Jhanvi and Surya FF ~ Do dil; ek dharkan ~

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Hi all. This is a short story on our lovely JaYa. I had suggested about the re-marriage on this post:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/na-aana-is-desh-laado/2823799/jhanvi-surya-re-marriage

JuhiRockz commented and suggested an idea of writing an FF on their marriage, so I thought I would do that :)

Here it is! :

Rana: Surya, meney tujhse kaha tha na, hummarey khaas meheman hai Rai sahab. Unko jail bhejney ke peheley ek baar soch tho lethey. Ye apavitr chori kilye ye sab-

Surya: BAS BOUJEE, Jhanvi apavitr nahi hai! Meri patni ke khilaaf kuch bolney ke pehely soch lijye ga ki me ussey pyaar kartha hoon!

Everyone is shocked. This is the first time Surya has ever confessed that he loves Jhanvi. Surya holds Jhanvi's hand and takes her inside the room. Jhanvi is crying, tears streaming down her cheeks. Suya pulls her into his arms.

Surya: Jhanvi, shaant hojao, chinta mat karo, mai hoon na, sab theek ho jayega, mat ro Jhanvi. Apne Surya keyliye, mat ro.

Jhanvi: Surya, ayse merey saath hamesha kyu hotha hai? Maine kya bigara hai kissi ka? Kya kiya hai maine?

Surya: Uss Rai ko tho mai? Meri Jhanvi ke izzath pe haath uthaya hai ussne...choronga nahi mai ussey-

Jhanvi: Nahi Surya, shayad ussey apni galthi ki sazza mil chooki hai, kuch math karna ussey, vo bura hai aur hum bhi usske jayse burey hojayengey tho duniya agey kayse bharigi?

Surya: Stroking Jhanvi's hair Surya says, Jhanvi, tum itni samajdar kayse ho? Tumharey zindagi me itni dukh ay hai...tumhari shaadi, ek ladki ki zindagi ki sabse khoobsurath din, merey vajey se barbaad hogayi aur tumne kuch nahi kaha. Kaisa pathi hoon mai? Apne Jhanvi kilye kuch nahi karpaya-

Puts her hand on Surya's lips, Surya.

Jhanvi: Ye aap kya keherey ho? Aapne meri zindagi ki har mor pe mera saath diya hai...meri izzath ko itni baar bachayi hai aapne...aur aap poochrey ho ki aap kayse pathi ho? Aap tho-

Surya: Jhanvi, bohoth hooa ye aap aap kehena. Mai tumhara hoon na tho tum mujhe tumkehekey boolaogi, samjhi?

Jhanvi separates herself from Surya's arms.

Jhanvi: Surya, ye bikul bhi lovely shovely vali baath nahi hai-

Surya: Tum ho na, bilkul budhu ho.

Jhanvi laughs. Surya pulls her back into his arms and strokes her hair. Surya lays Jhanvi on the bed and kisses her forehead. He is about to leave to another room to sleep.

Jhanvi: Surya? Tum kaha jaa rehey ho?

Surya: Jhanvi, tum araam sey so, me kahi aur jakey sojatha hoon.

Surya takes a step forward to leave.

Jhanvi: Surya?

Surya: Kya hooa Jhanvi?

Jhanvi: Vo...mein...mera mathlab...mein...vo...

Surya sits down on the bed next to her and holds her hand.

Surya: Kahona Jhanvi, kya hooa?

Jhanvi sits up.

Jhanvi: Surya...vo...Surya, mujhey tumharey bina neend nahi aygi.

Jhanvi cuddles herself in Surya's arms. Surya hugs her back kissing her forehead. He lies them both down. Then he pulls the quilt over the top of them and turns off the lamp.

IN THE MORNING

Jhanvi opens her eyes with the sun reflecting through the glass of the window. It seems like a new day, a new start, a new life. She feels someone next to her. Jhanvi gets very scared thinking who it is. She is almost in tears when she turns around and realises that she is in Surya's arms. Jhanvi blushes. She sees that her bracelet is caught on Surya's shirt. She brings her hand forth to take it off. As soon as she touches him, Surya grabs hold of her hand and cuddles her more deeply into his arms...

Surya: (Tiredly, lazily) uff ho...Jhanvi thora dere aur soney do na. Ithni subha subha koy jagatha hai kya?

Jhanvi: Surya, utho na! Please!

Jhanvi's phone starts ringing, Diya is calling. It is on Surya's bedside table. He picks it up.

Surya: (Lazily) Kaun?

Diya: Mein Diya bolrahi hoon? Kya mein Jhanvi se baath karsakthi hoon? Kaha hai vo, theek hai na?

Surya: Ha...Jhanvi merrey baho mein hai? Kya chaye ussey?

Jhanvi tries to snatch the phone out of Surya's hand but fails to do so. Surya holds her hand and secures it against his chest. Diya on the other side of the phone is laughing to herself.

Jhanvi: (speaks loud so Diya can hear her on the phone) Diya...mein tumhey thorey der baath phone karthi hoon...theek hai?

Jhanvi finally snatches the phone out of Surya's hand and puts it back on the bedside table. Diya is laughing to herself at the mandir and remembers Shaurya. She wipes her tears and goes downstairs to where Ammaji is calling her. Jhanvi is still trying to wake Surya up after this embarrassing phase.

Jhanvi: Surya, chalo, bohoth hogaya, ab tum utho!

Surya: Jhanvi, so ne do na...

Surya lazily turns around on the bed so Jhanvi is on top of him. Jhanvi blushes.

Jhanvi: Surya, choro na...please...bohoth subha hogayi hai...uth jao na

Surya: Jhanvi, sojao na...

Jhanvi: So tum, me jaari hoon.

Jhanvi struggles to push herself out of Surya's arms. When she finally achieves this and gets out of bed Surya grabs her dupata.

Jhanvi: (blushing) Surya...chordona...please...

Surya pulls the dupata so Jhanvi is with him again.

Surya: nahi choronga.

Jhanvi pulls the dupata out of Surya's hand, when she gets up her necklace is caught on Surya's button. She tries to separate it but can't do it. Surya opens his eyes and does it. Jhanvi is blushing and she escapes from Surya's arms and gets off the bed. Surya smiles to himself. Suddenly, the thought of all the previous devastating incidents of Jhanvi's life come to him. He remembers her forceful marriage to his three brothers and how rude Surya was previously to Jhanvi. He thinks through this and then comes up with an idea. Of course, he is not sure what Jhanvi would think of it...but what if...what if Jhanvi and Surya could marry each other once again...what if they could marry each other happily, not forcefully? Surya decides that once Jhanvi comes out of the shower he will ask her...but what will she think of this? Does she trust Surya enough to agree with his decision?

I hope you all like it. Please leave your thoughts behind and feel free to give any suggestions. This was just the first part...the rest will come soon (maybe later today or tomorrow). Thanks all! :)

*UPDATED! Page 3!* :)

Edited by Preeti_Shadia - 13 years ago

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This is the second part of the FF:

Jhanvi has just come out the shower. Her hair is dripping wet. She sits in front of the mirror to comb it out. Surya has got outside the room for the moment being to talk to Shivlali. Jhanvi looks at herself in the mirror seeing her unfilled maang. She smiles to herself. She takes the sindoor daan and places her ring finger in it to fill her maang. Just she is about to do so she stops mid way. She stares at herself and tears fill up in her eyes. She thinks whether her and Surya being together is the right thing. She remembers the promises she made to herself about destroying the family when she came to the house, she remembers her forceful marriage, she remembers all the things Surya said to her. Her fingers have stopped right above her maang and she is not able to fill it up with sindoor. Just then Surya enters the room. He sees that Jhanvi is not filling her maang. He smiles to himself and steps forward.

Surya: Jhanvi?

Jhanvi does not react.

Surya: Jhanvi? JHANVI?

Jhanvi realises surya is there. She wipes away her tears and stands up. Surya bring her into his arms. Tears start swelling up in Jhanvi's eyes again. She once again thinks that whether her being this close to Surya is good or not. After all, one day Jhanvi will return to Delhi and Surya will chose his father over her...wouldn't he?

Meanwhile Surya notices Jhanvi's silence. He notices her tears through her reflection in the mirror. Surya separates Jhanvi from his arms. Jhanvi quickly wipes away her tears and throws him a forceful smile. Surya realises that Jhanvi is not happy. To make her a bit more cheerful, Surya takes the sindoor daan which is still in her hands. He takes some sindoor out of it and moves his hand up to fill Jhanvi's maang. Jhanvi is unsure about this.

Jhanvi: Surya-ruko.

Surya: Jhanvi, kya hua, itni sehemi sehemi si kyu ho tum?

Jhanvi: Surya...kya ye sab...mera matlab...kya hum dono...kal raath...Surya, kya ye sahi hai?

Surya: Jhanvi, tum kehena kya chaathi ho?

Jhanvi: Surya, kya hum dono ka saath hona sahi hai? Mera matlab...iss tharha? Ek din tho tum mujey chor dogey na, Rana kilye. Jab me Delhi lotjaongi tho-

Surya: Jhanvi, mein tumhara saath kabhi nahi choroonga.

Within the blink of an eye Surya fills Jhanvi's maang. Jhanvi is shocked. Surya pulls her into his arms. Jhanvi pushes herself away from him.

Surya: Jhanvi?

Jhanvi: Surya, ye sab mereliye bohoth jaldi horaha hai...mujey thora sochney ka waqt do...

Jhanvi leaves the room. Surya is confused. He just thinks that she is still a little frightened because of her experience with Rai but she will lighten up soon. He thinks to herself that she loves him and that is the most important thing.

Surya: (Says to himself), I love you Jhanvi.

Surya and Jhanvi have decided to go to the mandir. Jhanvi is not talking to Surya. They enter the mandir. Diya sees them and laughs. Surya realises why she is laughing. Jhanvi blushes but is not happy. Jhanvi and Surya greet everyone. Jhanvi asks Diya to talk in private. They go upstairs in the room. Jhanvi can't say much to her. They just talk about general things. When they come back down they find Chanda handing out sweets to everyone.

Diya: Thai ji? Mithayi! Mujhey bhi dijye na! Likin kis khushi mein?

Chanda: Arrey Diya, Jhanvi ne tujhey nahi bathaya? Surya chaatha hai ki Jhanvi aur Surya ki ek bar phir se shaadi ho, saarey rasm rivaaz ke saath?

Diya nudges Jhanvi mischievously. Jhanvi doesn't say anything. She is just looking at Surya. Surya looks at her and realises something is wrong. He doesn't say anything though. Poojari ji finds a good day for the marriage, engagement and all the rituals. They decide that the engagement will be held in two days time. Jhanvi doesn't seem happy. Diya realises this. After some time Jhanvi and Surya return home.

Surya: Jhanvi, jaan tum khush ho na?

Jhanvi? KAYSE KHUSH HOON SURYA? HUMMAREY PARIVAAR KI DUSHMAN KE BETEY KE SAATH MERI SHAADI HONEY JAARI HAI? KAYSE KHUSH HOON?

Surya: Jhanvi, kya hooa? Kal raath tho tum...

Jhanvi: Kal raath ek galthi thhi Surya...suna tumney, ek bohoth badi bhool jo phir kabhi nahi manongi. Maaf kardo mujhey is bhool kilye. Main tumharey haath jorthi hoon.

Surya: Jhanvi...tumhey ye kya hogaya hai?

Surya cups Jhanvi's face in his hands.

Surya: Jhanvi-

Jhanvi removes his hands from there.

Jhanvi: Surya, mujhey kuch nahi soona hai. Kucb bhi nahi.

Surya: Jhanvi...Jhanvi ye tumhey kya hogaya hai? Jhanvi, I love you Jhanvi...Jhanvi please...

Jhanvi: PAR MAIN TUMSE PYAAR NAHI KARTHI? MAJBOORI ME KI THHI MAINNE TUMSE SHAADI. AB MAIN TUMHARA SAATH NAHI RAHOONGI...

Jhanvi leaves the room. Surya is shocked. He thinks to tell Ammaji however he doesn't want to thinking what she will have to say.

Two days pass and today is Jhanvi and Surya's engagement. During these two days Jhanvi and Surya sleep in different rooms. It comes to the engagement and Jhanvi is dressed in this beautiful light colored saree:

Her hair is styles beautifully like this:

Surya thinks Jhanvi looks extremely beautiful but he doesn't tell her this as he knows Jhanvi won't want to talk to him right now. All of Rana's family comes to the engagment. Rana does rather unwillingly but he has nothing to say against Surya's decision. At the last moment Surya thinks that may be Jhanvi has changed...may be she has realised that she love him once again. He pulls Jhanvi back just before leaving. Jhanvi doesn't say anything. He thinks that everything is alright now. He thinks that he has his Jhanvi back now. Surya smiles. He leans forward to kiss Jhanvi. His forehead joined to hers, his nose joined to hers, his lips are only a centimeter away from hers. Just then, Jhanvi pushes him away. She doesn't look at him, she turns to leave the room but Surya grabs her hand. He takes her in front of the mirror. Jhanvi is looking down. The look of sadness in her eyes. She is not happy but is not saying anything. Surya closes Jhanvi's eyes. He places his hands around her and put on her a beautiful diamond necklace:

He takes her current earrings off and puts on her the earring matching with the necklace. He thinks this might make her a little more happy. He turns her around and tries to pull her into his arms but Jhanvi just leaves the room. Surya stares into space for sometime thinking Jhanvi will never forgive him. Then he leaves in the car to the mandir.

The mandir is all decorated with beautiful flowers etc. Diya is very happy to see Jhanvi look so beautiful. Because of the lack of money in the mandir Diya is still dressed in a simple villagers saree. Ammaji feels sorry for Diya as she feels upset that Diya can't even live her life properly. Ammaji wonders how Diya is living without Shaurya. Diya still sees that Jhanvi is upset. She sees how far away Jhanvi and Surya seem from each other. She takes Surya aside and asks him what's wrong. Surya hesitates to tell her at first but then eventually it all comes out. Diya encourages him and says that she will all make it better.

At the engagement Diya dances and sings to two songs.

Aadha Ishq~she dedicates this to Jhanvi and intends to send the message to her that Surya loves her a lot. Jhanvi lets our forceful smiles. When this does not work Diya sings and dances again to:

Mera man jabse racha hai sawariya tere sang:

(Lyrics)

She sings this to Jhanvi and intends to portray the lyrics towards Surya from Jhanvi's side. She nudges them, dances and jokes around.

Mera mann jabse rach hai sawariya tere rang
Tab se hai jaane ye kaisi umang
Bajta hai jaise ki mann ka morchang (musical instrument)
Ab toh nis-din raag hai naya
Har pal har chhin rag hai naya
Mann aangan mein goonjti hai sargam
Tulsi kyaare rang rang hai
Sab galiyare rang rang hai
Chowk chobare rangta hai mausam

Dheere dheere pawan
Ye dheere dheere chale
Teri bansi kanha ri bhonkni
Jisme ye jeeya jal mare
Kare kya
Jabse hua hai tu mere sang sang
Uthti seene mein reh reh ke tarang
Bajta hai jaise ki mann ka morchang

From here on Diya remembers Shaurya. Tears stream down her eyes singing this. She hinds behind a pillar, leans on it and remembers her Shaurya so much. She runs upstairs and cries in her own little corner.

Ab toh nis-din dooriyaan kate
Har pal har chhin faasla ghate
Tumse alag reh payenge naa ab hum (ab hum)
Tulsi kyaare raah dekhte
Sab galiyare raah dekhte
Chowk chobare hoga apna sangam [x3 times]

Jhanvi realises that Diya does not have the support of her husband. She does not have her love with her. Then Jhanvi realises how important it is to have someone in her life. How lucky she is to have Surya by her side. She realises that she should not think about the dangers that lie ahead, she should live her life to the fullest now. Ammaji goes and cheers Diya up and says to not cry at her sisters engagement. Diya cheers up and goes down. Diya sees Jhanvi smiling, not forcefully, happily. Surya notices this too. He is very happy. They have a very happy engagement now that Jhanvi is cheered up. Everyone congratulates them. Rana is not happy nor are his followers. Surya, Jhanvi and family return home.

Surya and Jhanvi are alone in the room. Surya does not approach Jhanvi as he is still uncertain about whether Jhanvi was faking it at the mandir or whether she is really happy. Jhanvi takes of her jewellry. Jhanvi can't get her necklace off. She can't see the hook of it at the back. Surya notices this. He goes to Jhanvi and helps her take it off. As soon as it is done he turns to leave. Jhanvi grabs his hand and bursts into a hug. Jhanvi cries and cries and cries.

Jhanvi: Surya, mujhey maaf kardo, main dargayi thii...mujhey ahesaas nahi hooa ki main tumsey kithna pyaar karthi hoon...,mujey maaf kardo...please...

Surya strokes Jhanvi's hair. He is so happy to have her back. He hugs her tighter and tighter and he feels that nobody, no matter what can separate them now. He loves her and she loves him, nobody will break their relationship, no matter what happens. Surya separates Jhanvi from his arms and leans forward to kiss her. Nothing comes in between them. They are one soul.

It is another three days until the marriage after the rituals of mehendi, sangeet and haldi. Surya and Jhanvi are both very happy...however, Rana is not. He can do anything to break the marriage...anything at all and he will go to his fullest to do so...

Hope you all enjoyed it :) Next part will come soon :) Please tell me how it is so far. This is my first time doing something like this so I am very sorry for any mistakes :) Sorry for any mistakes :)

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Posted: 13 years ago

haaye mein mar jawa

love love and just love the FF...wow u r superb

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Posted: 13 years ago

very very nice ff preeti realy u r a good writer. i wish aisa ho.

and also i wish after jaya's re-marriage they think about dia. please continue.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Fantabulous...please continue JaYa Love Story and Diya on the side too. Not sure though with whom you will pair Diya. is it Shaurya or the Police Inspector?

I am sure if the creatives follow your path (JaYa and Diya stories), TRPs will go up. People get tired of watching negative things happening in Veerpur all the time. Specially Rana's role is becoming too dark. They should make him lie low now. Perhaps Ammaji can take a little break.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Very lovely-shovlie dear!❤️❤️❤️'d both parts!!!Certainly hoping for a scene like this tomorrow.😍

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Hi all. My greatest appreciations for your constructive feedback and I am glad everyone is enjoying the FF. This is just a small update as I am a bit busy currently but I will update the next part of the FF later today :)

PLEASE NOTE: These updates are entirely a work of fiction. Any resemblance to people (living/passed away) are totally coincidental. These updates are not meant to offend anyone and are just a creative way of expressing thoughts and ideas.

Today is the ritual of mehndi and sangeet and Rana's haweli. Ammaji and family are there. Diya notices that here is no longer a misunderstanding between Jhanvi and Surya that all is well. Diya performs once again to the song Mera Dil, Dil Mera; Ishq Main, Ab Tera Hogaya. Vikram and Param are constantly staring at her and they cannot take their eyes off of her. Diya notices this and feels quite uncomfortable. After finishing her performance she escapes the eyes of Vikram and Param and goes to her sister and her jigu.

Everyone is very happy. Surya is having mehndi applied to his feet and Jhanvi to her hands and feet with the name Surya written on her palm.

Surya holds Jhanvi's hands in his for a while and looks at his name on her palm. The couple smile at each other in an extremely lovable way. They have a sense of belonging and trust between them. Everyone is very happy; except for Rana. He is still considering ways to separate Surya and Jhanvi. The ritual of mehndi is nearly over. Rana is desperately keen on doing something and then he comes up with an idea'an idea that will ruin the day for Jhanvi'

To find out what Rana is up to...keep reading the FF.

I am once again sorry that the update is very short. Just thought I should continue on for those who are curious to know what will happen next. I will update the next part later today :) Thank you for your cooperation and my sincere apologies for any mistakes.

Edited by heeyyyy - 13 years ago

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Hi guys. As promised I am continuing on from my short update. Enjoy :)

Rana: Satpal...idhar aa

Satpal: Ji hukum

Rana takes something out of his pocket.It is a small container filled with liquid (Drug which causes dizziness)

Rana: Issey ja ke barfi me miladey aur sidha uss nagin ke haath me de aa

Satpal: Rana hazuur? Nagin?

Rana: Bhudia Bhagwani ki pothi, aur kan? Kayse kayse janwaro ko kaam me lagaya rakha hai maine? Itni si bhi baath samajha nahi aathi tujhey?

Satpal: Ji Rana hazuur par aaj tho mehndi-

Rana: Jitna kahajya utna hi kar. Ab tu mujhey sikhayega kya sahi kya galath. Aakhir me jo Rana chaheyga vahi hoga. Ja kar.

Satpal goes and mixes the liquid in the container with the mithayi. Mehndi's rasm has just finished.

Ammaji: Sab itney sehmey sehmey kyu bathey vey hai? Mithayi khilao inn dono ko. Diya, la mithayi.

Diya goes and gets the barfi. She feeds it to Jhanvi. She offers her hand out for Surya to eat it.

Diya: Khalijye jiga gi, kehethey hai ki jhoota khaaney se pyaar bhartha hai! ;)

As soon as Surya is about to eat it Rana distracts everyone saying that they are nor married as yet so the will not eat from the same dish. Rana says that this is an important ritual of their family. Everyone is confused. Meanwhile Jhanvi is beginning to feel extremely dizzy.

Jhanvi: Surya...Su-su-r--su--r-y-a-a? Su--r--y-a-a?

Surya holds Jhanvi's shoulders.

Surya: Jhanvi, kya hooa? Jhanvi?

Jhanvi is gradually placing her hands wet from mehndi onto Diya's hand for support. Rana's plan is working. Once Jhanvi places her hands on Diya's her mehndi will smudge. Satpal and Shera are pleased with Rana's idea. Jhanvi places her hand on Diya's and is just about to squeeze it...

Diya: Jhanvi! Jhanvi...tumhari mehndi! Jhanvi hosh mein aou...Jhanvi? Mehndi...Jhanvi

Jhanvi lies unconscious onto Surya's lap. Her mehndi is still alright thanks to Diya's warning. Surya thanks Diya for this. Jhanvi has been laid down in her and Surya's room. The villager's dai comes and checks on her. She says its nothing major. She will just need rest. A tear from Surya's eyes pours on to Jhanvi's face and Jhanvi slowly wakes up. Surya is so delighted that without seeing who is there and who's not he leans forward to kiss Jhanvi's forehead. Jhanvi is embarrassed. She is expecting Diya to tease her so she hides her face. But Jhanvi does not hear Diya's voice. She turns her face up to search for Diya around the room but she is not there. All of Rana's family is there, all of Ammaji's family are there (except Diya)...So where is Diya?

Surya: Jhanvi, kya hua, kya sochri ho?

Jhanvi: Ammaji, Diya...Diya kaha hai?

Everyone turns around expecting to find Diya in the room but she is no where to be seen. No one has a clue where she is. They try to remember seeing her last and they memorise that she had given Jhanvi the mithayi...

Rana takes advantage of the situation and tries to blame Diya for all of the previous dramas.

Rana: Dekh bhudiya...teri sakhi pothi...apni hi behen ki mehndi ujjaar di...apni behen ko koy bhala zeher valley mithayi khilaatha hai?

Everyone is shocked.

Jhanvi: Rana, apney bas mein raho...meri behen ke khilaaf kuch keheney ke peheley soch liya karo. Kya sabooth hai tumharey paas ki-

Rana: Chori, sabooth tho therey akho ke samney khadi hai. Jayse hi tumney mithayi khai, sabka dhyaan bhatak gayi...bas chori chup gayi...ussey patha thha ki kissi na kissi ko usskey upar shak hoga, aakhir yeh bathimeez harkath tho ussi ney ki hai, buss, vo apney aapa ko chupaali samaaj se ki ussey panchayath la lejaya pai. Panchayat mein to ussey kari si kari saza milthi na issiliye -

Ammaji: Rana Rantej, band kar apni bakwaas. Dusro ko doshi teheraaney ke peheley tu soch ki tu kaysa insaan hai. Meri pothi aysa kabhi nahi karsakthi.

Rana: Yahi tho thera kaam hai bhudia. Har baar mujhey galath saabith karney chaathi hai tu. Theek hai...agar teri vo pothi ney ye sab nahi kiya tho vo gayab kayse hogayi? Hai koy aur vaja? Achanak kyu gum hogayi vo agar ussney hi zeher nahi milaayatha tho? Kyu?

Everyone is silent, no one has a response, not even Ammaji.

Where is Diya? And how is Diya being missing related to Jhanvi and Surya? To find out keep reading the FF :)

My sincere apologies for any minor/major/grammatical errors. I know this part wasn't much about JaYa however, the story will eventually lead itself into the JaYa story again as it is all related. Hope you all enjoyed it. Please leave behind any thoughts, suggestions or comments. Thanks.

Edited by heeyyyy - 13 years ago

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