ViDev OS: pt2 Deepest Desires of Dev vr2, pg10 - Page 8

Originally posted by: Agastia

Hayeeeeee main marjawan dil baag baag hogaya koi iss aag ko bhujao this forum is on fire🔥🔥🔥 I have a very active imagination toh ab neend mai bhi yehi khuwab ayenge🙈

will this rain work to pacify that aag 🔥🔥🔥

hyperactive imagination wale ne likha hai to kuch to asar hona chahiye na padhne walo pe and so so happy ke aaj ka tumhara khwab itna bhannat hone wala hai...

have Fiery dreams.. 😉

Hey Telly Masterji aaj bacchi ko jhappi nahi de paayi. Tere vaaste likhi hein masterji jokes tag kee hein third page pe. Pad Lena time milne par

Wow wow beautiful and very intense!!!🥰

Par mera our Vidhi ke sath dhoka hogaya hai🤧

Kaha main fumbling dev ko corner karne ki bare ke socha . Our app Vidhi ko corner karke chantomay dev ko dikhaya . Fumbling dev is fabulous treat to watch but chantomay dev ki every action is a fabulous treat.

That sorry line literally gave tears in eyes depicted his inner feeling well.

But I like this dev

who wants erase her pain with new moments.

And how he didn’t hesitated/ fumbled not even once to show/say his feelings.

That ziddi harkat how he don’t want her to leave without clearing the matter .

That kiss 😘 beautiful. How desperately he wants to make her his and claim her love and make her feel his inner desires.

It’s too beautiful yaar padhte hi kuch kuch ho raha hai.☺️

Agar main yeh lalach me subah meeting ke beach me padhi huyi tho patha nahi kya haal hota mera.. sab mujhe pagal declare kar chuke hote..🤣🤣

Mujhe laga ki meri sherni dev ko corner karke usse vo confess karvayega jo raat me kya huva tho mujhe fumbling our embarrassed dev milega.😆

Par aapne vidhi ko corner karke dev ko pura lover boy vo bhi majnu bana diya. Pura scene ko hi kuch our andaz me present Kia . bahut acha hai!!!!👏

Thank you telly for this beautiful piece 🤗.

Telly I read this in one go ...n trust mee yaar it was far better thn previous one.....

N well I will share one secret of mine.... yes I write naughty stories n it's quite fun for others to read but when it comes to Me...wht I love to read I m gonna read this stuff then my own....I always laugh at my work...its sometimes sound so so stupid to me...I m never get satisfied with my work...I mean I m saying not as a writer but Reader...my work never make me tht much happy....thts not my type...my type is this......I m in love with your work bcs of this simplicity Babe...its so so sooo good...n this one reach directly to my heart...I love this original work of urs thn tht previous one......its just amazing n pls write this kind of stuff only...for me😆....vo dusra sab me handle Kar lugi🤣

N yes I said this one is good doesn't mean previous one is bad...vo b achha tha...par jo dil se nikla ho n uska baat alag hota He..🤗🤗muje sach Me aaj esa kuch padhke bht bht bht achha lGa.😳❤️

Originally posted by: Nany

Telly I read this in one go ...n trust mee yaar it was far better thn previous one.....

N well I will share one secret of mine.... yes I write naughty stories n it's quite fun for others to read but when it comes to Me...wht I love to read I m gonna read this stuff then my own....I always laugh at my work...its sometimes sound so so stupid to me...I m never get satisfied with my work...I mean I m saying not as a writer but Reader...my work never make me tht much happy....thts not my type...my type is this......I m in love with your work bcs of this simplicity Babe...its so so sooo good...n this one reach directly to my heart...I love this original work of urs thn tht previous one......its just amazing n pls write this kind of stuff only...for me😆....vo dusra sab me handle Kar lugi🤣

thank you so much yaar... this i what my heart feels and wants to write its just like How Dev is... sach me kal wala likhne ke baad i was so sad ke kya kiya maine mere Dev ke saath...how come i turned this way... he isnt... he cant be even in agle 7 janam... his love is like this one... just heartfelt and too pure for words...

and glad you felt the same... aaj jake dil ke upar rakha bojh utra mera... kaam larte karte bhi yabi tha dimag me ke ye au ke nahi... but chalo acha kiya post kiya...

thanks for liking it.❤️❤️❤️

Originally posted by: Nany

N yes I said this one is good doesn't mean previous one is bad...vo b achha tha...par jo dil se nikla ho n uska baat alag hota He..🤗🤗muje sach Me aaj esa kuch padhke bht bht bht achha lGa.😳❤️

are na re thats okay.. i dint like that one at all... not even a little... i just wanted to try if i can write or not... bas ek experiment tha... ho gaya...

this one has my heart n soul for sure... i won't experiment in future again.. ill write from my heart ❤️

thank you

Originally posted by: Telly_Addict

thank you so much yaar... this i what my heart feels and wants to write its just like How Dev is... sach me kal wala likhne ke baad i was so sad ke kya kiya maine mere Dev ke saath...how come i turned this way... he isnt... he cant be even in agle 7 janam... his love is like this one... just heartfelt and too pure for words...

and glad you felt the same... aaj jake dil ke upar rakha bojh utra mera... kaam larte karte bhi yabi tha dimag me ke ye au ke nahi... but chalo acha kiya post kiya...

thanks for liking it.❤️❤️❤️

Are pagal ladki to ye pahle yahi kar deti post...par koi na...next time do wht ur heart say ...each n everyone have different type of talent...me esa jindgi Me na likh pau🤣..mujse vahi sab likha jayega......chill kar abb...bht mast kiya kaam tune....🤗

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