OS: Na tum hamen jaano... - Page 2

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Thank you so much.

Frankly ever since I shifted my writing and my books from romance to crime / thriller genre, I have lost touch with this tender loving / romance. Thanks to this forum and ViDev, I'm getting to polish it once again.

Extra glad that you caught the song. I'm a music buff and partial to old Bollywood songs

@ bold than I'm the exact match of you. Old Bollywood songs are even my 😍fav.

In this song Dev anand looks so handsome like my Dev raichand

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Ok.

People, let's not wake Scissor up. She is busy in the lala land 😆

🤗

I really slept for 3 hrs....😕now I have to wash utensils and mop the floor....water is too cold...I hate u😭

This is so beautiful and heartwarming ❤️❤️

You are an amazing writer👏❤️ I was imagining everything you had written😆

Dev floored by seeing Vidhi and forgetting what he had do was so cute😆❤️

And them dancing together ❤️ Awwwww

Satyavati is the best 🤣 ViDev se saath mein aarti kara di, Vidhi ko beti bana liya🤪 and even let them have some lone time❤️ she was a true cupid❤️but I was getting scared the whole time that ViDev truth would be out due to her behaviour 🤣 thank God Hp and Bimla didn't think too much 🤪

Loved the song❤️ and teh last bit of Dev putting the shirt and saree together ❤️ Aisa laga that ViDev hugged❤️

I so so wish we had actually got to see something like this in the show😭❤️ kitna accha hota😭

Thank you so much for writing this amazing piece🤗 and do write more about ViDev❤️

As usual amazing masterpiece❤️❤️

Waah kya bat ha apki.. Videv scenes was on the dope.. ❤️❤️🫶🫶

I just imagined the whole scene as i was reading all this.. 🥹🫶🫶

The song was beautiful.

Moreove Satyawati she is such a darling that always understand Videv's emotions.. ❤️❤️

I just love seeing them together 🫶🫶 & thenn their dance hayee 🥺❤️😭

Dev putting her saree with his shirt

You know what u just nailed it. U deserves a bigg hugg 🤗🤗

Do write more as mera dil kbi ni bhare ga na in dono se na hi is forums k jo writers Videv moments pe OS likhte hain unse .. 😁😁

Whenever i read these OS i am smiling like a mad person...😆😁

Plz do write more ❤️❤️

Their sukoon!! I could feel it🧡

And the ending was pure bliss!🥺🦋

You're writing is amazingly picturesque!🙌

P.s. going search for the song you mentioend and going to read it again.. and again.. jab tak dil nahi bharta☺

One word Amazing yaar!!! Seriously aapki story padhti Hu tho novel padh the jaisa feel aa raha hai yaar aapki words too apt for the story.your words entices the beauty of the story and makes it as a masterpiece!!!👏

Too nice suvika.❤️

Truly delighted to read your all stories.🤗

When I think about the story or scenario nice words will come into mind but when I started to write I tend forget the words and end up writing in common language.🤣

Thank you for writing on ViDev.

Originally posted by: Revutty

Very intense story and you have written it so beautiful dear. Thanks a lot for dedicating this to me. I loved every thing in this . Especially that last sequence of clubbing up saree with those shirt which Vidhi has gifted to Dev. You use so magical words to portray each and every thing as so professional. I am so lucky to read this one. Thanks a lot for dedicating this masterpiece to me, Suvika.

You are most welcome, Revutty. Glad you enjoyed it. 🤗

Originally posted by: Parud7

@ bold than I'm the exact match of you. Old Bollywood songs are even my 😍fav.

In this song Dev anand looks so handsome like my Dev raichand

Even Waheeda looked so beautiful.

@ bold - lo ji, issi baat pe -

Originally posted by: bhshre95

This is so beautiful and heartwarming ❤️❤️

You are an amazing writer👏❤️ I was imagining everything you had written😆

Dev floored by seeing Vidhi and forgetting what he had do was so cute😆❤️

And them dancing together ❤️ Awwwww

Satyavati is the best 🤣 ViDev se saath mein aarti kara di, Vidhi ko beti bana liya🤪 and even let them have some lone time❤️ she was a true cupid❤️but I was getting scared the whole time that ViDev truth would be out due to her behaviour 🤣 thank God Hp and Bimla didn't think too much 🤪

Even I had that thought but then felt - chalo, Satyavati will divert them with some conversation so that they don't get the chance to notice anything odd. It's part and parcel of her role as cupid, after all. 🤣

Loved the song❤️ and teh last bit of Dev putting the shirt and saree together ❤️ Aisa laga that ViDev hugged❤️

That was what I intended to convey. Glad it came across

I so so wish we had actually got to see something like this in the show😭❤️ kitna accha hota😭

Thank you so much for writing this amazing piece🤗 and do write more about ViDev❤️

@blue - topic deejiye madam. Koshish zaroor karungi. I can't pick anything on my own. 😭

Originally posted by: maddy124

As usual amazing masterpiece❤️❤️

Waah kya bat ha apki.. Videv scenes was on the dope.. ❤️❤️🫶🫶

I just imagined the whole scene as i was reading all this.. 🥹🫶🫶

The song was beautiful.

Moreove Satyawati she is such a darling that always understand Videv's emotions.. ❤️❤️

I just love seeing them together 🫶🫶 & thenn their dance hayee 🥺❤️😭

Dev putting her saree with his shirt

You know what u just nailed it. U deserves a bigg hugg 🤗🤗

Do write more as mera dil kbi ni bhare ga na in dono se na hi is forums k jo writers Videv moments pe OS likhte hain unse .. 😁😁

Whenever i read these OS i am smiling like a mad person...😆😁

Plz do write more ❤️❤️

Thank you, Maddy.

As for writing more... let's see. I need ideas / tracks. Can't come up with any on my own. Maybe because I prefer the readers give me those because that way I can write something that you guys enjoy reading. ❤️