Hakikat ; ViDev Few shots ,Part 1

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After the office hours two people are still working in the boss cabin .

P1: hogaya kaam ? Chale office time bhi khatam hua hai our Aaj se tum bhi boss ho iss company ka . Chalo let's celebrate this. Atleast Aaj tho mana math Karo chalo.

P2: iski koi jaroorat nahi hain vaise Maine ithna bada kuch bhi nahi kiya.

P1: kya bol rahi ho tum .mujhe patha hai tum ne kithna mehanath kiya hai yaha tak pahunchne keliye.tum yaha kaam karne ki saath saath apni mba Puri ki our Aaj tum iss compani ki owner bhi bangaya .kaisa din raat ek karke tum  yeh sab haasil Kiya mujhe patha hai.mujhe tum par ithna garv hai ki kaha ek Indore ki gali ki ek ladki Aaj Delhi ki biggest fm radio station ki CEO ban chuki hai vo bhi ithni choti umr me.sach kahu tho tum mere saath nahi tho main yeh kabhi nahi karpatha vidhi.Thankyou so much vidhi mujhe housla Dene keliye,Mera himmat badhane keliye.

Vidhiii kuch to bolo yaar ,mujhe patha hai yaar agar tum bologi tho shock hona hai vaise harbaar tum apni khamoshi se hi jawab dethi ho.tumhari umr ki our koi ladki tumhari jagah pe ho tho kithna exited hoti ek chidiya ki tarah lamba udaan karegi par tum tho ihna casual kaise rah sakthe ho vidhi. Vidhiii, vidhiii....

P2:ha ,isme meri koi credit nahi hai Aman.tumne khub mehnat ki our iss mukam Tak pahunch gaya ki yeh dekh kar aapka papa bahut khush hoga.maine bas ek dost ka responsibility nibhaya bas isme koi badi baath nahi hain.

P1: tum har baar kuch na kuch kehakar mana kar deti ho par aaj main nahi rukne vala hu .samjho yaar main tumhare liye kuch plan Kiya hai .tum mere saath chal rahi ho bas .pls...........

So the people are Aman and vidhi ,both are the owners of Delhi's top fm radio station.they both are friends from three years.

(Kis kis ne socha yeh dev our vidhi hain....batao🤣)

Aman took vidhi to a beach because whenever she feels low or happy beach is her companion .

Vidhi dekho aaj yeh lahare vo samundar ,and ret sab kuch kithna acha haina.

 Yeh lehre baar baar koshish karenge kinare se milne ki Par yeh sach me kinare ko chuke takrake fir samundar me chala jayega sab kuch apne saath leke  .yeh hi iski niyathi hai . Hum kuch nahi badal sakta vidhii kuch nahiiiiiiii......

BaS kuch lahare aane tak meri kahani chalegi

Main ,samandar kinare,ret par likha ek naam hu.

Yehi words ringing in her mind....

Aman:vidhiii vidhiii kaha khoyi ho dekho 

Yeh samandar our lahare kithna sukun mil raha haina yaha

Iss khubsurath jagah pe main iss khubsurath ladki ko kuch kahana chahtha hu Dil se...

Main tumhara pahala pyar,date ya kiss nahi hosakta lekin

Main tumhara aakhri sab kuch Banna chahtha hu.

Vidhi kuch tho bolo agar isme tumhari HA ho tho

Ret se samandar ki tarah ab yeh ishq hoga bepanah....

Aman is looking at vidhi with hope and love

Vidhi ne ek faint smile kiya our bola

Aman usko yeh jarur kaho ki main kab ka kisi our ka ho chuki hu .yehi mere jindagi ki bahut badi sachai hain .our yeh sachayi na badla hai our na kabhi badlegaa.

Aman: kis ko …..tum kya bol rahi ho...

Vidhi:  us insaan ko jo tumhe yeh sab sikhake bejhana usko....

Aman: tumhe kaisa patha chala tum usko janthi tak nahi...

(He was shocked and don't know what's happening)

Vidhi: Aman I am very sorry to disappoint you but you are my good friend who helped me in my tough time.main iss dosti ko khona nahi chahthi...

Aman: pahle yeh bolo tumhe kaise patha hain tum usko abhitak dekha bi nahi...

Vidhi is leaving the beach suddenly turned back smiles and said usko jaroor bathana ki main intazar kar rahi hu..❤️

Continue soon…..

Precap:

P1:do you want to loose him ? ,you know right how i destroyed your family,your happiness (threatening with some news clip)

P2: with heavy heart...I am ready to do anything for him...

P3: I won't let you walk in to the fire to protect me.

Hi friends .I am shinika 😍 yaha ki sab writers ki inspiration lekar kuch likhne ki koshish ki.patha nahi kya bakwas likha hu.if possible bear me other wise chappal,tamatar,anda sab ka swag ke saath swagath. I will try to finish it in 3 shots.👍🏼

Kuch alag our aage ka socha hai story se .dekhti hu kithna likhpathi hu par koshish tho bahut kiya acha likhne ki.

Our ab ek task .koshish karo our bathao ki precap ke hisab se koun kisko kya bol raha hai.

Chalo ab sab dimag ki ghode chalao....🤣🤣

Pahli baar kuch likhne ki koshish kiya hain tho apna review jaroor dena.next time you will be safe from me.😆

SHINIKA


part 2:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162245442

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Seems interesting ❤️ 

Continue soon 👍🏼

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Wow.. Interesting hai... P2 to vidhi ho sakti hai... Baki pta nhi.. To dev ne aman ko bheja hai vidhi k pass... Gud... Please do continue yaar

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Originally posted by: Shinika

After the office hours two people are still working in the boss cabin .

P1: hogaya kaam ? Chale office time bhi khatam hua hai our Aaj se tum bhi boss ho iss company ka . Chalo let's celebrate this. Atleast Aaj tho mana math Karo chalo.

P2: iski koi jaroorat nahi hain vaise Maine ithna bada kuch bhi nahi kiya.

P1: kya bol rahi ho tum .mujhe patha hai tum ne kithna mehanath kiya hai yaha tak pahunchne keliye.tum yaha kaam karne ki saath saath apni mba Puri ki our Aaj tum iss compani ki owner bhi bangaya .kaisa din raat ek karke tum  yeh sab haasil Kiya mujhe patha hai.mujhe tum par ithna garv hai ki kaha ek Indore ki gali ki ek ladki Aaj Delhi ki biggest fm radio station ki CEO ban chuki hai vo bhi ithni choti umr me.sach kahu tho tum mere saath nahi tho main yeh kabhi nahi karpatha vidhi.Thankyou so much vidhi mujhe housla Dene keliye,Mera himmat badhane keliye.

Vidhiii kuch to bolo yaar ,mujhe patha hai yaar agar tum bologi tho shock hona hai vaise harbaar tum apni khamoshi se hi jawab dethi ho.tumhari umr ki our koi ladki tumhari jagah pe ho tho kithna exited hoti ek chidiya ki tarah lamba udaan karegi par tum tho ihna casual kaise rah sakthe ho vidhi. Vidhiii, vidhiii....

P2:ha ,isme meri koi credit nahi hai Aman.tumne khub mehnat ki our iss mukam Tak pahunch gaya ki yeh dekh kar aapka papa bahut khush hoga.maine bas ek dost ka responsibility nibhaya bas isme koi badi baath nahi hain.

P1: tum har baar kuch na kuch kehakar mana kar deti ho par aaj main nahi rukne vala hu .samjho yaar main tumhare liye kuch plan Kiya hai .tum mere saath chal rahi ho bas .pls...........

So the people are Aman and vidhi ,both are the owners of Delhi's top fm radio station.they both are friends from three years.

(Kis kis ne socha yeh dev our vidhi hain....batao🤣)

Aman took vidhi to a beach because whenever she feels low or happy beach is her companion .

Vidhi dekho aaj yeh lahare vo samundar ,and ret sab kuch kithna acha haina.

 Yeh lehre baar baar koshish karenge kinare se milne ki Par yeh sach me kinare ko chuke takrake fir samundar me chala jayega sab kuch apne saath leke  .yeh hi iski niyathi hai . Hum kuch nahi badal sakta vidhii kuch nahiiiiiiii......

BaS kuch lahare aane tak meri kahani chalegi

Main ,samandar kinare,ret par likha ek naam hu.

Yehi words ringing in her mind....

Aman:vidhiii vidhiii kaha khoyi ho dekho 

Yeh samandar our lahare kithna sukun mil raha haina yaha

Iss khubsurath jagah pe main iss khubsurath ladki ko kuch kahana chahtha hu Dil se...

Main tumhara pahala pyar,date ya kiss nahi hosakta lekin

Main tumhara aakhri sab kuch Banna chahtha hu.

Vidhi kuch tho bolo agar isme tumhari HA ho tho

Ret se samandar ki tarah ab yeh ishq hoga bepanah....

Aman is looking at vidhi with hope and love

Vidhi ne ek faint smile kiya our bola

Aman usko yeh jarur kaho ki main kab ka kisi our ka ho chuki hu .yehi mere jindagi ki bahut badi sachai hain .our yeh sachayi na badla hai our na kabhi badlegaa.

Aman: kis ko …..tum kya bol rahi ho...

Vidhi:  us insaan ko jo tumhe yeh sab sikhake bejhana usko....

Aman: tumhe kaisa patha chala tum usko janthi tak nahi...

(He was shocked and don't know what's happening)

Vidhi: Aman I am very sorry to disappoint you but you are my good friend who helped me in my tough time.main iss dosti ko khona nahi chahthi...

Aman: pahle yeh bolo tumhe kaise patha hain tum usko abhitak dekha bi nahi...

Vidhi is leaving the beach suddenly turned back smiles and said usko jaroor bathana ki main intazar kar rahi hu..❤️

Continue soon…..

Precap:

P1:do you want to loose him ? ,you know right how i destroyed your family,your happiness (threatening with some news clip)

P2: with heavy heart...I am ready to do anything for him...

P3: I won't let you walk in to the fire to protect me.

Hi friends .I am shinika 😍 yaha ki sab writers ki inspiration lekar kuch likhne ki koshish ki.patha nahi kya bakwas likha hu.if possible bear me other wise chappal,tamatar,anda sab ka swag ke saath swagath. I will try to finish it in 3 shots.👍🏼

Kuch alag our aage ka socha hai story se .dekhti hu kithna likhpathi hu par koshish tho bahut kiya acha likhne ki.

Our ab ek task .koshish karo our bathao ki precap ke hisab se koun kisko kya bol raha hai.

Chalo ab sab dimag ki ghode chalao....🤣🤣

Pahli baar kuch likhne ki koshish kiya hain tho apna review jaroor dena.next time you will be safe from me.😆

SHINIKA

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Kya likha hai! Poetic and deep! Uff Dev yeh bolta show me kaash! If you don't mind I am rewriting the lines here, little modified........


Yeh lehrein baar baar koshish karengi kinare se milne ki.......... Par har baar kinare ko chukar takrakar fir se samundar me chali jayengi......... Sab kuch apne saath leke....... Yehi inki niyati hai........ Hum kuch nahi badal sakte Vidhi, kuch nahi..........


Bas kuch laharon ke aane tak meri kahani chalegi......... Main iss samandar kinare iss ret par likha ek naam hu......... Mit jaunga.........


And overall story, I loved the start!

Very good start Shinika! I liked how you tried to bring in suspense by not disclosing the names right away!


Aur haan maine socha thha ki Dev hai  start mein Vidhi ke saath. Inke after office hours scenes dekh dekh ke aur kya expect karoge humse!


As for guessing the precap -

P1 - Amba

P2 - Vidhi

P3 -Dev

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Bas kuch laharon ke aane tak meri kahani chalegi......... Main iss samandar kinare iss ret par likha ek naam hu......... Mit jaunga.........

 Meri mind me  hain yeh shabd par likhne ki himmat nahi kar payi….


thankyou so much dear for your words . Pahli baar kuch likhne ki koshish kiya . Glad you liked it. About starting I just wanted write some thing different so try Kia and ab lagtha hai pass bhi hogaya hun . 
guessing the precap part you will get to know in next part . Dekhte hain aap pass hogaya ya nahi🤣

Par bahut relief mila hain yaar aapki msg dekh kar . 
thankyou so much for your encouragement.❤️


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Mein padti hun afternoon..abhi kaam hein....Aap writer bhi ho ? Dekhke khush huyi. Aapki request pe ViDev SS complete ho chuki hein. Pad leejiye time milne pe. 

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Interesting hai ....pls continue karo

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Awesome 👍👍👍👍 Wow unique way of presentation yaar. Beach ⛱️,yaar meri ViDev story mein bhi Beach dikhayi aur yahan pe bhi Beach. Kya connection hein, telepathy jaise ? Tum toh shayari bhi likhti ho , kahan chupake rakhi thi apni yeh andaaz ? Aur likho ? Mujhe laga kee Arjun and Vidhi ke beech ho rahe hein conversation padte Time. Kyunki Dev kaa Style toh thaa nahi uss mein. Par yeh koyi Aman nikla. Precap se guess karun...I am too weak in that.....Bas jaldi updated karo....Aur intezaar nahi hota ....Good work dear. 

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Interesting

Cont soon 

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Such an interesting concept!! Love seeing that Vidhi is so successful!! Hopefully we can see the same Dev in the coming chapters! Just love their pair! ❤️