ViDeV Five shots : Breaking the boundaries - Page 3

awww such a cute cute story... lovely... so nice..

you write so nicely.. clear character depiction and their emotions too.

beautifull... looking forward to last part very eagerly...

thank you for this one

That was so beautifully described....❤️❤️

Can't wait for the next part.. ❤️❤️

Continue soon 😍😍

Thanks a lot 😄 . Will be updating soon yaar

Thanks a lot Maddy. Will be posting it today itself

Aap to jaan hi le lo yaar.....esse jyada kya kahun...☺️

Waise agar vidhi ko arjun ke piche dekh ker bike per jalan ke maare vidhi ko scooter gift kare or kahe ki chalo mein sikhata hun...kitna maja aayega na🤣

Makers es baat per dhyaan diya jaye

Haha ha 😂. Thanks a lot for the lovely words .

Hi Revutty I have read all the parts.

It's a beautiful story you wrote.Aap is serial ki script writer hoti, too ye aur hit hota...

In your writing I cud feel the emotions you put in the story, it's beautifully expressed.Atleadt creatives of the serial should take some idea from your story..

Keep writing.

Beautiful

All the best

Regds

Neeti

Atti Uttam... dil khush kiya aapne to ekdum se.. i hv sweet sweet dreams ye padh ke soungi to...

thank you

Originally posted by: Scissor

Aap to jaan hi le lo yaar.....esse jyada kya kahun...☺️

Waise agar vidhi ko arjun ke piche dekh ker bike per jalan ke maare vidhi ko scooter gift kare or kahe ki chalo mein sikhata hun...kitna maja aayega na🤣

Makers es baat per dhyaan diya jaye

Now you are giving ideas to makers🤣