Hello Revutty.
This is a beautiful OS. You brought the on-screen ViDev alive in this one. Both true to their characters. I could see this scene being played out exactly like this.
Although the sadist in me wishes Dev hadn't changed his mind so quickly. A little separation is needed I feel. Their priorities would rearrange themselves. It would conclude the current mind vs heart battle for Dev and help Vidhi grow a little w.r.t her confidence and maturity.
Maybe you or Anupreeya can pen something like this?? Please think about it.
Already waiting for your next write-up. Please do tag me.
Oh, I'm Suvika. Residing in India, writer by profession.
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