Hakikat ; ViDev Few shots ,Part 1 - Page 8

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Finally caught up with all the parts including the latest one, Shinika. Thoroughly enjoyed. Love the positivity you brought in every part and the way it blended with what's happening in the show.


Keep going!! You ROCK!!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thank you suvika ❤️ it means a lot to me. First time I tried write something. Glad you liked it.it’s a big complement for me. I didn’t liked the drama in the show in every situation they face. All people will be there to criticise create problems for them . But in my understanding the Main point should be them, their destiny and their relationship. All other things will play a role but miner . The main thing is their destiny . Will it make them closer even though they are contrast in every way or make them apart for their own good?

So trying to justify this. Hope I am in right track.

Thank you❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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HAKIKAT:ViDev;Few Shots;Part 9

Continuation from last part:

Dev’s house:

He hurriedly ran into the home and asked ma kya hua aapne jaldi aane ko kyun kaha. Kaha hai vo dono.

Satya: dev mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai. Abhi our priya ke beech bahut ladayi huyi hai. Aadha ghante se donon room me hai. Open bhi nahi kar rahe hai. Kuch der bahut zor se chillaya donon ne. Ab Jake calm hua.

Dev: kuch pata chala problem kya hai

Satya signed nooo

Dev went and knocked the door slightly

Abhi opened it and said bhai aap yaha kya kar rahe hai..

Dev: abhi pehle yeh bolo kya hua hai kyon tum dono fir se lad rahe ho.

Abhi: bhai yeh tho mujhe aadat si hogayi na. Kuch naya nahi..

Dev: abhi…

Abhi: ha bhai .. batata Hu..

Priya wants divorce..

Dev&satya: what?…

Abhi: ha priya ko ek business firm se job offer aaya hai .agar main usko job karne ki permission nahi dia tho vo mujhe divorce deke iss ghar se bahar Jake job karna chhathi hai…

Satya: yeh priya bhi…

Dev: Abhi tum kya decide Kia…

Abhi: he just laughed faintly and said jis rishte me pyar hi nahi hai usse nibhane ka kya faida hai bhia. Jaane do usse mujhe our iss rishte ko chodke jaane do. Maine bahut koshish ki usse khush rahne ki par vo.. vo mujhse pyar nahi Karthi hai.. tho uss se our kya expect karu. Kam se kam yaha se jakar vo khush rahega apni jindagi me..

Sirf maine usse pyar Kia hai bhia .. vo nahi karthi… yeh mujhe bahut late realise hua bhia. Bina pyar ke rishta nibhana bahut mushkil hai bhia. Isiliye main usse kaha ki main divorce keliye tayyar Hu..

Satya: abhi tum kya bol rahe ho…

Abhi: ma pls Maine decide Kar Lia. And he left from there.

After listening to Abhi dev stood like rock and in deep thoughts.

Bina pyar ke rishta nibhana bahut mushkil hai bhia………

Satya: dev.. dev.. yeh kya ho raha hai mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai. Sab kuch firse bigadi rahe hai

Dev: kya hua ma… aap aise kyon bol rahe ho.

Satya: chitra… chitra ke friend ka phone aaya tha . Chitra Vikram se jagada karke friend ke ghar gayi thi.USs ne yaha aane ke bare me nahi socha. Vo abhi bhi bahut naraz hain..

Mujhe bahut dar laga raha hai dev pehle chitra our ab abhi and priya …yeh kya ho raha hai . Kiski gandhi nazar lagi hai hamari parivar pe.

Dev: ma.. aap tension math lijiye . Main sab theek karne ki koshish karunga..

App Jayiye our aaram kijiye.

Next day:

Dev recieved a call from Kanika

Ha Kanika,

Kanika: dev Abhi Abhi Vidhi ke papa se meri bath huyi , uski halchal puchne keliye maine call Kia . Par unhone mujhe our tumhe ghar pe bulay hai .

Dev: ha Kanika vo kal raat discharge hoke ghar agaye hain vidhi ne bataya mujhe . Main jane hi vala tha unse milne par vo kyon hum donon ko vaha bulaya koi idea hai tumhe..

Kanika: nahi dev anyways usse milna bhi haina , jaate hai vaha ek baar tho sab pata chalega na .. tho tum kab aa rahe ho.

Dev: I will call you Kanika once I reach there.

Dev is in deep thinking ki why hp called them both at same time…

Dev… dev… his inner self shouted yeh sab kuch chodo HP bilkul thik hai

Pehle tum ye socho vidhi ko beach pe bulaya hai tune . Yaad aaya ..kyun bulaya hai tumne. Tho tayyaria shuru kare….

He just gave a wide big smile and went to get ready.

Dev went to the private beach that he booked for them and started decorating A cosy place with rose petals.

He is laughing with full heart and he can’t contain his excitement and one side he can’t believe he is doing like this something for some one special.

Again he thought

Ms Vidhi Sharma Tum kya Ho?

Tum kisi se kuch bhi karva sakte ho…

He felt proud about her and concentrated on arrangements.he took red rose petals and started to shape it like a heart and wrote their name and praises himself for his new found creativity.68E8DF51-54FC-461A-B683-A07C4FA32377.jpeg



He decorated like this with petals and placed the letter and a gift that he bought for her . He arranged a rose bed in the entire walk way. He felt very happy with his work and exited for the beautiful moments that they are going to spend today.. he remembered how he decided to become selfish for just once and want to have a mutual conversation with Vidhi about their future. He prayed to Devi ma that pls allow his destiny to give him one chance to their relationship.

BAs kuch der our Vidhi I promise …you will be the most happiest person in the world today and I am the luckiest .

He checked all arrangements table , food everything he arranged and thought to pick Vidhi once he finished meeting HP and Kanika.

He messaged Vidhi that be ready by 11:00 @ private beach . ***********.

(I don’t know anything about Indore so no specific address)….

Vidhi house:

Vidhi got ready happily remembering about their meeting ,made all house chores fastly and gave medicines to HP. Then hp asked Vidhi to get some medicines and items needed in home to send Vidhi away from home for some time. Vidhi felt happy and thought meanwhile she will finish her personal work also.

Vidhi happily went to shop purchased the items and from there she went to Neeli mousi ki cloths shop and asked her permission to stich something.

Vidhi smiled and started to stich a heart shape and videv in between with red thread on a white hanky.

She remberes how she gave dev sir’s hanky to Amba so decided to gift him the new one.

She finished the stitching felt happy and blushed by touching it gently.

Vidhi house:

When dev reached Vidhi house he saw Kanika is already there and hp and Kanika are discussing seriously.

He went inside and greeted HP

Dev: aap kaise ho ab

Hp: didn’t want to see in to his face and said to Bimla , Bimla dev sab aagaya chai leke aao.

Dev got suspicious about hp behaviour…

Hp: Kanika ji aapka dost bhi yaha hai na usse bhi puchiye our vaise vidhi ki jindagi ko leke dev sab bhi ache hi sochega our Vidhi ke liye kya sahi hai usse jyad ache se kisko patha hai.

Dev: yeh kya bath ho Raha hai HP ji

Kanika: vo dev… ek good news hai ..

Hp ji ne our Maine decide kar Lia ki vidhi our Arjun ki sagayi kal shaam ko karne keliye soch raha hai. Hp ji bhi iske baad thoda nischinth rahega na . Vidhi ko leke hp ji ka pareshani bhi khatam hogi . Bolo tumhara kya rai hai iske baare me.

Dev got shocked by the word sagai and felt that his heart will drop beat at any time. Tears got welled up in his eyes.his whole world revolved around his eyes.

He tried hard to hide his feelings.

Kanika: dev.. dev…

Dev about to say something vo Vidhi…

Hp: Kanika ji dev sab bhi yehi kahega vidhi keliye Arjun perfect hai . Acha ladka hain , padha likha hain , our Vidhi ka ham umra bhi hain…

Haina dev sab vidhi our Arjun ka jodi bhi sath me bahut acha lagega …

Hai na…

Dev: closed his eyes and gulping his pain for a second and said

Ha Hariprasad ji acha lagega donon sath me….

Kanika yeh sab thik hai par vidhi our Arjun …tumne usse pucha uske liye yeh rishta manjur hain..

Kanika: ha dev hame pehle se patha haina Arjun vidhi ko pasand Kartha hain . Our vo kal aa raha hai London se . Toh maine socha ki usse surprise doo.

Dev: Vidhi .. Vidhi kaha pe…

Hp: Vidhi kuch jaroori kaam se bahar gayi hai our Vidhi bhi ha hi kahegi isme mana karne vali bath kya hain.. vo Arjun ko acha dost manti hai na..

Bimla: agar Vidhi mana karegi tho bhi dev sab haina vo usse bath karega tho vo samajh jaayegi .

Hp: voh noubath nahi aayega Bimla jaisa yeh Arjun keliye surprise hai vidhi ke liye bhi surprise hi rahega.. sagai ke baad main usse bath karunga..agar kuch gadbad hogaya tho.

Dev now totally understood that ki hp is suspicious about them that’s why he is not looking at dev like before and that day in hospital what he assumed is right. Isiliye hp ab jaan buch ke yeh sab kuch kar raha hain. Par isse patha chala kaise….? Kaise?

Dev: he felt he couldn’t take a breath , felt like suffocated he stood silently , came out of the house and took deep breaths to feel alive…again..

Kanika and hp are busy with discussing about arrangements..

Dev looked at them and then milapini ma , with welled up eyes , shivering body, tried to drag his jelled up legs to the car. When he about to sit in the car he heard kalumal is scolding some persons regarding the gossip they did leads to hp’s attack. When kalumal threatened them they accepted that they did it by taking money from Vikram and they are guilty that hp got attack because of them.

With a hostile glare , face contorted with rage, and clenching his jaw he drove his car in a jet speed…..


To be continued…


SHINIKA

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Mind blowing shinika........❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Wow such an interesting story.


Would love to read more😊


Thank you for the tag🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thank you bhavi ❤️ 9 parts are updated already.

Read when you have some time and share your views about it.🤗

I will update the next part soon😍

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