Yahan pe tumhein lock karne waala hun. Itni aasani se neeche nahin utarunga....

Vidhi blushed in smile....Dev walked carrying Vidhi in his arms.

Vidhi : Waise aap bahut tezz daudte hein..,..

Dev : School mein participate karta thaa race mein.... Abb kaafi saal huye .

Vidhi: Ek baat kahun !!

Dev : Kaho Naa.

Vidhi : Kya mein kitni bhi height se kyun naa koodhun aap hamesha aise hi pakdenge mujhe

Dev ; Haan...Par iska yeh matlab nahin kee tum kisi building ke upar chad jawo aur wahan se kudho ...

Dev and Vidhi laughed

Vidhi : Kitne time se aap walk kar rahe hein? Wahan bench mein baiththe hein naa.

Dev : Okay.

Dev and Vidhi sat at the bench. Dev plucked a rose from the garden and extended it to Vidhi.

Vidhi kissed at the rose and received the rose

Dev : Kaash mein woh gulab hota !! Lekin itne acche naseeb kahan.

Vidhi smiled and stretched towards Dev which ended up kissing in his cheek.

Dev : Yeh baby waala kiss 💋 nahin thoda aur...

Vidhi : Bahut badmaash hein aap ....

Dev started pretending hiccups.

Vidhi: Kya huwa ? Itni hichki kyun aa rahe hai?

Vidhi cupped Dev's face..Dev utilised the opportunity and quickly packed a kiss on her lips. Vidhi was very much shockingly surprised with this deed.

Dev : Mein toh badmaash hun naa toh jhel lo mujhe.

Vidhi slightly pat his chest and hugged him shyily. Dev hugged her back.

At Raichand house

Satyawati looked over Shantanu's wall pic and recalled her days which she spent with him . Meanwhile Dev and Vidhi reached there....

Satyawati; Mujhe tum donon se baat karni hein.

Dev : Please maa phir se uss topic pe toh nahin

Satyawati: Dev !! Meri baat toh sun lo beta....Mein sirf ek hi perspective se Sochi isliye tum joh mujhe bataye usse samajhne ki koshish nahin kee..Par abb mein bhi samajh chuki hun....Iss rishtey ko uski har maayne mein dekhna zaruri hein....Mere saath joh huwa woh Vidhi ke saath kabhi nahi hoga.. Yeh mera vaada hein tumse .

Dev : Maa !!

Satyawati: Haan beta. Vidhi iss ghar ki bahu tabhi banegi jab tum donon puri tarah shaadi ke liye tayyar ho jawoge.....

Vidhi : Kya Aunty aap yeh sach keh rahi hein?

Satyawati: Haan Vidhi....Mere bete ko Zindagi mein khushiyon ki rang laane waali meri bahu ke liye kya mein intezaar nahin kar sakti??? Mushkil hein par naa mumkin toh nahin......Tum thodi aur duniyadar ho jawogi , aur bhi samajhdhar ho jawogi aur tumhari ek pehchan hogi ....Yeh sirf tumhare liye aur Dev ke liye hi nahi mere liye bhi garv ki baat hein......Iss ghar mein kisi ke saath koyi Naa insaafi nahin hogi . Yeh Mera vaada hein apne bacchon se.

Vidhi : Aunty, thank you aapne mujhe samjha ....Mujhe dar thaa ki meri wajah se aapke aur Dev ke beech mein koyi problem naa aaye ?

Satyawati: Problems toh life mein zarur aayenge bete. Par har problems se ladna hein. .....Aur abb tumhare saath Dev bhi toh hein....Tum donon hamesha ek dusre ke saath aise hi dete raho.

Dev : Maa !! Aapne yeh kehke mere dil kaa boch halka Kiya .....

Satyawati: Dev !! Bete ko maa nahin samjhegi toh aur kaun samjhega?

Satyawati hugged Vidhi and Dev.

" Yeh kya ho raha hein"

The trio were surprised to see Priya and Abhimanyu.

Satyawati: Abhi, Priya !! Kaisa thaa tum donon kaa holiday trip .

Abhimanyu: Accha thaa Maa..Bahut saari baatein karni hein aapse.

Satyawati: Accha !! Lagta hein bahut enjoy kiye.

Priya : Of course Mummy ji....Par yahan toh aapka kuch aur enjoyment bhi toh chal rahi hein.

Satyawati: Sab batati hun.

Satyawati explained everything.

Abhimanyu: Finally Bhai kee life aage badh rahe hein..Mubaraq ho bhai. Priya tum kya soch Rahi ho ?

Priya : Mein khush hun..But let's be practical..... Bhaisaab aur Vidhi ke beech joh age gap hein uska kya ? Hamare relatives kya kahenge ?

Abhimanyu: Itni door kaa kyun soch Rahi ho Priya ? Shaadi toh Vidhi ki studies puri hone ke baad, job milne ke baad hi honge Naa.

Priya : Lekin tab bhi age gap toh rahega hi naa...Humein shayad aiterazz nahin lekin hum jiss society mein rehte hain uss society ke logon ke mooh toh bandh nahin rakh sakte. Damayanti maasi joh Mummy ji ki badi behan hein woh khud koyi Naa koyi halka zarur macha degi.

Vidhi ; Logon kee dar ki wajah se kya hum saath dena chodun kya ?? Mujhe unki parwah nahi.

Priya: Vidhi itna easy nahin hein....Mein phir bhi accept karti hun lekin aage jaake kayi baar tumhein aur Bhaisaab ko hi suffer karne honge.

Dev : Tum kya kehna chahti ho Priya ?

Priya: Ek baar phir se sochiye bhaisahab. Zindagi sirf aapki nahin Vidhi ke bhi hein....

Satyawati: Priya !! Tum haddh paar kar rahi ho.

Priya : Mein sirf reality keh rahi hun joh kadwi hein....

Satyawati : Abhimanyu tum aur Priya apne room mein jawo.

Priya: Jab meri baatein sunne ke bhi patience nahin hein toh phir mujhse opinion kyun poochte hein aap log ?

Dev : Priya!! Yeh saari insecurities, problems yeh sab mere mind mein hein.....Par unn sabse upar sach yeh hein kee Vidhi aur mein ek dusre se pyaar karte hein.... Isliye joh bhi hoga usse milke face karenge ....Priya mujhe accha laga kee tum koyi jhooti tareef nahin kee. ...Tumne toh hamare future ke baare mein socha aur apna concern express kiya. Hamesha aisi hi raho Priya...

To be continued 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

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Edited by Revutty - 2 years ago
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Please read and drop your views

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Please read and drop your views

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Next will be the last chapter of this FF. I know I am giving an abrupt end to this . But I am not getting enough time for concentrating on this FF. So I am going to wind up this FF without showing the journey of ViDev. It's actually a difficult task and it needs time to develop which I am unable to do now. So unfortunately I need to end this, please forgive me for that. I will be writing One Shots which are my comfort zone always . Thank you to all my friends who supported me throughout with your views, likes and comments. Keep loving ViDev and keep reading, commenting on my writeups as well as others.

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Thank you for reading and supporting my FF. With next chapter it's going to end. As I am not getting enough time unfortunately I need to end this FF. Please forgive me for disappointing you guys. Will try writing One Shots which are short when I finds time...Thanks a lot for reading and commenting.

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Thank you so much for taking time and giving your comments guys. I need to end this FF in next chapter as I am not getting enough time to update. So kindly forgive me.

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Originally posted by: Revutty

Please read and drop your views


Sorry couldn't reply to previous tags read all the parts in one go

Very different story from। current track but really intresting and characterisation is really good

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